Parichay Nayee Zindagi Kay Sapno Ka

Sinal FF: Second Chance (see pg1) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Both the parts are so intresting..

Enjoyed reading both of them..😊

  Thank you! I am glad you liked it!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ha... I felt so much peace when you mentioned in the last line that Kunal feeding siddhi is the 1st scene to greet Richa's eyes...  Aage aage dekho hota  hai kya... 😊

 
wow what a plot yaar loved it : I am glad you like it...
 
and thanks for the PM: You are welcome!
Waiting for the next part
pls update soon:-

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nancy you are great!!! Loved reading each n every bit. Keep it up dear. At least we hv the pleasure of sinal moments through your wonderful words.

Thank you so much for your encouraging and kind words... makes me want to me put in more effort into writing this FF! Hope you like the remaining parts as well and they live upto your expectations!
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Continuation...Week of Raveena's Wedding(Sangeet & Mehndi Night)
 
Richa stops momentarily at the sight before her eyes… Kunal, her Kunal who used to feed her pasta was now feeding Siddhi and that too in front of everyone! Swallowing a sudden distaste, she continues forward, her eyes never leaving Kunal and Siddhi.
 
She goes and stands next to them and mutters a greeting hoping that maybe her presence will affect Kunal.
 
Kunal looks up at her, and says "Arey Richa aa gayi tum… acha kiya.. Raveena wahan pe hai" he says pointing with the spoon in his hand "jao jaake mil lo tum" and resumes feeding Siddhi. Richa looks at Kunal amazed and hurt at the way he has just dismissed her.
 
She goes and congratulates Raveena, all the while watching the interaction between Kunal and Siddhi. Badi Maa, who is standing next to Raveena remarks, "Kitne pyaare lag rahe hai na Kunal aur Siddhi… bahut pyaari jodi banayi hai Rabji ne.. bas inhe kissi ki nazar na lage." Richa seethes listening to all this. "Pyaari jodi, my foot! Kunal ki Jodi akele mere saath hi achi lag sakti hain! Yeh Siddhi… iski toh main…" 😡
 
Kunal finishes feeding Siddhi and leaves to drop off the dirty dishes, while Siddhi feeling happy about being properly fed starts mingling with the guests again.
 
Richa seeing that Kunal is once again on his own, goes to him and says "Kunal mujhe tumse jaroori baat karni thi.. Vineet ke bare mein…. Pichle kuch dino se…."   "Richa maine iske bare mein socha hain….aur mujhe lagta hain… ki mujhe tumhare aur Vineet ke mamle mein interfere nahin karna chaiye!"   "Nahin Kunal tumhara pura haq hai.. tum mere ache dost ho…." Richa interjects.  
 
"Nahin Richa…dosti ki seemayen hoti hain,…. Mujhe uss seema ki kadar karni chaiye…. tumhare aur Vineet ke bare mein apni rai dena ka haq mujhe hai..par usse zyada kuch nahin… woh tumhare liye theek jeevan saathi hai ya nahin.. yeh kehne ka haq akele tumhare parivaar ko hai.. mujhe nahin...…Arey mujhe Shimla-vale mamaji bula rahe hai.. main abhi aaya…" and saying so Kunal leaves Ritcha standing all alone, feeling sad.

 

Angrily she looks at Siddhi who is busy talking to some of the guests, "Sab iski galti hai.. na yeh Kunal ki zindagi mein aati.. na Kunal mujh se door jaata…" Seeing that Siddhi is walking towards her, Richa puts her foot out and Siddhi not seeing where is going, trips and falls.

 
"Oh my, Sweetie, .. tumhe lagi toh nahi…dekh kar chala karo sweetie" "Nahin Ma'am main theek hoon.." Siddhi replies but is unable to get up. Badi Maa and some of the relatives rush over, to help Siddhi get up.
 
Kunal too comes over and seeing that Siddhi is unable to get up on her own, bends, and picks her up in his arms. "Kunal please mujhe neeche rakhiye.."Siddhi pleads embarrassed at being the center of attraction.
 
"Ai hoi na Punjabi munde wali gal! Chaklaye Kunal ne apni voti noo!" yells one of Kunal's uncles. Kunal gives a smile and says "Main issko kamre mein leke jata hoon, aap log function jaari rakhiye" and leaves with a  very embarrassed Siddhi in his arms….  (Shumi, this scene is for you!!!)

 

Left standing alone, Richa is furious about her failed plan. "Maine socha tha ki Siddhi mukh ke bal gir jaayegi aur embarrass hogi.. par ise toh Kunal apni baahon mein utha kar le gaya..." Annoyed, Richa turns around and leaves the function.

 

Kunal enters the bedroom with Siddhi in his arms and gently places her on the bed. "Siddhi tum giri kaise" he asks while rummaging the bed side drawer for the first aid kit. "Woh..pata nahin Kunal…"

 
"Jab dekho tumhe zaldi hoti hai…dekh kar toh chalna nahin….. tumne.." Kunal scolds her as if she is a 5 year old and takes her foot in his hand to examine it.  "Kunal aap please rehne dijiye.. main apne aap medicine laga loongi…"
 
"Kyun, tumhe paap lagega.. ki tumhare pati ne tumhare paaon ko haat lagaya?"
 
"Nahin Kunal… woh baat nahin hai…"Siddhi protests while pulling her leg back.
 
Kunal pulls her foot forward and says… "Tumhe agar lagta hai ki mere aise tumhari taang keechne se tum lambhi ho jaogi… toh bhool jao… aise kuch nahin hoga" "Kya?" Siddhi asks.. amazed at Kunal's response. "Kuch nahin.. chup chaap baithi raho" and saying so Kunal starts applying balm to her foot. Siddhi smiles to herself seeing Kunal take care of her…..

 

To be continued…….

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Posted: 12 years ago
wooo...me first...

Week of Raveena's Wedding(Sangeet & Mehndi Night)

ummm kunal feeding scene continues...😳

kunal said to witcha "jao jaake mil lo tum" and resumes feeding Siddhi. kaash issa kunal serial mai ho tha?😍

ritcha was thinking '.. Kunal ki Jodi akele mere saath hi achi lag sakti hain!..'...ewww...😡

 woh tumhare liye theek jeevan saathi hai ya nahin.. yeh kehne ka haq akele tumhare parivaar ko hai.. mujhe nahin...'exactly...today's epi when ritcha was asking kunal mai kahaan jaun gi...i was like go to HELL😡

 "Main issko kamre mein leke jata hoon, aap log function jaari rakhiye" and leaves with a  very embarrassed Siddhi in his arms'.  (Shumi, this scene is for you!!!) thank u dear😃...i know y u wrote this for me😛...once when kunal said siddhi to go to her room or elese mai tumai utta kar lejaun ga...i was telling...kaash he wound have done that😍...yep...he did it...lub u for that sweety😃

 mere aise tumhari taang keechne se tum lambhi ho jaogi' toh bhool jao' aise kuch nahin hoga"...that was very funny🤣

thank u for ur lovely update dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb dear😃😉

Witcha😡😡🤢


 Badi Maa...i love u🤗well said sinal rab ne bana di jodi 👍🏼


wow...kunal carries siddhi in his  arms 👏😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one Nancy, specially for making witcha look like a fool.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww so balm leg pe lagayenga ya kahin aur ???
Loved Sinal's little romantic moments
I would like to see more romance in the next chapter pls...pls...pls...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww another awesome update👍🏼👏
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Continuation: Week of Raveena's Wedding
 
Mehndi & Sangeet Night
 
Raveena comes back to her room once the mehndi and Sangeet ceremony is over.. a small satisfied smile on her face. "Kal meri shaadi hai... mere sabse ache dost ke saath'" she thinks to herself...when suddenly she is roughly pushed against the wall and a hand is clamped on her mouth.
 
She looks up and sees its Rohit. "Shh bilkul shor mat karna Raveena'" and saying so he removes his hand. "Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.. " Raveena asks angrily. "Tumhe ek baari mein baat samjh nahin aati... meri shaadi ho rahi hai'" " Nahin... nahin aati tumhari koi bhi baat samjh mujhe.. kyunki main jaanta hoon ki tum yeh sab apni khushi se nahin kar rahi ho! Tum yeh apne parivaar ki khushi ke liye kar rahi ho! Raveena main sach mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon... please meri baat mano.. mat karo yeh shaadi.."
 
 "Rohit.." Raveena pushes Rohit away from her and continues "tumhari koi bhi baat ka mujh pe koi asar nahi hone wala... main yeh shaadi apni khushi se karr rahi hoon.. tumhe maan-na hai.. toh theek hai varna mat maanoo..." "Yeh jhooth hai Raveena... mai janta hoon tum mujhse pyaar karti ho!" "Rohit tum yahan se jaate ho ya phir main chilaaon?" "Raveena please meri baat suno.. "
 
 "Rohit tum jaate ho ke nahin" Raveena threatens again. "Theek hai.. par yeh baat abhi khatam nahin hui... main vapas aaonga..." and saying so Rohit leaves. Raveena sits on her bed, confused 😕and scared not sure what to do next'..

 

Week of Raveena's wedding (Day 6: The wedding day)

 

It was the day of Raveena's wedding and there was much to be done. The shubh muharat of the wedding was in the afternoon around 1 pm and everyone was busy getting things set up at the hall. Kunal and Gaurav were running around ensuring that the caterers were set up and all arrangements to welcome guests were made. Siddhi, who was already done with her part of supervising the hall decorations as decided, was now busy working with the stylist to help Raveena look her best for her big day!

 
Once Raveena is all dressed up, Siddhi and the stylist leave as Badi Maa, Pooja, Veena and Siddhi all needed to get ready too. Raveena was busy admiring herself in the mirror when she sees Rohit standing right behind her .
 
Scared she turns around,  "Tum, Rohit tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?" "Main tumhe lene aaya hoon Raveena, tum chalo mere saath!" "Tumhe ek baari mein baat samjh nahi aati.. main shaadi kar rahi hoon Vikram ke saath.. apni marzi se."
 
Rohit grabs her hand, and says "Tum sirf meri ho, aur main jaanta hoon ki tum mujhse ab bhi pyaar karti ho!"  "Nahin Rohit main tumse pyaar karti thi, ab nahin!" "Yeh jhooth hai Raveena' mujhe tumhari aankhon mein ab bhi pyaar dikhta hai.. chalo hum dono bhag chale yahan se... hum aaj hi shaadi kar lenge" "Rohit chodo mujhe..." Raveena  tries to get away from Rohit.
 

Suddenly the door to Raveena's room (at the marriage hall) opens and Richa walks in. She walks over to them and says "Raveena...Rohit sach keh raha hai.. yeh tumse bahut pyaar karta hai...tum dono bhag jao yahan se... main sab sambhal loongi." "Richa tum yeh keh rahi ho!" "Haan Raveena main yeh tumse keh rahi hoon! Apne pyaar ko kho ke jeena kaisa hota hai koi mujhse pooche...main nahin chahati ki tumhe aur Rohit ko iss dard ka samna karna pade..."

 
"Richa tum mujhe yeh sab keh rahi ho? Yeh jaante hue  ki Rohit Nisha ka gunnhegar hai?" "Nahin Raveena yeh koi badi saazish hai.. Rohit ko jhoothe case mein fasaya gaya hai... Rohit sach mein bekasoor hai... aur tum dono ki shaadi ki saakshi main khud hoongi. Main toh bas itna chahti hoon, ki tum dono mil jao'" Rohit turns to Raveena, with tears in his eyes 😭and says "Please Raveena, please chalo.. main sach mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon!"
 

"Rohit... " Raveena, Rohit and Richa all turn towards the new voice and recoil seeing  Gaurav and Kunal standing at the door. Kunal storms into the room, pries Rohit's fingers from Raveena's arm  and shouts "Tumhari himmat kaise hui yahan pe aane ki... aur meri behan ko yeh kehne ki woh apni hi shaadi se bhage?" Kunal shouts. 

 
"Kunal bhaiyya  woh..." Rohit stammers but Richa steps in and says "Kunal dekho  yeh dono kya karne jaa rahe the...main toh inhe samjha rahi thi.. ki aisa koi kadam na uthaen.. jo bhi baat hai woh hum sab aapas mein suljha sakte hain..."
 
"Par Rohit Raveena ko bhagne ke liye kyun keh raha hai... " Gaurav questions innocently. "Yeh dono ek doosre se pyaar karte hain.." Richa answers. "Kya?" Kunal asks shocked. "Haan Kunal, mujhe bhi aaj abhi hi pata chala ki yeh dono ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hain.. Main toh bas inhe samjha rahi thi.. Ki inhe yeh baat hume pehle hi batani chahiye thi.. taki baat itni aage na badti.. aur yeh nobat na aati ki yeh dono bhagne ka sochte..." Richa finishes.
 
Kunal takes a few steps towards Richa and says... "Richa tum jaisi dost'" and slaps her. Richa is flabbergasted and she stares at Kunal'"Kunal tumne mujhe thappad mara.. main tumhare ghar ki izzat ke liye in dono ko galat kaam karne se rok rahi thi.. aur tumne..."
 
Kunal drags Richa over to the TV in the room and turns it on.. and shows Richa the video of all that transpired in the make-up room before Kunal and Gaurva's entry. Richa looks at the video shocked... Kunal turns to her and says "Tum meri dost ho Richa? Sabse achi dost.. haina... toh yeh hai tumhari dosti?"
 
Richa fumbles trying to come up with an excuse.. "Main batata hoon Richa tum kaisi dost ho...tum aisi dost ho.. jo meri hi behan ko kehti hai.. ki woh apne hi ghar mein chori kare taaki tum apne bhai ko bacha sako... Tum aisi dost ho jo ki jaanti thi ki meri behan aur tumhara bhai ek doosre se pyaar karte the.. aur phir bhi tumne yeh baat mujhe bata zaroori nahin samjha..tum aisi dost ho jo mujhe itna pyaar karti hai.. ...ki woh unn sabko dukh deti hai jinse main pyaar karta hoon!"
 
Richa listens to all this and starts crying... she falls at Kunal's feet and says "Please Kunal maine yeh sab tumhare liye kiya... please Kunal" Kunal looks at her and says "Main yakeen nahin kar sakta ki maine apni zindagi ke 5 saal tumhare liye barbad kiye.. tum ho hi nahin mere layak...Inspector " Kunal shouts at the top of his voice.
 
In walks a police inspector with few constables. "Inspector, aapne saari baatein to sun hi li hai.. aur saboot" Kunal quickly goes over to the TV and removes the DVD "ye raha... Baki ki formalities main kal aake poori kar doonga'" "Theek hai Mr. Chopra" the inspector says and asks the constables to handcuff Richa and Rohit. "Kunal please meri baat toh suno.." Richa pleads but Kunal gives her a dirty look as she is dragged out of the room. 
 
Kunal walks over to Raveena, puts his hand on her head and asks'"Tu theek hai Raveena?"  "Ji bhaiyya... thank you.." and she hugs him.  "Arey thank you kis baat ka... tere ko kaha tha naa'... ki hum sab tere saath hain... Bas  kabhi humse koi problem chupana mat... Yeh bhi acha kiya tune.. jo hume Rohit ki chithi aur phir uska tere kamre main aane ke baare mein tune bata diya varna..."
 
"Varna kya bhaiyya..." Gaurav interjects"Aap bhi negative kyun sochte ho...sab theek ho gaya ab'" and saying so the three of them share are hug! "Acha bahut ho gaya.. kaafi kaam rehta hai abhi. Gaurav tu abhi Raveena ke paas ruk, Main aaya.. mujhe Siddhi se baat karni hai" and Kunal leaves.

 

Kunal walks over to the room where Siddhi is busy getting ready. He knocks on the door "Kaun hai.." Siddhi shouts..."Siddhi main hoon, tumse zaroori baat karni hai..." "Kunal aajaye.. maine darwaaza lock nahin kiya hai."

 
Kunal walks into the room and sees that Siddhi is wearing the dark navy blue colored lehanga..and smiles "Tum achi lag rahi ho!" "Thank you Kunal...vaise mujhe yeh lehgna bahut pasand hai'."
 
Kunal clears his throat and says "Umm Siddhi'..tumhe yaad hai.. hum uss din jab cards khel rahe the..." "Ji.. aur aap jeet gaye the..." "Haan.. aur shart thi ki..." "Jeetne wala haarne waale se kuch bhi maang sakta hai.. aur harne wala naa nahin kar sakta... haan Kunal mujhe yaad hai.. par aap abhi kyun yeh sab keh rahi hain...kal yeh baat nahin ho sakti" Siddhi questions, while trying to put on her earrings.

 

 Kunal walks over to her, takes both her hands in his and says' "Siddhi mujhe tumse kuch maangna hai..." "Kunal aap kal maang lijiye ga... abhi main late ho rahi hoon'"

 
"Siddhi" he says, looking into her eyes. "Theek hai maangiye.. kya chahiye aapko?" Siddhi says.. finally giving up!
 
"Kya tum mujhse aaj abhi doobara shaadi karogi?"
 
 "Kya ?" Siddhi questions, shocked!.
 
"Siddhi kya tum mujhse aaj isis mandap mein shaadi karogi?"  Kunal asks her again.
 
"Kunal hamari shaadi ho chuki hai...aap bhool gaye kya?"
 
"Nahin bhoola nahin... par tab jin halaat mein hamari shaadi hui  thi hum dono jaante hai... humne yeh shaadi ki thi maa ki khatir, anand ki aakhri ichcha ki khatir aur issliye kyunki main sochta tha.. ki maine apna pyaar kho diya.. aur tumne apna...ek samjhota kiya tha hum dono ne. Par ab main yeh shaadi karna chahta hoon sirf isliye kyunki main apni baki ki zindagi tumhare saat bitana chahta... aage badna chahta hoon... par agar tumhe yeh theek lage tab hi"

 

Siddhi looks at Kunal with tears in her eyes.. and says "Shilpa theek kehti hai.. Koi kisi ki jagah nahi leta.. har koi apni jagah banata hai hamare dil mein"

 
"Matlab" Kunal asks all confused and Siddhi throws her arms around him and hugs him'"Matlab haan Kunal main aapse shaadi karoongi.. aaj hi " and Kunal hugs her back...both in their hearts thanking Anand for bringing them together...
 
 
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