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ridzzi Goldie

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 2:18am | IP Logged
awesome update...Clap now they both get to know that their families are rivals...Ouch
n now what would they do...???????...Confused
n anu is thinking that she should stop talking veer...well she is going to do one of the most difficult thing of her life...WinkLOL
hope veer is not thinking this rubbish...n will fulfill the promise which he made to anu for always being her side...Smile
update soon...
luv u...Smile

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Riyaa16 Goldie

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 4:12am | IP Logged
nice update dear
n thanks 4 pm

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ananyashera Senior Member

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 4:32am | IP Logged
nice one dearSmile...

poor veer & any...their friendship is getting suffered due to their family problemsCry...but it will be interesting to see their bond getting stronger in spite of these situations...

well it reminded me our PRC storyDay Dreaming...'do pyar karne wale aur khandan ki dushmani'Wink...lets see what happens in this story...

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shruja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 4:34am | IP Logged
nice update
so they came to know tht their parents are rivals!!
n both thinking of each other
poor veer n any!! don't want to break their frndship
waiting for next update

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anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged

amazing part..


aww...poor veer n ananya..

bcoz of their parents..their relation will suffer...

waiting for more..

thnx for the pm...

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Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 1:56pm | IP Logged

Part 17 flashback cont...

Ronit "Veer listen..."

Veer was walking upstairs to his class...when he heard Ronit and stopped...

Ronit "are you going to Manali???"

Veer "no..."

Ronit "why yaar...lets go...we will have fun...its snowing there"

Veer "i don't feel like going..."

Ronit didn't force Veer, he saw him going in the class...he did notice that Veer looked sad...

in the class...

Meenakshi "i have given your name for the Manali trip"

Ananya "what??? why???"

Meenakshi "what?? you only told me that you are interested and you will be going"

Ananya "but I don't feel like going"

Ronit heard and said "even Veer is not means you both will have fun here"

Ananya blasted on Ronit "what the way...Meenakshi I am going..." she left the class...

Ananya felt so helpless...she couldn't even talk to Veer...

she missed him...she missed talking to him...she missed his sweet smile...she missed a caring friend...


Next day ….

Meenakshi "wow Ananya you are on time..."

Priya "hey Ananya...good we are going to Manali...i just love snow..."

Meenakshi "yes...and we will play around...i feel so excited"

Ananya didn't say anything... she quietly sat in the bus … it started moving out of the town...she felt something missing...she felt as if she is loosing something...she turned once...then closed her eyes and leaned towards the window...

Veer was playing with his basketball when he thought about Ananya...he missed her...he missed her smile...he missed talking to her...there was something strange happening with him...he thought of forgetting her...but still he missed her...without her he felt incomplete...without her he felt lonely...

he went to the swimming pool...he looked around and thought about his Ananya and how he couldn't say anything to her...

he missed her...

Lost n lonely coz you're the only
One that knows me
That I can't be without you
Lost n lonely coz you're the only
One that knows me
That I can't be without you

Hai kya yeh jo
Tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni
Koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi
Ab zindagi khaali
Hai meri
Lagne lagi
Har saans bhi khaali
Lost n lonely
Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely
Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely

Baldev "Veer...come have your dinner..."

Veer "i am not hungry"

Baldev "what happened Veer? You don't feel good"

Veer "nothing Grandpa...just don't feel doing anything...want to sleep...i am tired playing today"

Baldev "ok...then you must rest..."

he switched off the lights...

again he missed her, it was dark...and he wasn't sleeping...he just imagined her...

Ajnabi se hue
Kyun pal saare
Yeh nazar se nazar yeh milaate hi nahin
Ek ghani tanhaayi chaa rahi hai
Manzilein raaston mein hi gum hone lagi
Ho gayi ansuni har dua ab meri
Reh gayi ankahi
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely

Ananya was standing near the window and continuously thought about him... "what has happened to me..." she said to herself...she missed him badly...she wanted to have his glance...just one glance...she thought of calling him then stopped...

Raah mein roshni ne
Hai kyun haath choda
Iss taraf shaam ne
Kyun hai apna muh moda
Yun ke har subah
Ek bereham si raat ban gayi
Hai kya yeh jo
Tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi
Ab zindagi khaali khaali
Lagne lagi
Har saans bhi khaali
lost n lonely
Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely


Next Day...

Ronit "Veer I know you like her...then what's the matter??"

Veer "you won't understand...its a long family and her family can never become friends...they are big rivals...and I cannot continue my relation with Ananya...even she didn't talk to me after the party..."

Ronit "Veer...i think you don't love her"

Veer "how can you say that"

Ronit "if you would have loved her...then you wouldn't have lost all seems you have accepted that nothing can be done and you and Ananya have to stay away from each other..."

Veer "then what should I do??"

Ronit "you should talk to her...i am sure she must be waiting for you"

Veer "she's gone to Manali...i don't when they are coming back"

Ronit "so can go to Manali..."

Veer "me???" he thought something...

Ronit " can go and talk to her...tell her what you feel for her"

Veer "but what if she gets angry"

Ronit "so what...atleast you will get to know what she thinks of you"

Veer got up excitedly... "you are right"

After some time...

Veer was sitting in the bus...

Veer "Grandpa...i will come tomorrow...i have to study at Ronit's place for the night"

Baldev "alright but make sure you eat something"

Veer "don't worry...bye"

Veer was happy to meet Ananya...he didn't felt sad...nor he was feeling lonely...even the thought of meeting her made him happy and he was all set to propose her...

Bus stopped at the Manali bus stop...he knew the hotel address...

As he walked towards the hotel...he thought once again...something stopped him...he thought about his parents...his mother and father who raised him like a prince...always fulfilled his wishes and now he's going to do something that will hurt them... he didn't move...but then he thought of at least going and saying her final good bye...he will explain her that he cannot fulfill his promise...he had to do this...

as he walked outside the hotel...he looked up...then went the reception desk... "can you tell me Ananya Chadha's room no please...i am her friend Veer"

Receptionist "can you please wait sir...let me check" she called Ananya in her room

"maam someone wants to meet you...he is saying his name Veer...should I send him to your room?"

Ananya excitdely "oh...yes yes...please"

Receptionist "alright maam"

she turned towards Veer "Sir you may go to room no 105...from the lifts towards your right"

Veer "thanks" he walked towards the lifts...he was nervous for the first time...he came to propose her but now he wants to say his final words to her...he felt bad about the situation...but he still had to talk and clear everything...

he reached outside the room...his hands moved forward to knock the door but then he stopped...he thought of going back...he couldn't say final good bye to her...she was his dream girl...he could never look into her eyes and say that he will never meet with her or talk to her... he turned towards the lifts when the door opened...he turned to was Ananya...

Ananya " were going back??"

Veer "no no...i forgot something outside..."

Ananya "it must be snowing outside..."

Veer "when I came it just started..."

Ananya "come inside..."

Veer nodded and followed her inside the room...

He made himself comfortable on the couch...

there was silence between them...Ananya didn't look at him...

Veer broke the silence... "i...i came for some work"

Ananya "so you thought you will meet me"

Veer looked at her "oh yes"

Ananya "you don't have to say anything...if this relationship doesn't work...then it doesn't work"

Veer "its not that..."

Ananya "i understand...even I am not effected that much...its alright we were only friends..." she gave a fake smile...

Veer "i think I should leave now"

Ananya didn't say anything …..

Veer got up and left the room...

Ananya was still thinking about what she said and how she broke up her relationship...something deep inside was urging her to go and tell Veer that she's in love with him...this feeling grew more and more that made her rush out of the room only with a t-shirt...she looked outside but he already left...she went downstairs...rushing at the reception...

Receptionist looked at her in astonishment that she was only wearing t-shirt till her thighs... "maam you shouldn't go out...its snowing heavily...and you aren't wearing..."

Ananya didn't gave her the chance to complete her sentence and rushed outside the hotel...she looked at the road...she couldn't make out as of the snow...she glanced around and saw a young boy with a leather jacket walking towards the taxi stand...

Ananya shouted and ran after him "wait...wait...Veer.."

he stopped and looked his shock he saw her running towards him...

Veer " came without wearing your jacket...this t-shirt won't help fighting cold...its very will fall sick...please go back..."

Ananya didn't stop but came more near "i have not come to go back..." she said and smiled...she came more closer to him...

Veer "Ananya you aren't wearing your shoes or slippers...and you will catch..."

Veer couldn't speak more...his lips were shut...she placed her lips on his...her arms were curled around his neck...she lifted herself on her toes...and kissed him longingly...

she pulled back after few minutes...

Veer looked at her "Ananya"

Ananya looked into his eyes "i love you Veer...will you be mine forever"

Veer smiled lovingly "i love you too, I was already yours"

Veer forgot everything and embraced her tightly in his arms not wanting to leave her...she squeezed herself inside him...

people passing by were looking with a great surprise...Veer suddenly opened his eyes and saw people staring at them... he immediately pulled back... "Ananya lets go inside...people are looking at us"

Ananya "let them see we are in love...i want to tell everyone..." she looked into his eyes

both smiled...and hugged each other... Veer gave his jacket to Ananya and picked her up in his arms and walked towards the hotel...


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maria_awan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
So cute to see them together

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smilee17 Groupbie

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
awww!! sooo romantic!!!!!!
lovely update!!!!

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