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                                           U, ME,AUR...?

                                                                 PART 61

Hai friends,

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Geet was sitting in the living room..kala was talking to her..but she was staring the wall..

Kala:thank god chotu..u came..for past 1 hr..i'm talking to her..but she is not answering me..

She said worriedly..n maan got scared hearing it.He sat next to geet..



Maan:geet'he shook her..

Geet :hmmm..

Maan:where r u lost?

Geet :hmm..

She was like a zombie..

Maan hugged her sideways..feeling his warmth,she came out of her trance..

Maan: princess..what r u thinking.

Geet: haan..nothing..yuhi..

Kala :chotu,she is responding or answering u only..ok..i'm going to KM..i'll bring ur breakfast here..

Maan :ok

Kala went n adi came..adi wished both maneet..

Geet was like  a deaf that she did not hear him.she did not even notice him until he came n stood between her n wall that she was staring..

Adi:how r u mam.

Geet looked at him questioningly..

Maan:answer him geet.u know him.

Geet:hmm..but she searched for the words..nor she could say she is fine..or she could say she is will be only a lie,which she will never say..

Adi was shocked to see the change in her..her eyes were blank'surrounded by black...he remembered maneets marriage n how she used to run around him calling 'adi bhai'.his heart was wrenching in pain.

Maan:leave her adi..she talks less..

Adi:hmm..i can understand her pain..dont worry sir,she will be fine soon..

Maan got back to his bossy tone.


Adi: yes sir..

Maan:this file is ready..u can submit the tender..

Adi :ok sir

Maan: dont open the seal of quotation papers n be careful till u submit..take gaurds with u..

Adi :yes sir.

Adi went to office.maan spent time with geet.later dadis joined them also..they had their breakfast..maan had to struggle forcing her taking medicines.few hrs later after lunch..dadi ENTERED their room n whispered something..he nodded in yes.

Maan:geet.,come lets go down.

Geet: why.

Maan:come with me I'll say.

He took her down.dr.was waiting for them.her first councelling.dr.asked all to leave.but,geet held maans wrist tightly.she was scared to be alone.dr.accepted him to be with her.

Dr:if she feels secured with u around,then its ok.that will make her relieve from the fear soon.u can be with her''mrs.khurana..u will listen to me carefully.


Dr. started to explain the positives of fire n its uses..n slowly said her the negatives'fire accidents happens at careless..n so on..geet sticked like a glue to maan. he could feel her shiver in his body..he comforted her by caressing her back..she will look at him in fear.he will say through his eyes he is there for her. then dr.lighted a lighter before her for a fraction of second. she started to scream aag..aag..maan held her tightly .so,she may not run like she did in hospital.she digged her nails in him leaving marks in his hands.

Dr: where is it?

She saw the surrounding in fear.

Dr:there is no fire.u r dreaming.

Geet left the breathe she was holding from when she saw the fire. maan made her drink water.

Maan:how do u feel now..

She just hugged him tightly. maan looked at dr. dr.asked him to leave her in her room n come.daadi n kala stayed with geet..b.dadi started to say a story to comfort geet.

Maam:dr.whats the result of todays councelling?

Dr: nice improvement..she just screamed for a min..then she shows her progress.u can also try it.whenever u have time.but only for  a second..not more than it..slowly she will face the fire..did she sleep last night?

Maan:yes dr.but in middle she murmered about her parents in sleep.

Dr: it need to worry..continue the medicines. n sleeping pills will give her the rest ,her body needs..keep her happy n distracted from previous memories. she will recover soon..

Maan:thanks dr.

Dr.:ok I'll see her after two days..bye.

Dr.left..maan went to their room..he saw his b.dadi telling her a new story..he took his lappy n sat opposite to her n started to work.he knows if he is not before her eyes she will get scared like yesterday..

He did few calls to office to know about the whereabouts happening there.Adi said he has submitted the quotation n he is in another site supervising the project work.maan sighed in relief.

Dadi:what happened everything ok.

Maan: yes dadi. All are going well..Adi has submitted the quotation.just waiting for tomorrow..i'm sure this project will be 100% ours.

Dadi: I know..u will get it.

It was night.7 pm.

Maan:princess..shall we go around for a walk.



Maan n geet took the entry of kps back door.they started to walk .maan was holding geet by her waist n she was leaning on him for support n walking.after few days,she is inhaling the fresh air..the green lawn reminded her village atmosphere.she felt a little comfortable.the servants n the securities were surprised..most of them don't know about their marriage.but geets symbols of marriage n the protective hold of maan said they are married..maan was making a tour of the backyard .he explained every details about the house.,servants quarters n outhouse.

Geets eyes fell on the swing..maan saw her seeing the swing ..he took her n made her sit .he sat beside her. n made the swing move front n is his favorite place too..his mother use to make him sleep in the swing. n whenever he remembers his mother or if he is in problem,he will use to come here. today he is with his wife..geet started to cry..

Man:kya hua princess.?

Geet:Vicky ki yaad aagayi..he always sits with me in swing..we use to f8 with each other for using the swing alone.mama hamesha hamari ladayi khatam karne ki koshish karthi thi.

Maan:shhh..geet..dont cry..

She hugged him n started to pour her heart out..her every moments with Vicky.n parents n .their bond..

maan made her head lay on his laps. geet was looking at him with teary eyes...she cant understand what he is thinking or going through. u know about stars..


Maan:stars are believed to be the souls who left this family is also there..n  ur family is also there..they will be watching us..ur cry will make them hate me. that I could not take care of their gudia rani...

Geet:no..u r gud. U said me not to cry na..ok..i'll not cry..

she whipped her tears...

geet: they will not hate u..they made me urs..mama always says obey ur hubbys words..i don't want them to hate u..i'll not cry again..for u..i'll not cry..

maan:that's like a gud girl. I hate tears in ur eyes.

It was nearly 8pm..n where they were seated was pitch dark..vicky was watching them from his balcony..he wanted to see how his bhabhi looks..but it was too dark so he could not see her..he returned to his room in disappointment..

Maneet  were returning to kp.

Geet:prince,this is our balcony'whose house is that..

Maan was not able to answer her..

Maan:its khurana mansion..dadi lives there..

Geet:dadi doesn't live with us..hai kya..why..

How will I answer her questions,which she cant understand. u had a separate room in ur house..dadi lives in a seperate house..


She did not ask more..she was convinced with his answer.

maan made geet eat her dinner n as usual shoved the medicine in her mouth n made her  rest on bed..she moved to his lap.he caressed her hair.she drifted to sleep.

Maan saw the was 9.15pm..he got a call from adi.. c..c  come to Kc..

His voice was in tension.

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Edited by valli22 - 12 January 2012 at 8:30am

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Nice update..
luvd the part where the Dr s slowly making her overcum her fear..
Luvd the way maan made her understand the situations..

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nice parts
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great parts
plz continue soon

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