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ridzzi Goldie

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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged
she is just imagining all that...lo ji n we r thinking that...but ya we forgot veer is a good boy...he didn't cross his limits...Wink
he can do things like this only in her dreams...LOL
n both the family got agreed for their wedding gr8...Tongue
but hope problems are not waiting at their next turn...Ouch
hope sanb acha acha ho jaye...happy wedding...Day Dreaming
continue soon...
luv u...Smile

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sweetsanyo IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 April 2010
Posts: 4262

Posted: 15 May 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tejjo

Originally posted by sweetsanyo

read it
thnx di

wil comment in detail soon

wid ur cake piece which i kept in fridge just preserved n reserved for u

okay di, 
i m back wid ur cake piece.

u told u like chocolates 
na dats why i brought u a choco cake

black forest -ma fav.

rashu mujhe bhi chahiye bas itna sa h isme se to mein share bhi nhi kar saktiOuch

di ko bhi chahiye...


main hum sabke liye cake lati hoon,
but ek shart h...

uski saari cheeries main khaongi...ok??

yeh lo di cake, mc fans k liye...

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Riyaa16 Goldie

Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 2411

Posted: 16 May 2012 at 2:11am | IP Logged
nhi nhi rashu yeh cheating h
mein ni
mujhe cheeris bhi chahiye
ye shart mein ni manugi Cry
isme ek bhi cherry nhi h

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Freethinker Goldie

Joined: 16 August 2010
Posts: 1989

Posted: 20 May 2012 at 4:44pm | IP Logged

Part 27 (Last Part)

Mitali was shouting at the servants for completing the decorations...Sulekha was asking the priest regarding the time and other things which might be required for the wedding...

Manmohan organized the grand wedding for her only daughter at their five star hotel...


The wedding Day...

Ananya "you are still scared...i can't you go and get ready..."

Veer "how will I get down...???"

Ananya "how did you come up???"

Veer "silly girl...i mean there are so many will I go down??"

Ananya "hmm... wait...let me check..."

Veer "see that's why I don't like your ideas...but you never if I don't reach on will I get ready for the wedding..."

Ananya "you panic a lot Veer...let me think of a solution..."

Veer "yes yes...go on..."

Ananya "ok ...there is no one on the back side of my can get down by his pipe and easily escape..."

Veer "you will surely kill me" he slowly got down the pipe...


Mitali knocked Ananya's door "are you ready??? lets go we need to reach the hotel..."

Ananya made sure Veer got down the pipe and escaped from the garden "yes mom...coming.."

Mitali "just pack each and every will get ready at the hotel.."


Shilpa and Baldev were looking for Veer "Veer...Veer... where are you??"

Baldev "shilpa, beta ring on his cell phone...see where he is...he must get ready soon"

Shilpa "yes papa...i will check..."

Veer "mom, I forgot something...i am on the way...coming..."

------ the hotel...

the wedding started with showers of flowers all around...for Ananya and Veer this was their happiest moment... all the friends and family showered their blessings upon the lovely couple...

after the wedding...they headed off for lunch...

It was a grand lunch... Manmohan made sure everything was perfect... all the family gathered around the round table...they were enjoying their lunch...

Ananya saw a bottle of Vodka and mixed in her orange after another she had too many glasses... Veer noticed and took the bottle from her... "are you mad Ananya..."

Ananya stood up "i...i want to raise a toast"

everyone was surprised to see her drunk...

Sulekha literally fainted "oh my God...Any"

Ananya "please don't have to over react...i didn't had any alcohol...i...had orange juice..."

they all smiled but asked her to sit...

Ananya " my loving Veer...and my mom -in law, father in law and grandpa...i thought of confessing one thing..."

Veer tried to control her...but she would not listen to him...

Ananya "well...i love Veer...and he loves me...and we both love each other"

Mitali "Ananya beta...we know sit and ..."

Ananya smiled... " don't know this...that...i ….i am.."

Veer " must sit...i think you are tired..."

Ananya "no no...Veer...i am so so happy today...we won..."

Mitali "won???"

Shilpa "won???"

Sulekha "won???"

Ananya "yes...won...i ….i am not pregnant..." she giggled...

Mitali "what??"

Shilpa "what??"

Sulekha "really??"

Veer put his hand on his face...

Ananya "yes...yes...i am not pregnant...i lie to all of that I can marry Veer..."

everyone was silent...for few seconds...

Ananya's smile vanished... "Veer...why is everyone quiet..."

Baldev laughed... then sulekha...

Mitali and Shilpa smiled...

Baldev "i am lucky to have an honest daughter in law..." all laughed...


Veer and Ananya's first wedding night...

Veer "don't talk to me"

Ananya "no don't say that...i am sorry...please..."

Veer "let me sleep"

Ananya " no...Veer...we can't sleep today...its our first night and"

Veer "and you have spoiled it..."

Ananya "alright I am sorry...i promise I will agree what you say"

Veer "promise? I want something from you, will you give me"

Ananya "of course Veer...what ever is mine...its all yours"

Veer "no you promise me that what ever I ask you will give me"

Ananya "alright...i promise"

Veer "then a need a promise"

Ananya "promise...??"

Veer "yes...promise that you will never touch alcohol again in your life...i hate when you drink"

Ananya looked at him and came closer "Veer...its just an alcohol...if you ask me I would have given my life for you...i love you...i only need you...i will never drink again"

Veer happily embraced her tightly in his arms...

After some time... Ananya came closer and kissed him passionately...he pulled her towards the bed...

Ananya "i am so happy...finally I will be one with you"

Veer "i love you"

Ananya "i love you too"

Veer made love to her...she smiled under him...

And they lived happily ever after...


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sweetsanyo IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4262

Posted: 20 May 2012 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
reso jii

last part hCry
god, damn hilarious

alcohol evn on wedding day

she disclosed evrythng
yes really honest dil.

lovely prt
n damn lovely stry

really enjoyed it
i will miss anu, n dhwani iwll miss her too.

veer is realy sweet.

first nite.
veer finally tamed her
vry good 

loved the stry 
lov u

write more di

Edited by sweetsanyo - 20 May 2012 at 6:03pm

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ridzzi Goldie

Joined: 25 September 2011
Posts: 1798

Posted: 20 May 2012 at 5:32pm | IP Logged
last part...di u finished it so soon...Shocked
but it was really good...Clap
finally they got married...anu's trick worked...Wink
n vodka on her marriage...hey bhagwan,n she tell everything to their family...honesty...good...Smile
n veer...finally he succeded in taking promise from her that she never drink again...LOL
n then they lived happily ever after...Day Dreaming
luv u...Smile

Edited by ridzzi - 20 May 2012 at 9:36pm

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mddmayuri Senior Member

Joined: 25 June 2009
Posts: 499

Posted: 20 May 2012 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
superb ud dhanvi...
luved it...Smile
sorry for commenting so late...Unhappy
luved alcohol scene...sometimes drinking is beneficial...Tongue
n finally they got married...Party
fabulous ud ...
luv uHug

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sonalimurat Senior Member

Joined: 23 April 2011
Posts: 790

Posted: 20 May 2012 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
It's last part
But I loved that finally they  are married now
n Anu is so sweet she told to family that she isn't pregnant .
Veer only for you she left Alcohol .
they lived

And they lived happily ever after...

wow Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming
Dhanvi di than you for giving such a beautiful story
n keep writing like this
we all liked to read
Love u Star 

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