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My Jigar Da Tukda (RTMC FF)Last partpg45 (Page 42)

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Posted: 10 May 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
too lovely shovely part tha ye to Heart

continue soon

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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged
thanks for pm n updates
loved both updates
Part 24
so my lady sallu-any is back!!!
loved any!! she will never change

Ananya "yes I do...that's not fair...you have never done that anything with me...and you will do anything with other girls..." ROFLROFLROFLROFL

Veer "just stop your nonsense...and grow up"

she will never grow up until u are with her!!Approve
but at last mu is solved!! n both together!!

Part 25
she is amazing!! kya idea hai!!
hehehehehe
veer toh gaya kaamse! poor boy now have to listen from all!!
any tune yeh kya kar diya!! but atleast mitali n shilpa talked frndly!!

loved the veer-ananya part!!Embarrassed
romantic n hottt!!Blushing
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This is a very short update...

Sweetsanyo this is for you baby...for your special b'day...i couldn't update before...


Part 26



Veer looked at her '.



Veer "why did you stop??? what are you dreaming??"



Ananya came out of her wild dreams... and thought it was just a dream... "yes...i  was dreaming..."

Veer smiled "you and your dreams...now what??? if my Dad scolds me what should I do??"

Ananya "oh come on Veer...i have to tell you each and every thing...why can't you handle anything by yourself...???"



Veer "why are you getting angry??"

Ananya walked towards the door "i hope my wildest dream comes true" leaving behind Veer thinking about what she had said...

*****



Mitali "but what about our daughter's life???"

Manmohan was shocked to hear what Mitali had said "are you sure???"

Mitali "what do you mean??"

Manmohan "nothing...this girl has been sitting on my nerves all the time...one after another problem..."

Mitali started crying... "what about her future...what if everybody gets to know??"

Manmohan "stop it...i will see what I can do"

Mitali "what? You simple have to talk to Veer's Father...we must go to his house...those people already know about this"

Manmohan "you think I will go to my enemy's house??"

Mitali "we have to...for the sake of Ananya..."

Manmohan "i feel like hanging myself...i have always pampered her so much...its all my fault..."

Mitali "Veer doesn't look that bad...and if both of them stay happy in their lives...what else do we need..."

Manmohan "don't pacify me with your words"

Mitali "i am not...i am just telling you the fact...we shouldn't delay this anymore..."

******





Ananya was happily eating her favorite ice cream...when she heard her phone ringing...

Ananya "hi Mom...whats up???"

Mitali "you have done such a big crime...how can you be so cool and relaxed Ananya??"

Ananya "oh...mom...i am not relaxed but I was just asking '."

Mitali "stop it...now answer me how many months pregnant are you???"

Ananya immediately stopped eating her ice cream "hmmm...well Mom...it was..."

Mitali "you broke off with Veer two months back...isn't it???"

Ananya "oh...yes yes...now...now" she twitched her lips to answer...

Mitali "Ananya...are you there...???"

Ananya "well Mom...i got to know this month that I am pregnant...so its three months"

Mitali "don't just assume...have you checked with the doctor???"

Ananya "doc...doctor...oh...yes yes...doctor..."

Mitali "Ananya...what are you doing???"

Ananya "yes mom...i ..i remember I went to see the doctor last week...and he told me I am three months pregnant..."

Mitali "oh no...oh my God...please save my daughter's life...we have to immediately let you get married"

Ananya was super happy but she was silent on the phone "yes mom...i think you must talk to Veer's parents quickly"

Mitali "we are going to...may be today"

Ananya was happy...she kept the phone and called Veer...



-----

Ananya "so you aren't happy???"

Veer "i am Ananya...but this is not the right way...i mean we are lying to our parents...what if they catch us ??"

Ananya "no one can catch us...and please every time you don't have to get worried..."

Veer "fine...i am busy...have to complete this work"

Ananya "busy, busy, busy...fine...go...i will see for how long you will pretend to be busy..."

Veer "did you say something??"

Ananya "no no...you go ahead...bye"

-----



Manomohan and Mitali reached Chadha house...

Shilpa greeted them "please come in...we were waiting for you"

Mitali "thank you..."

both the families unwillingly approved of the marriage...

Shilpa "that way we can get enough time to prepare for the wedding"

Mitali "yes I think it is convenient for us"

Shilpa "alright then...we will come after one month to take your daughter with us..."

both smiled and hugged each other...



*****



Mitali "but mom...what's the matter??? we have finalized everything"

Sulekha "good...but pregnant girl cannot sit around the holy fire"

Mitali "oh mom...please forget about this old tradition...we have to let her married..."

Sulekha "fine...but I tell you...you are not doing right...she will be four months pregnant...and"

Mitali "please mom...i am pleading you...we have to perform this marriage or it will ruin our status every where"

Sulekha "i am not against my family...alright...you can go ahead with all the preparations..."

Mitali "thanks mom..."



*****



Ananya hugged Veer "we have done it"

Veer "yes yes...i know how you did it"

Ananya "fine...you know very well they wouldn't have agreed otherwise, but now everything is fine...i am so happy Veer"

Veer "so am i"

Ananya "our four years of relationship will finally reach its destiny...oh I am so excited...ok I am leaving tomorrow for Delhi...i have to start with my wedding preparations..."

Veer looked at her "you look so beautiful when you are happy..." and kissed her...

Ananya "i will wait for you in Delhi..."

Veer "one month...so we won't meet for that long??"

Ananya "who told you...??? I will meet you everyday...you are going with me for shopping..."

Veer "oh no..."



_______***********





Edited by Freethinker - 14 May 2012 at 6:10pm

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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
reso jii...

but di, still u r nt spared...

u deserve a punishment frm b'day gal...

need a shikaar n tmh ud too. :P

~~**EDITED**~~

This is a very short update...no probs di.Big smile

Sweetsanyo this is for you baby..(dont call me baby di, now i m a big bacha, 17 yrs u noeWink. after one year i will be proclaimed adult, thn i can see evn adult movie wid full right...)for your special b'day...i couldn't update before... Embarrassed


veer.: "why did you stop??? what are you dreaming??" she ws dreaming...ho no...Cry...lekin bhot accha dream tha...:PBlushing

.evn i wish anu's wild dreams come true...

but ab tho mera n anu dono ka popat ho gya, Ouch

mitali's brain wrks a lot

she is sure to catch her daughter...oops!

god save anu frm her mom.


Ananya "busy, busy, busy...fine...go...i will see for how long you will pretend to be busy..."..wow , one more masti on the way...


parents talk a lot, n do no wrk...

they shud be super fast in dis century of 21st number...

voh kya kahate h -

''chatt mangani, patt bihaa...''


Ananya hugged Veer "we have done it".yes party timeParty

Veer "yes yes...i know how you did it".....she is gr88  na veer.

Ananya "fine...you know very well they wouldn't have agreed otherwise, but now everything is fine...i am so happy Veer"....yeah! who cares how? its all done now!

Veer "so am i"......Embarrassed

Ananya "our four years of relationship will finally reach its destiny...oh I am so excited...ok I am leaving tomorrow for Delhi...i have to start with my wedding preparations..."....evn i m excited.

Veer looked at her "you look so beautiful when you are happy..." and kissed her...he kissed her, ooo...Embarrassed...

Ananya "i will wait for you in Delhi..."......yes, i will b here to welcome u on airport, dnt wry...welcome to delhi

Veer "one month...so we won't meet for that long??".veer is worried,

Ananya "who told you...??? I will meet you everyday...you are going with me for shopping..."......naughty gal.

Veer "oh no..."...veer ki tho band bajj gyi...OuchROFL



ud soon di

lov u







Edited by sweetsanyo - 14 May 2012 at 8:22pm

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Posted: 14 May 2012 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
read it
thnx di

wil comment in detail soon

wid ur cake piece which i kept in fridge just preserved n reserved for u

~~**EDITED**~~
okay di, 
i m back wid ur cake piece.

u told u like chocolates 
na dats why i brought u a choco cake

black forest -ma fav.



Edited by sweetsanyo - 14 May 2012 at 8:07pm

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edited ma both comments di.
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Posted: 15 May 2012 at 12:46am | IP Logged
Di mindblowing update tha but u didn't pm me Cry bt phir v mene padh liya becoz mera one of the fav update h Big smile di apne rashu ko baby kaha mujhe bhot accha laga becoz she is really like a baby rashu i know ki tum 17 ki ho gyi ho bt mein abhi v tumse 1 yr bdi hun to mein tumhe baby hi kahungi LOL or han abhi tum 18 ki nhi hui ho to mein or sab di's milke ahem ahem scene cut karke tumhe ff pm karenge adult ff read karne se rashu baby bigad jayegi jo mein nhi chahti ok rashu baby now update amazing update as usuall...bt too short bt koi ni di aap ek para bhi deti na to bhi chalta we r crazy fans of ur h na rashu baby oh she was dreaming..,mujhe laga ki sb sach h...hope jaldi true ho jaye uska dream shaadi ki date bhi fix nice na she is 3 mnths pregnant...jhuthi kahin ki...veer anu ko shopping karayega lovely lovely di jaldi update do long one luv u happy birthday again rashu

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Originally posted by sweetsanyo

read it
thnx di

wil comment in detail soon

wid ur cake piece which i kept in fridge just preserved n reserved for u

~~**EDITED**~~
okay di, 
i m back wid ur cake piece.

u told u like chocolates 
na dats why i brought u a choco cake

black forest -ma fav.

rashu mujhe bhi chahiye bas itna sa h isme se to mein share bhi nhi kar saktiOuch

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