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My Jigar Da Tukda (RTMC FF)Last partpg45 (Page 35)

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Posted: 17 February 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
awesom update dear
loved it
anu made da cake
sooo sweeet
new entry
sounds cool
cont soon
thanks 4 pm

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Posted: 17 February 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
i always find this ff very cuteEmbarrassed
i wonder whether veer has any flaw at allDay Dreaming...
he can make cake too...aww..my cutie pieEmbarrassed
don't cry any...u tried at least ...it's more than enoughEmbarrassed...
and then veer is with u nah...he'll teach uBig smile
now this new entryConfused
plz update soon dearSmile

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Posted: 19 February 2012 at 6:01am | IP Logged

awww...liked the cake scene...

it was awsum...

but this gud news is surely gonna be a bad news..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 20 February 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
nice one dearSmile...

but now someone is coming...hmm...it seems now we will see veer getting jealousWink...i would love to see him being possessive towards ananya...

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 6:43am | IP Logged
thanks for updates n pm
liked all updates written beautifully
loved valentine's special update
now who is this new entry?
any is enough for him
wanted to know how veer will react for this news

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Posted: 23 February 2012 at 4:06am | IP Logged
awesome dear
loved it

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 3:57pm | IP Logged



Part 22

Ananya was now more angry "how dare you Mom???"

Mitali "what?? I am your Mother and I have the right to select a boy for you."

Ananya "stop pissing me Mom...i don't want to marry right now"

Mitali "whose asking you to marry now??? they can wait...you can get engaged..." she said smilingly "they are very nice people...you will be very happy"

Ananya didn't say anything and rushed outside the house...she drove fast and reached college...

she went straight into the canteen and asked Vishal "where's Veer???"

Vishal "he's in the toilet"

Ananya walked towards the toilets...she didn't enter the boys toilet but started shouting "Veer...come out fast"

everyone looked at her ….. Priya came towards her "are you insane...??? stop shouting Ananya"

Ananya angrily "please don't disturb me"

Priya "fine...keep yelling then..."

after sometime Veer came out...

Ananya blasted on him "can't you understand that I need you"

Veer "can't you understand that I am in the toilet"

Ananya "i...i am upset" she said making a sad face

Veer "ok tell me why?"

Ananya "you are not serious ….right...you think I am just creating a big drama"

Veer "no Any..." he smiled...

Ananya "Veer...i am serious"

Veer "fine...then tell me what happened that made you so serious"

Ananya "i can't tell like this"

Veer "then??? do you want me to dance?"

Ananya "no...i will tell you after college..."



_____*****



Chadha house



Mitali "Mom, my friend Seema's Son is so good...i saw him once, that time he was very young"

Sulekha interrupted "but Mitali...is Ananya happy with your decision??"

Mitali "of course Mom...and she's too young to decide her right and wrong"

Sulekha "i know that...but I only want her happy"

Mitali came closer and kept her hand on Sulekha's shoulder "Mom trust me she will be very happy..."



____*******



It was evening...



In a restaurant...

Veer "how much more will you drink??"

Ananya "more...yes more...i will drink"

Veer looked at her while sitting on the opposite chair "but why are you drinking so much ???"

Ananya "don't stop me Veer...don't stop me today"

Veer "i am not stopping you...i am just asking you"

Ananya "well I hate Mitali..."

Veer "she's your Mother damn it...respect"

Ananya "fine...she has fixed my marriage with some witted man in London"

Veer was shocked "what????"

Ananya "and without even asking me...she want's to get rid of me...she's mean"

Veer "no Ananya...a mother can never be mean to her kids...you should talk to her"

Ananya "i will...i will talk to her today...i have to tell her about our relation...and Veer promise me..."

Veer "what?"

Ananya "just promise me that you will talk to your parents today"

Veer "today???"

Ananya "yes...we will talk together...i mean you talk to your parents and I will talk to my parents...we have to convince them otherwise it will be too late..."

Veer "alright...but I am scared now"

Ananya "you drink this..."

Veer "no way...you don't know my Dad...he against alcohol...i don't want to risk my life in danger"

Ananya "let me finish this and we will go home"

Veer "enough Ananya...don't drink more...how will you talk then??"

Ananya "don't stop me...i will fight with them today...this vodka will make me stronger..."

Veer "i don't know how to stop you...that's it Any...no more drinks"

he came towards her chair and lifted her in his arms...she kissed him on the cheeks... "i love you Veer...and you know that...isn't it"

Veer opened the door and made her sit on the seat... "i will drop you..."

Ananya gazed at him "why are you so nice and good..." she stopped ….came forward while he started driving... "and handsome...and sexy...and you have attractive eyes...your nose is so cute...and" Veer glanced at her "if you go like this in front of your Mother...she will eat you raw"

Ananya "forget about Mitali...don't spoil my mood... so I was at your nose... and your lips..." she came forward to kiss...Veer stopped the car "Ananya...please let me drive"

Ananya "wait..." she kept the finger on his lips... "first I will kiss you...only then you will drive"

Veer "Ananya..." she placed her lips on his...she kissed him gently...showered small kisses on his lips... he cupped her face in his hands... and moved his tongue inside her mouth...that made her more passionate...she kissed him fiercely...

After some time...he pulled back "your drinking is dangerous... every time you drink, you get more wild..." and started driving... he dropped her outside her house...

Ananya "wish me good luck dumbo"

Veer "that was my wish in the car...i will call you" and waved her as he turned the car away...

Ananya smiled happily "i am not scared of any one today..." she walked in and rang the bell...

Mitali opened the door... "Ananya ….you are late...where were you???"

Ananya "look I want to talk...i will not marry that bas***d"

Mitali was shocked to see Ananya drunk and using swear words... she called out "Manmohan...Mom...please come and see what Ananya is saying"

Manmohan was on the phone when he heard...he came and saw his daughter... Sulekha couldn't imagine her Any drunk...all were shocked...

Mitali "what did you say???"

Ananya looked around...she was still not in her senses...but the moment she saw her Grandmom and Dad whom she loved more than anything ….she automatically came in her senses... "i will not marry your friend's Son"

Sulekha "Any are you drunk??"

Ananya felt bad... "no...i..."

Mitali interrupted "you are...and now you can't tell lie...look Ananya enough of pampering...you are not a kid now...we will talk to you tomorrow morning"

Ananya went upstairs to her room...



____*****



Malhotra house



Veer parked the car and went inside...he dialed her no...

Ananya "Veer..." she started crying...

Veer "Ananya...why are you crying...???"

Ananya "Veer...i...i want to meet you...now..."

Veer "Ananya please understand...i will come tomorrow...promise"

Ananya "you will have to talk to my Dad directly..."

Veer "what??? but first let me talk to my parents..."

Ananya "fine then talk now"

Veer "they are sleeping now...i will talk to them tomorrow..."

Ananya "fine...i will call you tomorrow morning" she kept the phone... Veer was now thinking how to start the topic...he's too young to get marry...he's just twenty one...



___*******



Next Day



Chadha House



Mitali was walking angrily around the lounge...she wanted to talk to Ananya as soon as possible...

Sulekha "don't be angry on her...first listen to what she wants to say"

Mitali "no Mom...enough of pampering...i have to be straight with her...she's spoilt already..."

Manmohan was reading his newspaper...

Ananya came downstairs...she was walking slowly...she came near the dinning table when Mitali shouted at her "Ananya...wait"

Ananya looked at her …... "first you have to talk to me" Mitali said angrily

Ananya "what Mom?"

Mitali "last night, you were drunk, and you said you will not marry that bas***d...how dare you speak like this in front of your Mother"

Ananya was silent...

Mitali "let me make this very clear...you are getting engaged and we all are going to London...you will get married next month..."

Ananya looked at her Dad "Dad please say something...i don't want to marry now"

Manmohan looked at Mitali's angry face "Any beta...your mother is right...they are very nice family and you can study after your marriage...if you want we can stay in London with you..."

Ananya "no Dad...its not that thing...i just don't want to get married..."

Mitali stood in front of her "why???? tell me the reason why you don't want to marry him???"

Sulekha "Mitali don't be so angry at her..."

Ananya hugged her Grandmother "Grandma, please stop mom...i don't want to marry"

Suleka "Any...the family is very nice...i know you are feeling bad...but the boy is also willing to stay with us for sometime to make you comfortable...you will be very happy Any..."

Ananya "no Grandma...i will not marry anybody accept Veer"

Sulekha, Mitali and Manmohan were shocked "what????"

Mitali "who Veer...who is he???"

Ananya "i like him...and I will only marry him..."

Mitali was fuming angrily but Manmohan stopped her "wait Mitali...let me hear her...we must know the boy and about his family...if everything's alright...i have no problem..."

Manmohan looked at her Daughter and wiped her tears "Any ….tell me is he rich??"

Ananya "yes Dad...very rich like us"

Manmohan was happy "that's good...is the family reputable??"

Ananya "yes Dad...like us"

Manmohan "even better...i don't think so there's problem...what does his Father do???"

Ananya "they have five star hotels like us"

Manmohan "that's much better...but who are they??" he said happily

Ananya "Malhotra's..."

Manmohan was not smiling now... "you mean that royal hotel??"

Ananya "yes...Dad" she said nervously...

Manmohan and Mitali got super angry... "what????"

Manmohan "how dare you Ananya...i never expected this from you...i...i will kill that Malhotra..."

Mitali blasted at her "you didn't even thought about us for a minute...what kind of Daughter you are...you have ruined us..."

Sulekha felt bad "Ananya did you knew his parents??"

Ananya "yes..." she said and did not look into her Grandmother's eyes...

Sulekha "then why did you go ahead with him???" she said and left from there...

Mitali "that's it...you will not go anywhere...just stay in your room..." she looked at Manmohan "you book the tickets for London...we will get her married there..."

Ananya cried out bitterly " no Mom...please" but no body listened to her...


_____*********


Precap : Ananya slapped Veer...

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
EmbarrassedOuchtragedy 
tragedy...
n tragedy...

this ud ws tragedy...Ouch...

prcap is tragedy...Cry...

the physics exams which i m gonna give is tragedy...Ouch...

i m surrounded by tragedy...Disapprove...

'''ek bacci ki jaan nikal gayi...Cry...''



anu rushed till boy's loo.ROFL...amazing she is.

she is really used to drinking,Ermm or else she cud hav fall n collapsed Deadin front of her mother before talking to her...Silly...

best part ws off course the kiss.Blushing

wat wat ws the need of dat sooper tragic precap...Ouch

very cute ud...Embarrassed...
loved it reading...enjoyed.

LOVE U.



Edited by sweetsanyo - 04 March 2012 at 4:24pm

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