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Shanak FF Pehla Nasha Part8 page15-17th July (Page 8)

janavi07 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
its fine go ahead,we all of u want our shaan and khanak together.no matter char...is diff i like this shaan also
please update...

IF_rida Goldie

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 4:53am | IP Logged
its in fact  nice to see shaan in a diff avatar

naughty ho ya sober shaan hai na kafi hai Wink
shonai Senior Member

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
we love Shaan...we ll always accept him in different characterBig smile
update soonDay Dreaming
RB81 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by payalmehra


Dear friends,

In my story Shaan is quite different from RBO, he is not the naughty flirt type but a good cute decent boy. I know you all like naughty Shaan, the story in my mind is different. So do tell me whether you are ready to accept this Shaan or not. He is not the flirt but obviously cute.


P.S: Next update tonite or tomorrow morningBig smile

hai payal,
here u can come across matured readers..so dont bother abt that..n yep we have come across a more responsible shaan in other FFs too unlike our shaan in RBO(i think u haven't other FFs in this forum) n we just adore him..watever u portray u do ur best n we'll do our best in imagining shaan that way..so no need to worry abt that..u bring it on girl..
HarshIkaZaYa Senior Member

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Payal we jus need shan nd khanak together...so no worries v al accept shan in any avatar...Plz update soon...
sharon18 Goldie

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Its fine Payal go aheadBig smile
payalmehra Groupbie

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Thank you friends for your support and loveHug
Then I will continue my storyBig smile
Love you allHug


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payalmehra Groupbie

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged

Thank you friends very very much for accepting this ShaanHug

Part 3

It was the beginning of a new year. Every one hoping that this year will be best for them.Big smile


Shaan was almost the first student to enter the college (he is really goodLOL). When he entered no body was there, he looked around. His eyes stopped at the place were for the first time he fought with Khanak. He started smiling. He started walking; he kept remembering all the fights with Khanak.Embarrassed


Khanak was almost the last student to enter the college (she is really sweetLOL). But she has to attend this class, it is very important, and now she has to get good marks as well.Ouch She hurried to her class room, and bumped into a girl and both of them fell down.ROFL


The girl: kyon dekhke nahi chal sakti?


Khanak gave no answer because her eyes were fixed into Shaan who was teaching something to a junior student.Embarrassed


One of Khanak's friends took her hand and pulled her. "tujhe class nahi karni?" Khanak got up and ran to the class room. The girl who fell down were still on the floor, she was totally irritated. AngryLOL


Khanak came to the door but all the students were waiting outside as the earlier class was still going on, she was relieved "uff aj der nahi hui".Smile


When the class finished, students of the earlier class were coming out and students of the next class were going in . Khanak was about to get in, but somebody grabbed her bag and pulled her out of the class.Shocked


Khanak: kya ho raha hai yeh?Angry


Suddenly she saw it was Shaan. Her anger vanished into the air.Smile


Khanak: tum? Shockedtum yahan kya kar raho ho?Smile


Shaan: chalo mere saath.


Khanak: kahan?


Shaan: tum chalo to


Khanak: dekho please mujhe chhor do, Tripathi Sir abhi ajayenge aur mere liye yeh class attend karna bohut zaroori hai.Stern Smile


Shaan: Tripathi? are unke saare notes mere paas hai, main tumhe parha dunga. ab chalo.


Khanak didn't say anything but pleaded him with her facial expressions. (You can imagine how cute Khanak was looking)Tongue


Shaan: tumhe kab se parhai mein man a gaya? tum chalo. and he dragged her to  the corridor.


Khanak: thik hai, ab batao kahan jana hai


Shaan: wohi slum mein, jahan tum jati ho, mujhe tumahre dosto se dosti karni hai.Tongue


Khanak: achanak? Tum jao na, tumhe kaun rok ke rakha hai, mujhe class karne do.AngryDisapprove


Shaan: main akela nahi  ja sakta, mere body guards ke problem hai you knowOuch, tum zaroor koi dusra rasta janti ho is college se nikal ne ke liyeWink. Abhi mere body guards yeh sochte honge ke main class kar raha hun, aur isi beech hum dono wahan se ghumkar a jayenge.Wink He started smiling(his cute naughty smile).LOL


Khanak: tum sachmuch mein jitney achche dikhte ho utne ho nahiWink


Shaan was delighted.Big smile To tum chal rahi ho na mere saath?


Khanak: OK


To get out of the college first they had to climb up a tree, then they had to cross the college wall and finally they had to come down with the help of another tree.LOL


They took an auto rickshaw to get there.


Khanak called all her friends. They were delighted to see Khanak. Khanak introduced them one by one to Shaan. Shaan said "hello" to them.


Khanak: ye hai Shaan, mera dost, yeh larka apne aap ko bohut achhcha sochta hai, ab tum log decide karo yeh achcha hai ya nahi.LOL


Before Shaan could do anything the head of the sweet cute gang just pulled him to the place where they use to play street games.Tongue


Bholu (the head): chalo khelo hamare saath. Piku, Mahu, Jhupi ready ho jao.Cool

They started playing a game which Shaan never played; even he never heard the name. LOL

He tried a lot but couldn't play it. All the kids started laughing. Shaan was a bit embarrassed but hid it and he laughed even more than the others.LOL


He asked the kids to teach him the game. Shaan started learning the game, and he started improving. Smile

Khanak just kept watching, she felt that Shaan is too cute.Tongue She thought "iski burai karoo to kaise? Lagta hi nahi ke aj hi yeh in bachchose pehlibar mil raha hai."Smile


Khanak: are dosto, dekha tum sab, is Shaan ek chhotasa game bhi nahi khel sakta

The kids: Ha di, yeh to ekdam buddhu haiROFL (Burthal in RBO languageLOL)


And they all started laughing again.ROFL


Shaan: are dosto ab Khanak ki bari. Yeh bhi apne aap ko bohot achchi sochti hai, tum log bata do key eh kitni buri haiLOL


The kids started telling him about their Khanak Didi. They started praising her in their own cute way. For example:


"Di bilkul bhi buri nahi hai, tumhe pata hai ekbar barish ki time mein humlog jab kagaz ki nao lekar khel rahe the, mera nao dub gaya, Di ne usi waqt mujhe dusra banadi", Smile


"Di ne ekbar mujhe drain se ek machhli pakarke gift kii thi" Smile


"Di ko bhi meri tarah golgappe ache lagte hai"Smile


"Di bhi meri tarah bhooton se darti hai" etc. LOL


Shaan asked the question intentionally, he knew that the kids will always tell good things about Khanak.WinkEmbarrassedBig smile


Khanak was totally surprised, she loved to play with the kids but she never knew that she brought such sweet happiness to their lives. She never knew that the kids love her so much.Big smile


Khanak felt out of the world.Big smile She was too happy. Shaan was even happier than Khanak. They kept looking at each other. They just can't stop smiling.EmbarrassedBig smile


Suddenly one of the kids noticed Shaan's mobile. He asked: Shaan bhaiya, apke mobile mein gana bajta hai kya?


Shaan: ha kyun nahi? Sunoge tumlog?


He opened the song "bum bum bole masti mein dole"from the movie Tare Zameen Par.


All the kids started dancing to the tune, Shaan and Khanak also joined them.Big smile


But there was one problem, it was a open place so the volume was really low, and as the kids were shouting as well, they were not able to hear the song. So soon they stopped dancing.Disapprove


But a very cute thing happened. There was wedding of a person in that area and the baratis were ready to leave for the wedding, so the bandwalas started playing music.Big smile


It was a wonderful gift for the kids and Shanak, and they started dancing again.Big smile


After ten minutes Shaan and Khanak had to leave as they were getting late. They waved good bye to the kids. The kids asked Shaan to come again. They want him to learn all the games they know.LOL


Shaan and Khanak were coming back to the college by auto rickshaw. They were not talking. Both of them were so happy that they couldn't think what they could say. They kept exchanging glances, and when their eyes met they started smiling again.EmbarrassedBig smile

After some time:

Khanak: you too love kids? mujhe nahi pata thaSmile

Shaan: kyun, don't you know? mujhe laga tum janti ho

Khanak: kyun?

Shaan thought "because I like you for your kid like actions" but he said "nahi, waise hi"


Shaan: ek gana sunogi? Aj mujhe bohot yaad a raha hai yeh gana.


He put one part of the mobile head phone into Khanak's ear and the other part in his ear and opened the song. It was the song "Tare Zameen Par"


Taare Zameen Par - Title Song

"Dekho inhein yeh hai onss ki boodein
Patto ki goodh mein aasamaan se khude
Angdai le phir karwat badal kar
Nazuk se moti hasde phishal kar
Kho na jayee yeh
Taare Zameen par"

The song kept playing. As the song ended, there were tears in Khanak's eyes.


Shaan gave her a cute side hugBig smile


Khanak: Shaan, main sirf khelti hun un bachcho se, I don't do anything for them. I don't help them with good clothes, good food, I don't tell them to be literate. I don't do anything good for them.Cry


Shaan: you know something, yeh kapde dena, khana dena, inlogoko parhai lokhai sikhana, in sab ke liye bohot sare log hai is dunia mein, lekin jo tum karti ho bohot kam log karta hai.

tum unlogo ki achcha insaan banati ho, intentionally nahi lekin tum in bachchoki innocence ko barkarar rakhne mein help karti ho. Smile

You know these slum kids become matured very fast, they lose their innocence very fast. Aur yahi baat in bachchoki life mein se khushiya chhin leti hai.Ouch

Aur tum rok rahi ho in bachchoko ko matured banne se. Big smile

I don't know whether tum samajh rahi ho ke main kya bolna chahta hun.

Khanak understood what he was telling. She started smiling again.Big smile

Edited by payalmehra - 17 December 2011 at 11:12am

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