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OS: A Poolside Proposal, note on pg 14 (Page 3)

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
As soon as I saw the title I started grinningBig smile.
 
Loved it, loved it, LURVED it!!!!!
 
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"Does everything have to be spoken out loud? Surely you know how I feel about you? I go crazy when I don't see you for an entire day. I worry when you're late coming in to work, or your sister calls saying you haven't gotten home yet. Your tears disturb me. Your bleeding finger hurts me. The thought of another man touching you sickens me. And the idea of you marrying anyone but me is incomprehensible to me."
 
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Loved it, loved it, LURVED it!!!!!
 
But one shikaayat is there...u didnt make them fall into the pooolOuch.
 
And hey thanks for the mentionTongue!!!!!!


Edited by lexaxel - 14 December 2011 at 9:52pm

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
i love when khushi is asking arnav to be specific in telling if he is ordering or asking, it sure made me feel great! Thank you for writing such a beautiful OS (:

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
Amazing OS!!
Can ASR be this good and straight!!?? If he could be then it would have been awesome in show too!

Nice one to read and feel happy!!

Thanks for the PM Vidhya!

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Amazing.
Brillant.
Fantastic.
Charming.
Lovely.

THanks so much.
U r an amazing writer

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
omg ! it ws amazng awesme

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Loved Loved Loved it Vidhya!
It just felt so real for them to talk like this, and in confess in such a way by the pool. Oh and yess, to patch up with a kiss. Wonderful OS! I crush on ASR excessively each day, but yeah today, was even a better reason. Im hoping you continue to bring this OS's each day after crushing on him more than usual hehe! Its a treat to read what you write.
 
- Dee

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Amazing OS.. pls add me to ur PM list... would love to read more from u :) :)

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 12:13am | IP Logged
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this was sooo friggin awesome!!!!!!! i want this exact same thing to happen in the show Day DreamingDay Dreaming
somebody send the script to the CVs!!!

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