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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged

sorry sweetheart..

was inactive n couldnt read the updates...

would read them n comment..

n also ur new ff as well...

sorry again...

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged
congo for completing 1 year 
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Posted: 24 April 2012 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
Hey Maitree!!!
You are doing a wonderful job so dont think so low of yourself. We totally love your work and I have been busy due to end of the semester and wasn't able to comment on your FF but that doesn't mean I am not coming back to read them. Just 3 more weeks and I will be back and read all your updates and also leave a LONGGG comment! :)
We all love you alot. :)

JEN <3
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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 3:12am | IP Logged
I may update this Sat, its my mom-dad's anniversary :) 

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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Maitree..

I may update this Sat, its my mom-dad's anniversary :) 

wowww
Will be waiting dearSmile
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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
You are such an amazing writer

can't wait for the update Smile
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Posted: 01 May 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Sorry for the late update guys, just couldn't find time...And I have got food poisoning again so yeah, that adds up. Here is a preview, I hope you all will like it Embarrassed WEEE 6th May is near EmbarrassedBig smile *whoopsi* LOLEnjoy the update!

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Preview to Part 18

"He's sinking."
"Please. No. You can't do this. You promised, you promised...", she muttered on, trying to ignore what she heard.  She felt lost, helpless, defeated, lifeless, all at the same time. The least she could do, was to press her ear to his chest, and hear maybe what was the last faint heartbeat.
 
"Please, we can't stop trying. His heart is beating.", her words were rushed and broken.
"It won't work, Riddhima.", came a tired, helpless reply, "You know its over."
"ITS NOT OVER! HIS HEART IS BEATING! ", she could feel her warm tears on her burning cheeks, her throat paining from the impact of the rough and sudden shout. "Once more please.."
 
A beep interrupted as she turned around rapidly to the machine to see a clear green line running through it, the loud sound piercing her ears.
"That..That..",she pointed and shook her head, wiping her eyes hurriedly with her elbow, "Its-just-not TRUE…Please, I-he-please!", she requested frantically again.
"Riddhima-"
"PLEASE! I swear he'll be okay! He promised me, PLEASE!"
"HE IS GODDAMIT DEAD RIDDHIMA! DEAD!"
 
That hit the nail at the point. She could feel her knees wobbling as she brought her hands to her hair. Her senses felt numb with shock as his body was carried out. Feeling something wet in her hands, she brought them in front of her face to see it dripping with blood, the same red blood colour that had stained her clothes.  Her vision was blurring, and finally when she heard a distant cry, she felt herself hitting the cold floor.
 
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Comment karo, bhaiyo, aur meri saari behenoLOL
Love,
Maitree <3

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