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Smoking_up Senior Member

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
very sweet update dear... Loved it... Finally confessionsss:-)

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ridzzi Goldie

Joined: 25 September 2011
Posts: 1798

Posted: 01 February 2012 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
awesome update...Clap
both are missing each other...
n finally veer decided to meet her n tell her about his feelings...but again he stops...why veer...??????...Ouch
but our anu...i toh really love this girl...full too bindass...Wink
she kissed that veer will be the first one to do...LOL
n finally they confessed...Dancing

Ananya looked into his eyes "i love you Veer...will you be mine forever"

Veer smiled lovingly "i love you too, I was already yours"

Veer forgot everything and embraced her tightly in his arms not wanting to leave her...she squeezed herself inside him...

Roshan hai yeh zameen, aasmaan sab ishq ke dum se
Dhalte hai din aur raat ishq ke hi dum se

Khushiyon ke beshumar behisaab se sikke khanke
Dil ki ab har muraad ishq ke hi dum se

Tu hai mera khuda, ab na hona juda
Kar de qaram ke dil yeh chain payega
Maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar
Hooo.. maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar

Ho.. sajde mein tere hi jhuk jaaun main sadaa
Teri hi baahon mein ho jaaun lapata
Chhayyan ho, dhoop ho rasta bhi ho naya
Humko ab kaisa dar sang jo hai tu chala

Ho.. ab tere sare hi gham hai mere
Ab meri khushiyan teri hai sada

Tu hai mera khuda, ab na hona juda
Kar de karam ke dil yeh chain paayega
Maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar

Ho.. maula maula re, shuar tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar

Roshan hai yeh zameen aasmaan sab, ishq ke dum se
Dhalte hai din aur raat ishq ke hi dum se

Ho khushiyon ke beshumaar behisaab se sikke khanke
Dil ki ab har muraad ishq ke hi dum se

Ho tu hai mera khuda, ab na hona juda
Karde karam ke dil yeh chain paayega
Maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar
Hoo maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar

update soon...
luv u...Smile

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Riyaa16 Goldie

Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 2411

Posted: 02 February 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
lovely update
atlast she purpose him
awesum update
thanks 4 pm

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sweetsanyo IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4262

Posted: 02 February 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Clapit was too good ,
i just loved it.Star
at last we got it...Heartthe proposal ud,
it was more than amazing.ROFL
anaya is soopre dooper coolBig smile...i just love her so much.
veer is caring and too good.Wink.
i was just speechless d way anu proposed veer''i love u ...wil b mine forevr..Blushing

u r just amazing dhanvi... love u .

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Amor. IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 41175

Posted: 02 February 2012 at 4:10am | IP Logged
loved it :)

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sonalimurat Senior Member

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Posts: 790

Posted: 02 February 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged
very nice part
n  dear sorry for late commenting,
finalyVeer - Anu confesses there love for each other EmbarrassedDancing
update soon

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Freethinker Goldie

Joined: 16 August 2010
Posts: 1989

Posted: 02 February 2012 at 4:26pm | IP Logged

Part 18

Veer came back out of flashback...its was almost 1:00am, he looked at Ananya and covered her with a blanket...then he opened the door and went outside...he somehow managed to reach his car that was parked outside her house...

He quickly started the car before anyone saw him...he thought about Ananya and her cute smile...the more he thought the more he smiled... "My wild cat" he said to himself while driving...

he reached home and saw the lights were still on...his Grandpa must me waiting for him...he opened the main door and entered the lounge and saw his Grandpa sleeping cosily on the couch...

Veer smiled and didn't wanted to disturb him... he got a blanket from his room and covered him...


Next day...

Chadha house

Ananya woke up early... she looked around and saw she didn't change last night...she again had headache... she looked at the clock, it was 9:00am... she could hear the sounds of prayer outside...that must be her Grandma...

she got up and quickly went for a shower...

she heard her phone ringing...she quickly came out of the shower... "hello Veer"

Veer "when are you coming???"

Ananya "no Veer...i can't come for gym...i have a bad headache"

Veer "who told you to drink so had so many shots yesterday"

Ananya "you could have stopped me"

Veer "as if you listen to were ready to take off your you remember that???"

Ananya "so was only you and me...and I don't mind taking my clothes off in front of you"

Veer "you are let me exercise...i will call you later"

Ananya "ok...i will reach college and see you there..."

Veer "ok bye"

Ananya started getting ready...

After some time...

Ananya came shouting '... "Grandma...Grandma"

Sulekha "what happened???"

Ananya "nothing..i am hungry...give me something to eat"

Sulekha "oh you scared me the way you were shouting...well the breakfast is on the table..."

Ananya "what is this???? cereals and way"

Sulekha "then what will you have??"

Ananya "can I have a cheese toast or aloo parantha please?"

Sulekha "i thought you were loosing some weight"

Ananya "why do I need to loose weight...i look fine"

Sulekha "you should loose some weight...otherwise who will marry you??? nowdays boys like slim girls"

Ananya "who wants to marry here???"

Sulekha " should be serious sometimes...won't you get married one day?"

Ananya "lets see...i am getting late please give me something to eat..."

Sulekha "ok wait..."

Ananya "when did you come back last night??"

Sulekha "i came back in the morning"

Ananya " you have another pooja today???"

Sulekha "no why do you ask???"

Ananya "just for my information..." she smiled... "ok I have to leave...bye"

Sulekha looked confusedly at Ananya's answer...


in the college

Priya "but how did he manage to get out of your house..."

Ananya "don't know...i didn't ask him..." while having her samosa...

Priya "you always put him in danger..."

Ananya "i had too much drink and I really don't know what happened last night"

Priya "oh my God Ananya...what if Veer did something with you and you must be unaware of???"

Ananya laughed out... "Veer '...oh my God...Veer will do something..." she laughed out loudly... "i am waiting for the day when he does that something..."

Priya "why are you laughing...this is serious"

Ananya "you know Priya...Veer is the most descent boy on this earth...he believes in marriage...he won't do that something with me unless he marries me..."

Priya "and how are you so sure about that??"

Ananya "because I tested him you remember last year when we both got stuck in that lift next to the library..."

Priya "oh yes got stuck for one hour"

Ananya "yes and '."


Veer and Ananya in the lift...

Veer "let me call the, and check..."

Ananya "leave it..." she came closer...

Veer "Ananya ...we are in the lift..."

Ananya "so what..." she came closer and kissed him on the lips...

Veer hold her tightly...her kiss was making him mad...his hands were rubbing her back...he kissed her passionately...

After few minutes

suddenly he pulled back...

Ananya "what happened???"

Veer "nothing..."

Ananya "why did you stop???"

Veer "i might loose control" he whispered holding her tightly in his arms...

Ananya "so what..." while rubbing his chest

Veer looked into her eyes... and cupped her face with his hands... "you are my love...and I respect you..."

Ananya "so it means you will never come closer to me???"

Veer "i will...but after I make you mine forever...after I marry you...and I am already so close to you..." he said while showering small kisses on her lips...

Ananya " you think its bad if we come close now"

Veer "no I don't think its bad...but its just a matter of respecting our values...if you still want me to go ahead...then for your happiness I can do anything"

Ananya gazed at him and smiled "you are very nice I am not at all scared of anything...i love you even more...i am so lucky to have you"

she embraced him tightly...and kissed him on the lips...


Priya " oh...well that's so sweet"

Ananya came out of her flashback... "and that's the reason I trust him blindly... he truly loves me and I love him as well"

Priya "wow...that's so romantic..."

Ananya "my phone's must be Veer..."

Ananya picked up the phone "hello Veer...where are you??"

Veer "i am on my way...Ananya can you attend the practical class...i might get can tell me later on..."

Ananya "alright...i am going to class now...will meet you after that"

Veer "do ask the the professor about the exams next month...i mean the dates..."

Ananya "ok...come soon..."

Veer "i will..."


In the evening

Ananya "wow this ice cream is nice..."

Veer "you must try different flavors...i also like this one..."

Ananya "hmmm... its yummy"

Veer "so where are the notes...i will take home and give you tomorrow"

Ananya "oh...they are in the car..." she saw ice cream on Veer's lips...

Ananya "don't move..." she came closer

Veer "what happened...tell me"

before he could speak something...she came closer and licked his lips with her tongue...

Veer "Ananya..."

Ananya smiled "i wanted lick that ice cream..."

Veer smiled '.. "then I should lick as well...its not fair"

Ananya put some ice cream on her lips...

both laughed...

It was time to go home...

both of them stopped their cars in closed street... it started raining heavily...

Veer came out of his car...Ananya came out as well...

Veer "why did you come out??? its raining"

Ananya "please don't say anything..." She kissed him. She pressed up against him, against the outside of her car door on the dark road. A streetlight glowed somewhere but she couldn't see it because her eyes were closed. She heard only the rain. She felt only his soft lips against hers.


Edited by Freethinker - 02 February 2012 at 4:26pm

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sweetsanyo IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4262

Posted: 02 February 2012 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
i just loved it, 
its beautiful .
really lovely.
veer is really caring and awesome..he is a prefect bachelor...
if he so prefect , than for sure ananya has to imperfect...

u noe , people frm far apart poles of earth makes the best our very own ananya and veer.

veer values his ethics...well every gal wants a man like dis...

this is really good,
even i personally feel it...d way veer feels...i too respect it.

u r just lovely...dhanvi di

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