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Hey SSSPians-lets have sum masti(chk pg2 for OS) (Page 2)

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Mujhe bhi sochke likhna padega jaroor...
watch out Wink

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Posted: 16 December 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sen_madhuban

Originally posted by awesumsonia

sneha,vrindz- i was a person who loves reading stories FF/SS/OS etc...but i used to hate writing anything..but later on is started writing FF...so apne hidden talent ko jagao...start thinking...n post them...datz all..simple...



i agree...Big smile...Smile...Big smile..

after years of reading  ff/ss/os in India forums...rajpreet and d members of sssp forum encouraged me 2 finally write...

come on attempt it once...writing is as addictive as reading...

thx 2 u all i discovered it in me...

now ur turn...
Listen 2 ur heart...& trust ur friends here...


very well said madhu...Big smile

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 4:31am | IP Logged
well...let me...start off...
some of u all miht have read my rajpreet suhaagraat OS...so im gonna continue dat OS
 
so lemme 1st post dat OS once again
 

Preeto watching the moon,through the window.

Just then somebody holds on to her shoulder

She smiled'.she knew it was none other than the love of her life..RAJBEEREmbarrassed

She turns to rajbeer'.

She was about to say something'.But then rajpreet puts his finger on her lips

Rajbeer- preeto aaj tumhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hain!!tumhari dil  (keeping his hand on her chest) aaj mujhse baat karegi
Preeto- arrey waah .Mr.Patthar Singh Mr.filmy ho gaya!!!

Rajbeer- haan!!!yeh sab na  Mrs.Patthar singh ki kamaal hainSmile

Preeto smiles'.n she hugs rajbeer

 Preeto- pata hain rajbeer'jab bhi mein aapki baahoon mein hoti hoon..tab aisa lagta hain ki mujhe duniya saari khushiya mil gayi'.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Rajbeer- aur mujhe aisa lagta hain ki duniya ki sabse bhaari cheez mujhe par gir gayiLOLLOL'

Preeto (gets angry)- haan'???aap mujhe bhaari keh rahi hain!!!

Rajbeer- haan!!!

Preeto- acha'.she beats rajbeer many times

Rajbeer- preeto kya kar rahi ho'

Preeto- moti kahegi mujhe'.mujhe'.

Rajbeer- ahh'...dard ho raha hain yaar'.SORRY'.. SORRY'' SORRY

Hearing this,Preeto stops beating him

Preeto(pointing her finger)- dubaara aisa kehna mat

Rajbeer-sochungi bhi nahi baba

Both of them smile

Rajbeer lifts her in his arms'n takes her to the bed'.

Preeto lies down '.Rajbeer held her wrists tightly with his hands..

Preeto blushedEmbarrassed'..

Preeto- rajbeer'darwaza khula toh nahi haina

Rajbeer- nahi meri jaan'.

Preeto smiled'.

Rajbeer kissed her on her forehead,chins n then buried his head in her neck'.preeto closed her eyes and gripped rajbeer's shirt

And they had their private intimate moments(arrey yaar'im shy to say all that'you guys IMAGINE')

continuation-
 
The next morning...
Alarm bell rings...
preeto gets up...
she doesnt find rajbeer in the room...
 
preeto- rajbeer?
jus then rajbeer enters the room...wid 2 cups in his hand
 
rajbeer- good morning patni ji
preeto- good morning...kaha the aap?
rajbeer- humare liye black coffee banane gaya tha
preeto- black coffee???? mujhe nahi chaahiye
rajbeer- kyun??? tumhe pasand nahi hain
preeto- mujhe black coffee peene ki aadat nahi hain
rajbeer-toh aadat daal lo...tum  ek health conscious fauji ke saath reh rahi ho...toh aajse tumhe apni health aur diet par control hona chaahiye
preeto- bhaad mein ja...aapki yeh health aur diet..main ek punjabi kudi hoon...aur mein sirf punjabi khaana khaungi...suna aapne...
rajbeer- preeto zid mat karo
preeto- acha main zid kar rahi hoon...aap hi ne yeh sab shuru kiya tha...
rajbeer- acha meri maa...sorry...
preeto makes faces...
rajbeer-kya preeto...amine toh sorry bola na...
preeto doesnt mind ..
Rajbeer thinks something...
rajbeer- waise mujhe pata hain...tumhe kaise manaana hain.
rajbeer comes close to preeto(who was sitting on teh bed)
preeto moves back...even then rajbeer comes close to her...
Rajbeer gently caressed preeto hair and her cheeks.
preeto could feel the heat of his love...
preeto(shyly)- rajbeer yeh aap kya kar rahe ho...
rajber-arrey preeto...aise useless sawaal poochkar iss romantic mood ko kharaab mat karo na.. mujhe yeh sab karne ka adhikaar hain...apni wife ke saath romance kar rahi hoon...koi aur ke saath nahi...
preeto blushes...
rajbeer kisses on preeto cheeks...n says I LOVE YOU PREETO...
preeto too replies the same..
rajbeer then shows his cheek to preeto...(he wanted a kiss from his wifey)
preeto- kya???
rajbeer- itni sharmaane ki zaroorat nahi hain...jaldi se mujhe kiss do..warna...
preeto- warna kya...
rajbeer- warna mein tumhe poora din kiss karunga...simple..
preeto- badmaash kahika...
preeto gently gives a soft kiss on rajbeer's cheek
preeto blushes n she gets up from the bed..rajbeer holds her hand
preeto- ab kya hain..
rajbeer- tumhare kiss main na utna intensity nahi tha...toh
preeto- toh
rajbeer-toh tumhe mujhe ek aur kiss deni padegi.
 preeto- rajbeer chodo meri haath...plz...
rajbber- nahi...
Just then the door bell rings.
preeto- koi aaya hain...mein jaake dekthi hoon...
Rajbeer then leaves her hand
preeto leaves teh room
rajbeer- aaj tumhe jaane diya...dont worry poori zindagi baaki hain..tumhaare saath romance karne ki...
 
Hope u all lyked this one...
post ur comments too...(plz bear wid me..if there's sum typing misatkes or grammar mistakes)

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
OMG BlushingBlushingBlushing tooo Romantic Rajpreet haayeee Heart
loved it Sonia...Clap

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
thnk u sneha...
waise bhi...i  cant write romantic OS very well Wink

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by awesumsonia

thnk u sneha...
waise bhi...i  cant write romantic OS very well Wink
u wrote really veryyy well yaar...Big smile

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
its sooo beautifully romantic...so like rajpreet...

dere fun...dere love...so alive in ur writing...

a probable heading for ur OS... (my opinion)...



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