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Posted: 21 May 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Freethinker

Part 27 (Last Part) nhhhiiiCry

Mitali was shouting at the servants for completing the decorations...Sulekha was asking the priest regarding the time and other things which might be required for the wedding...

Manmohan organized the grand wedding for her only daughter at their five star hotel...

-wow wedding dayBig smile-----Big smile

The wedding Day...

Ananya "you are still scared...i can't you go and get ready..." anu is anuLOL

Veer "how will I get down...???" ROFL

Ananya "how did you come up???"

Veer "silly girl...i mean there are so many will I go down??"

Ananya "hmm... wait...let me check..."

Veer "see that's why I don't like your ideas...but you never if I don't reach on will I get ready for the wedding..."

Ananya "you panic a lot Veer...let me think of a solution..." ROFLreally

Veer "yes yes...go on..."

Ananya "ok ...there is no one on the back side of my can get down by his pipe and easily escape..." omggg by pipe yeh scene to hona hi chahiye love stories me..pipes paly an important role in love storiesLOLagar pipe na ho to boyfriends ka kya hogaOuch

Veer "you will surely kill me" he slowly got down the pipe... Big smilesaccchiii the hotel...

the wedding started with showers of flowers all around...for Ananya and Veer this was their happiest moment... all the friends and family showered their blessings upon the lovely couple...

after the wedding...they headed off for lunch...

It was a grand lunch... Manmohan made sure everything was perfect... all the family gathered around the round table...they were enjoying their lunch...

Ananya saw a bottle of Vodka and mixed in her orange after another she had too many glasses... Veer noticed and took the bottle from her... "are you mad Ananya..."oopppsssShocked

Ananya stood up "i...i want to raise a toast"

everyone was surprised to see her drunk... me toooShocked

Sulekha literally fainted "oh my God...Any"

Ananya "please don't have to over react...i didn't had any alcohol...i...had orange juice..."

they all smiled but asked her to sit...

Ananya " my loving Veer...and my mom -in law, father in law and grandpa...i thought of confessing one thing..." wow she is so cute naaa Tongue

Veer tried to control her...but she would not listen to him...

Ananya "well...i love Veer...and he loves me...and we both love each other"

Mitali "Ananya beta...we know sit and ..."

Ananya smiled... " don't know this...that...i '.i am.."

Veer " must sit...i think you are tired..."

Ananya "no no...Veer...i am so so happy today...we won..."

Mitali "won???"

Shilpa "won???"

Sulekha "won???"

Ananya "yes...won...i '.i am not pregnant..." she giggled...omgggD'oh

Mitali "what??"

Shilpa "what??"

Sulekha "really??"

Veer put his hand on his face...D'ohbechara veerOuch

Ananya "yes...yes...i am not pregnant...i lie to all of that I can marry Veer..."

everyone was silent...for few seconds...

Ananya's smile vanished... "Veer...why is everyone quiet..." she is so innocentOuch

Baldev laughed... then sulekha...

Mitali and Shilpa smiled...

Baldev "i am lucky to have an honest daughter in law..." all laughed...

Big smilethank god everything is fineBig smile


Veer and Ananya's first wedding night...

Veer "don't talk to me" whyyy?????Disapprove

Ananya "no don't say that...i am sorry...please..."

Veer "let me sleep"

Ananya " no...Veer...we can't sleep today...its our first night and" EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Veer "and you have spoiled it..."

Ananya "alright I am sorry...i promise I will agree what you say"

Veer "promise? I want something from you, will you give me"

Ananya "of course Veer...what ever is mine...its all yours"

Veer "no you promise me that what ever I ask you will give me"

Ananya "alright...i promise"

Veer "then a need a promise"

Ananya "promise...??"

Veer "yes...promise that you will never touch alcohol again in your life...i hate when you drink"

Ananya looked at him and came closer "Veer...its just an alcohol...if you ask me I would have given my life for you...i love you...i only need you...i will never drink again" thats like a gud girlBig smile

Veer happily embraced her tightly in his arms...

After some time... Ananya came closer and kissed him passionately...he pulled her towards the bed... BlushingBlushingBlushing

Ananya "i am so happy...finally I will be one with you"

Veer "i love you" Embarrassed

Ananya "i love you too"Embarrassed

Veer made love to her...she smiled under him...Blushing

And they lived happily ever after...Confused


lovely update tha di but why u ended itConfused
aise thode hi hote hota hOuch
im going to miss maa fav n cutie pie coupleCry
but koi baat nhiConfused

thank u for this lovely ff

thanks 4 pm
love u Embarrassed

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glossyglassy Senior Member

Joined: 25 April 2010
Posts: 313

Posted: 21 May 2012 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Hi di!
lovely part...finally they got married.Dancing
Finally Anu confessed the truth in her stupor..
liked Baldev's comment in this scene..LOL
Thank God Veer finally made Anu promise not to drink...
Lovely was a great story di Clap
Can we please get an epilogue? Don't the readers deserve a little sneak into their post marriage life? Plz? Pretty plz?. Pretty plz with a cheery on top???Day Dreaming
Love u...Big smile

Edited by glossyglassy - 21 May 2012 at 3:47am

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shruja IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 February 2008
Posts: 3294

Posted: 21 May 2012 at 7:46am | IP Logged
loved whole update!!
its beautiful
atlast they got married!!
loved she confessed truth to all!!
n liked balvant comment on tht!!
after all she is lady sallu!!
thank god veer took promise from her not to drink again
thanks for beautiful ff

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Amor. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 27 August 2008
Posts: 41175

Posted: 04 June 2012 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
awww it ended :(

but really awesome ending so no complaints
loved it <3

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.FemmeFatale. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 September 2008
Posts: 21821

Posted: 21 June 2012 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
Dhanvi diii Big smile

oh man,i love you so much for writing such amazing stories Hug

Im telling you,you're epicness knows no limits Cool 

Loved this story BIGTIME.CUTENESS at hi best!

But why did you end it so soon? Cry 

Chalo anyways,thank you for giving us such an amazing story! Hug

Love you Hug

p.s : It saddens me that tum mere ho and my jigar da tukda r both completed. Unhappy Now my only hope is shikar as ur oder ff's are completed.Dont even think bout ending it,im super addicted to that one Day Dreaming

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amandadsouza95 IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 25130

Posted: 11 December 2012 at 9:05am | IP Logged
@Freethinker: Awesum n fantastic!!!!Smile

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