FF: The Most Important Thing [Part 1, Page 1] - Page 2

great start.loved your work.eagerly waiting for more.i do agree that both gopi n ahem need to have more time to set their relationship straight.

Welcome to the forum. Great start.do continue soon

wonderful strt
can u plz pm me aftr u post ur part 2

That was a lovely start ...i love the bonding tat u have created between the brother-brother and sister-sister ..Hope we can see something of this sort in the show too.i m really found of Jigar Ahem scenes...i agree with you ,Ahem and Gopi have a lot to sort out before they deeply fall in love.

welcome to  the  forum nice love it update soon 

Welcome to the forum!!!

greatt part..waiting to read more

What a fantastic update,loved it very very much,please continue soon and pm me if possible!😃

Welcome to the forum

This is the beginning of an amazing story, you have set the stage perfectly and your writing is very good. I hope that you update soon!