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Amor. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 March 2012 at 11:41am | IP Logged
sad but nice update
continue soon

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sonalimurat Senior Member

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Posted: 09 March 2012 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Nice update
thanx for updating Dhanvi,
Anu couldn't telll about Veer
so sad
but hope so she can tell n her parents listen her
but whatt???
Anu slap veer Shocked Shocked  Shocked  Shocked  Shocked
 waiting for reason

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--Rose-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Wowww... What a Lovely ff:-) i jus love it:-)...

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shruja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
thanks for update n pm
sorry for late reply
loved the update
any is really lady sallu
calling for veer outside gents loo
poor girl had so much of alcohol and talk to her parents abt veer
but mitali fixed her enagement n marriage too
precap shocked me y any slap veer? is he din't succeed to tell his parents abt any?

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anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 March 2012 at 7:34am | IP Logged

i really dont want anything bad happening..

b/w veer n anu..

want them happy..

hope their families agree..

n the precap...omg...

plzzz cont. soon...

thnx for the pm...

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sweetsanyo IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 April 2012 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
plz di isse par bhi aapni meharbaani dikhiye na...

me missing ma mischief ananya a lot.
she is ma dhwani's best friend in here...

dhwani told me that she is missing her best buddy ananya since long...

ananya - veer ko tho aap bhool hi gaye,,,,,,

jaldi ud dedo plzzz...

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sparksfly Senior Member

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
di...ud dedo na...plzz...

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Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 18 April 2012 at 4:32pm | IP Logged

Part 23

Ananya called Veer "you have to come now or I will come at your need to talk with my parents now"

Veer "fine...let me talk to my parents first"

Veer was angry that everything was happening so fast...he didn't wanted to loose Ananya...

Veer went to his parents and told them about Ananya...

Shilpa yelled at Veer "how dare you dare you even think of know we don't like those people and you want to marry their daughter...are you out of your senses??"

Khushwant was angry at his Son... "Veer I never expected this from you"

Veer "Mom Dad...i love her and I can't leave her like that...i have to go and talk to her parents...they are marrying her somewhere else...please understand"

Shilpa "good if they are marrying you don't go...Veer understand beta...we can never accept her as our daughter in law"

Veer "fine and I can never forget my promise..." he left and drove towards Ananya's house...

After some time

Chadha house

Veer entered and shouted "Ananya...Ananya come out"

Ananya was crying in her room when she heard him...she smiled and came out...

she went outside and hugged him...she cried out bitterly...

Veer "don't worry...i am here to take you away"

Ananya "take me ??? I thought you would first talk to my parents..."

Manmohan saw this and yelled at Veer "how dare you touch my came inside my house...i will shoot you..." he went towards the wall to take off the gun which was hanging since last so many years...

Ananya "no dad...please"

Manmohan "get away...i will shoot him"

Veer held Ananya's hand "come Ananya...we won't stay with them..."

Manmohan "how dare you hold Ananya's hand..."

Veer looked at Manmohan "i love her...and I don't care what you say..." he was rude with Manmohan...

Manmohan lifted his hand to slap him...Veer held his wrist

Ananya was getting angry on Veer "Veer...stop it...i called you to talk to my parents and you are so rude with could you talk to my dad like this...i hate you"

Veer "Ananya!!!...what did I do??"

Ananya "should I explain what you did??? just leave from here"

Veer came closer and hold her hand "come with me"

Ananya "leave me...i won't come with you"

Veer pulled her "you have to come...these people won't let us meet"

Ananya "stop pulling me Veer"

Veer didn't listen to her...

Ananya forcefully pulled back and slapped him...

Veer angrily stared at her "you slapped me??"

Ananya didn't look at him "i...i want you to leave right now"

Veer "i am not your servant miss Ananya Chadha...i will never come in your way"

he left and Ananya fell on her knees... "why...why Veer...why did you hurt me?"

she cried out...

Manmohan looked at her miserable Daughter...he took her to her room...


Veer "mom I will never see her face again...i hate her"

Shilpa "what happened now??"

Veer walked towards his room...

Khushwant "all that happens, happens for good...we didn't have to do anything...he himself broke his relation with that girl"

Shilpa "but I am worried for Veer...look at him"

Khushwant "he will be fine...don't worry about him..."


Ananya and Veer felt helpless...Ananya was expecting Veer to call her and on the other hand Veer was angry at her and never wanted to call her...

Next day

Ananya "Dad...i don't want to go to college...please..."

Manmohan " can do what you want"

Mitali "but her marriage"

Manmohan "no Mitali, I will not force my Daughter...if she doesn't want to marry now...its alright..."

Mitali was not happy but she was relieved that Ananya broke her relationship with Veer...

Manmohan "you can join our already have knowledge about hotel management..."

Mitali "oh that's a wonderful idea...i think your Dad's right Ananya..."

Ananya "not now Dad..." she said and went back to her room...

Mitali "Manmohan, don't worry she will be fine in few days..."


Veer was at the college...

he was thinking about how Ananya slapped him...

Vishal "hi Veer...have you completed the project??"

Veer "i have to remake my project"

Vishal "why??? and where is Ananya...she is also with you in this project"

Veer "don't you take her name again, I hate her...i will make the project by myself"

he said and walked towards the building...

Vishal was surprised to see Veer saying those words for Ananya...


After two months...

Veer "yes Dad...i can join our business now...i have given my final exams..."

Khushwant "i am so proud of you my Son..."

Shilpa "i think he can handle our next project in Himachal"

Khushwant "oh yes...Veer...we have our hotel in himachal, but we are renovating can go there and look after the work..."

Shilpa "yes can stay there until the work finishes..."

Veer "alright mom...i will leave tomorrow"

Khushant and Shilpa were happy to see Veer working towards their business...


It was a long journey for him...the hotel was surrounded with the mountains and green valley...

the caretaker and manager came to receive him...

Manager "sir the construction is going on the ground floor...but we do have our guests staying in our hotel..."

Veer "that's good...i would need the whole report please..."

Caretaker took the luggage '..

Veer looked outside the window of his was a pleasant weather...he thought of going for a walk.

As he walked towards the narrow path... he heard someone shouting for help, he went towards the cliff by the end of the path... a girl had slipped over... he helped her...

veer "how did you reach here?? he asked her"

Rani "hi my name is Rani...i was clicking some pictures when my foot slipped over...but thanks for helping..."

Veer "that's alright..." he said and started walking...

Rani "wait...hello...whats your name???"

Veer "Veer Malhotra..."

Rani "are you a visitor...i am sorry if I am asking too many questions..."

Veer "i am getting late.."

he said and walked away...


Few days later...

Veer "so this is the list of our competitors"

Manager "yes Sir...and top most is this hotel...which is located a few minutes away..."

Veer "alright...i would check around and keep this list in my room"

Veer strolled casually towards hotel 'precious stone' who were his biggest competitors...

while he was walking he heard the horn twice...he came on the side...still he heard the noise... he turned around...

he was shocked to see her...

Ananya stepped out of the car "does this road belong to you???"

Veer "you blind girl, if you see carefully you can pass through this road...i am not walking in the middle"

Ananya "i am blind??? what do you think of yourself???"

Veer "just leave before I loose my temper"

Ananya banged the door of the car angrily "you know my temper very well"

Veer came closer "don't you dare point this finger"

Ananya "what will you do??"

Veer "i will break it..."

Ananya "really??? ok go ahead...then I will break you..."

Veer "listen, I don't want to talk to you..." he said and walked away...

Ananya was furious at anger she picked up a stone...was about to throw at him but it dropped and fell on her foot instead... "ouch" she said and pressed her lips in pain


Edited by Freethinker - 18 April 2012 at 9:03pm

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