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Shanak FF Pehla Nasha Part8 page15-17th July (Page 4)

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged

Note: I am changing Khanak's Big bro's name to Dakshish aka Ducks

Dakshish aka Ducks:

Hobby: body building

Love: Loves his sis the most, looking for a perfect life partner


Part 2


That day was very important for Shaan and Khanak. No, not because they stopped hating each other but they got very important news.

Ducks called Khanak to inform that she got an internship in a wild life photography magazine. Khanak had sent some photographs which she took when she went to Gir forest last year with her friends. She never expected that she will get it. Khanak was very excited.Tongue

Shaan got the message from his mother that he has not qualified for the entrance exam of the best college in India. His father was really upset. But he was very happy.  He wanted a simple life, not controlled by his father.

Next day, everyone was just roaming about Manali. It was winter time, so the small town was covered by snow. It looked very beautiful.

Shaan and Khanak, though they were with their friends, kept on glancing at each other. When their eyes met they gave a cute smile.Smile

After some times, Khanak left her friends and started roaming alone in search of birds and animals, she wanted to take some photographs. She came to a beautiful place, full of fern trees covered with snow. She started taking pics of that heavenly place. Suddenly she noticed a very beautiful bird, she started taking pics. Suddenly she was hit by something and she dropped her camera.


Khanak: Guddu, teri to main' she stopped. No it was not her friend Guddu but it was Shaan.Big smile


Khanak picked up the camera and said "tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? tumhare body guards kahan hai? aur tum mujhpe yeh barf kyon throw kar rahe ho?"


Shaan: bapre bap itne saare sawal!! LOLMain apne body guards se bag kar Manali ghum raha tha (and before Khanak says something he continued) tumhe dekha to idhar chala aya, aur tum itna concentrate karke photo khich rahi thi ki tumhe disturb karne ke liye apne apko rok nahi paya.LOL (he said all in one breath)


Khanak wanted to say many things but only thing she said was: kya!!ShockedAngry


Shaan: waise tum idhar akela photo kyuon kichh rahi ho?


Khanak told him about the photography internship.


Shaan: wow!! Big smilethat's a great news. To ek aur cheesh hai jisme tum achchi ho.Wink


Khanak (with a happy face) : Ek aur matlab? What's the first one?Embarrassed


Shaan: kyun? Tumhari aankhein, bachcho ki tarah innocent, bataya to tha maine.Tongue


Khanak gave a happier smile.Big smile


Shaan: waise, mujhe bhi aj ek bohut khushi ki news mili hai.Big smile


Khanak: kya?


Shaan: aj GATE ka result out hua hai aur main usme qualify nahi kar sakaBig smile


Khanak: yeh khushi ki news hai kya?Confused


Shaan: mere liye hai, papa chahte hai main IIT mein MTech join karlu lekin main aur parna nahi chahta, main job karna chahta hun.


Khanak: O. lekin tum GATE qualify kar nahi pae yeh mujhe vishwas nahi ho rahaConfused, tum ne kia kya?(she knows he is very good in studies)


Shaan: kyun?


Khanak: kya tumne apni marzi se kharap exam dia ya tumhara exam sachmuch kharap hua? Waise dono condition i yehi proof karta hai ke tum achche nahi ho. and she started smiling, she loves the fact that this boy doesn't want to be a good boy.LOL


Shaan was actually thinking which condition actually happened,ConfusedLOL and then suddenly he noticed Khanak was giving a naughty smile.


Shaan: tum has kyon rahi ho? he was serious.LOL


Khanak: pata hai, main na pehle tumhare bare me sochti thi aur mujhe bohut hasi a jati thiLOL


Shaan: kyon? main joker hun kya?Angry BTW tum mere bare me kyon sochti thi?Wink


Khanak understood she should not have told this, she wandered, "are sachmuch main din me bohut time Shaan ke bare me hi sochti thiEmbarrassed"


Khanak: actually tum jab mujhse jhagarte jhagarte ruth jate the to bohut funny lagte the aur yeh soch soch ke mujhe hasi a jati thiLOL


Shaan: waise, main bhi tumhare bare mein soch ta tha, jab bhi main kuchh garbar dekhta tha mujhe tum yaad a jati thi.LOL


Khanak: to main aur "garbar" ek hi chees hun kya?Angry


Shaan (started smiling) : HaLOL


Khanak: chalo dikhati hun main tumhe.AngryLOL


She started throwing snowballs to Shaan. Soon they started fighting. No this time they were not angry, this time they were laughing just like naughty kids.Tongue


Suddenly they had to stop as Shaan's body guards came. They were looking for him, and they were quite worried.


One of the body guards: Sir, aap yahan.Ouch Aap jante hai humlog kitne tensed ho gaye the.Angry Har jagah apko dhund rahe the. Aur kuchh der tak aap nahi milte to hum e apke papa ko inform karna parta tha. Aap jante nahi yeh jagah aapke liye safe nahi hai? aapke liye koi bhi jagah safe nahi hai. aur aap ek larki ke saath akele? Aap jante hai yeh aur bhi risky hai? chaliye ab hotel wapas chaliye.Angry (The body guard was actually very tensed, he couldn't understand that he was very harsh to Shaan).Ouch


Shaan was literally shockedOuch, he never expected this. He was enjoying a lot. He never felt that he was not safe. He was very much embarrassed.Ouch


Shaan: I am sorry, I am coming.Ouch


Khanak felt too bad for Shaan. She wanted to help him. She took his hand in her hand and pressed it (which means, "don't worry, I am with you").Smile


Shaan started walking towards the hotel. He was really sad.Cry


Next day everyone went for a sight seeing tour. Every body was enjoying a lot. Shaan was also enjoying with his friends but he was still upset, he was hiding his feelings. Khanak were with her friends but she understood that Shaan was still not ok. She came to Shaan.


Khanak: So, what's up?


Shaan: nothing, enjoying a lot. He tried to smile.


Khanak: kal jo bhi hua hai bhul jao. Mujhe lagta hai tumhe kabhi kisi se daat nahi pari hai, hamesha thik kaam karte ho na isliye.LOL Mujhe bohut bar daat pari hai college ke profs se, mujha pata hai kaisa feel hota hai.Wink


Shaan was surprised to see that Khanak understood that he was not happy.


Khanak: are tum daat khane ke bare mein kyon soch rahe ho? tum kal bhag ke akele ghum rahe the, galat kam kar rahe the, tum bad boy ban rahe the, tum he to khush hona chahiyeLOL


Shaan (started smiling) : ha, iske bare me to maine socha hi nahiBig smile


Khanak thought "Yeh Shaan really cute hai". She took out her camera and started clicking.


Shaan: kya kar rahe ho? main wildlife ka koi janwar nahi hunAngryLOL


Khanak: wildlife ka nahi ho lekin domestic zaroor ho, puppy ki tarahLOL


Shaan showed fake anger and tried to snatch the camera from Khanak. They were smiling like kids again.Tongue


All Khanak's and Shaan's friends were perplexed Shocked"yeh log marpit nahi kar rahe hai!! yeh dono to has rahe hai!!"Confused


The rest of the days they enjoyed a lot. Shaan and Khanak were with their friends but whenever they got time they chatted with each other.


After they came back to Mumbai, they had a one week holiday, because it was Christmas time.


In Khanak's house:


Khanak was standing in the balcony and she was smiling, nobody else was with her. Ducks came and saw that Khanak was smiling.


Ducks: phirse Shaan ke bare mein soch rahi ho? phirse marpit hua kya? aur uske angry chehra yaad kar ke tumhe hasi a rahi hai?LOL


Khanak suddenly realized that she was thinking about Shaan and smiling, not remembering his angry face but remembering his cute smile.Embarrassed


Ducks: sis, are you OK?


Khanak: ha, Shaan ke bare mein soch kar hi hasi a rahi thi


Ducks: phirse panga hua kya?LOL


Khanak: ha, ek chhoti si larai


Ducks: good, aisa hi continue karti jao.LOL

He felt its funny, his sis becomes happy after fighting with somebodySmile


Khanak couldn't understand why she lied to Ducks, she only gave a smile.


Ducks: By the way jo baat main bolne ke liye aya tha. "Indian Wildlife" mein internship to karogi lekin certificate ke liye college mein 1st class marks honi chahiye. I have read the offer letter.


Khanak: kya?Shocked lekin kyon?Disapprove Photography aur parhai mein kya relation hai?Angry


Ducks: bhul mat jao ke "Indian Wildlife" is a famous magazine. Ab bahana chhoro aur parhai karo.Wink


Khanak: oh ho, she was really pissed off.





In Shaan's house:


In the kitchen Shaan's mother was preparing lunch. Shaan came and stood beside her. She took a pakora and gave him to taste. He was still standing not speaking a single word.


Shaan's mother: Shaan, kya tu mujhe kuchh bolna chahta hai?


Shaan: ya.-----Ma---kya tum papa ko bol sakte ho mere pichhe se yeh body guards ke line hatane ke liye?Smile


Ma: kyon? tu janta hai wo nahi manenge.


Shaan: agar tum bataogi to shayad man jaye.


Ma: lekin achanak hua kya? itne din tak to sab kuchh thik tha.Shocked


Shaan: actually Ma----isbar excursion me main meri ek dost ke saath pahari mein ghum raha tha, achanak mere body guards ake mujhe bohut daata. Mujhe bohut bura laga.Disapprove


Ma (suspiciousWink): tum aur tumhari dost, konsi dost?


Shaan: Khanak, meri class mate nahi, junior.


Ma: pehle to kabhi yeh naam nahi suna. Dikhti kaisi hai? (you should have understood why she was asking this, ma ka dil, sab ma e ek hi hoti haiLOL)


Shaan: Dikhne mein to normal hi hai, bilkul tom boy jaisi hai, marpit karna aur hasna uska regular kaam haiSmile, lekin uski aankhein bilkul bachcho ki tarah innocent hai.Smile...aur smile bhi bachcho ki tarah (he bacame thora dreamy and didn't notice its her "aur ek achchi baat")Wink


( I was thinking about Rahul (SRK) describing Anjali (Kajol) in KKHH to his mother and daughter, when I was writing thisSmile)


Ma: Aisi larki? tumhare papa aisi larki ko is ghar ki bahu kabhi nahi ban ne denge.ShockedLOL


Shaan: kyon nahi denge?


Then he suddenly realized what his mother said.Embarrassed


Shaan:  kya?Shocked is ghar ki bahu?Shocked Ma, main mere body guards ki baat kar raha hun aur tum meri shaadi ki baat kar rahe ho?ShockedEmbarrassed


Ma: body guards ho ya yeh larki se shaadi, tumhare papa kuchh bhi nahi manenge. OuchLOL


She took a bowl in her hand and went out of the kitchen.


Shaan: kahan mere body guards aur kahan Khanak, yeh Ma bhi na.Ermm




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shonai Senior Member

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged
just caught up with ur story
m PriyashreeSmile
first of all, a very warm welcome in this forum
so, u changed the name 'Viren' to 'Shaan'...thats good, cz we r very much possessive about our ShaNak

m loving this tom boy Khanak( she reminds me of Anjali in KKHH)
this is a very good start...at first they hate each other & now, they have become good friends ...Wink..Smile

Shaan's mom directly asked him about Khanak & started talking about their marriageWink ... she is very sweetSmile
continue soonSmile

u were thinking about Rahul describing Anjali while writing the part...& after reading it i also started thinking about the scene...Wink

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged

i jus loved the last line! ROFL all mothers are the same! look from where to where she changed the topic! 

and Shanak ...*sigh* 

and i think shaan is gonna help khanak with her studies so that she gets the internship ...right?! 

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by janavi07

Originally posted by payalmehra

janavi07: thanksSmile I loved Shanak meeting scene, cute Khanak and her mithaiSmile

@sharon18: thanksSmile, OK next part only ShanakSmile

just go ahed till shanak 35.after 35 scene ...to shanak 636 u cant move your sit.,i am sure...

OK, will doBig smile I have already seen many scenes, Khanak is very cute Smile
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _sweetshona_

Nice story..plz cont..

thanks SonalSmile
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Simple-

Hey ! Its a very interesting concept :). Its nice to see new members come and post stories on ShaNak or in your case YashaRan but as you can tell were possessive about our ShaNak :P but interesting start ! Keep it up :)

Thanks SimpleSmile I am very happy for the warm welcomeBig smile
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ONAego

Nyc starting payal n thanQ so much replace viren with shaan. We jst love our khanak n shantanu (shanak) lyk anythng...so everythng abt shanak/yasharan always welcome:) update next part soon!

thanksBig smile I am happy to know your love for Shanak, but if this Shaan is different from Shaan in RBO will you like it?
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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ktym

so sweet of u payal 4 repalcing viren vth shan...thanku so much dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank youSmile yes Shaan is your's favoriteSmile

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