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My Jigar Da Tukda (RTMC FF)Last partpg45 (Page 25)

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Veer-Anu's first HugEmbarrassedDay Dreaming
Awesome part dear
continue

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 7:40am | IP Logged
nice one dearSmile...

that phone no. part was funny...i am loving the way their bonding is getting developedEmbarrassed...

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Hey , Do U have Veer's no.???? Wink LOL loved it... !!!

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 8:19am | IP Logged
lovely update dear...Big smile
i specially loved that phone no. part...LOL
and this is one particular thing i love about any...she has attitude but it doesn't cross the limit...Approve
she admitted to veer that she has an ego problemSmile...and actually didn't mean to hurt himEmbarrassed...
veer looked so innocent that any wanted to hug himDay Dreaming...then who stpped u any?u should have hugged him na...Embarrassed
loved that pool scene...veer beat any in swimming this time...i love winners tooEmbarrassedLOL
plz update soon...Big smile

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 9:29am | IP Logged
lovely update
So finally after the fight they r 2gether again
luvd that pool scene
update soon

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged

awsum part di..

loved it to the core..

phewww chalo finally all set..

loved VA moments..

thnx for the pm...

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Part 15 flashback cont...



Ananya while lying on her bed...she only thought about Veer...the way he touched her waist and hugged her gently...she couldn't think of anything else...she was falling for him...

she picked up her teddy bear, her best friend...and started singing...

Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke
Mere sapno ke khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya
Pyar ka… lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve



Woh kabhi dike zameen pe
Kabhi woh chand pe
Yeh… nazar kahe usse yahan
Mein rakhloo bandh ke
Ek saans mein
Dhadkano ke paas mein
Haan paas mein ghar banaye
Hai bhoole yeh jahaan

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve



Jo… yeh badliyan woh chhed de
Toh chalke baarishein
Woh.. de aahate kareeb se
Toh bole khwaishen he aaj kal
Zindagi har ek pal
Har ek pal usse chaahe
Hai jiska dil hua

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

Soyi soyi palkho pe chalke
Mere sapno ke khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya
Pyar ka lafzo mein rang hai pyar ka

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahara bahara
Ke chain toh huwa farar ve
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar ve

She looked at the window...the moon , the stars, the sky everything was looking beautiful and new...

Ananya breathed slowly and closed her eyes as if she wanted to feel him near her...

she couldn't sleep the whole night...

___*******



Next Day

Malhotra house

Veer "mom I am getting late, I am going now..."

Shilpa "Veer at least finish your breakfast beta"

Veer "no mom...bye"

Veer left hurriedly as if he's going to miss something special...

At the school

She was standing at the gate as if waiting for him...

Veer "hi Ananya"

Ananya "hi Veer"

Veer "are you waiting for someone??"

Ananya "yes...i was waiting for Priya...i need to take my notes from her..."

Veer "alright..." he looked at her but she pretended to be busy looking for her friend.

Veer "i will meet you later Ananya..."

Ananya "yes sure Veer...bye"

Veer "bye..." as he walked inside he felt something strange...as if he was leaving with a very heavy heart...he didn't wanted to leave her for a single minute...but he couldn't show her feelings to her...what would she think of him...

Ananya sadly looked back and saw Veer entering the building...she couldn't say anything...she seemed so helpless...why didn't she said anything to him...she was falling for him...

_____******



Outside the school

Ananya made a plan to spend sometime with Veer...she asked the driver to go home and she will come with her friend as they have extra class today... the driver went home...she smiled...

Veer saw Ananya waiting outside the gate...

Veer "bye Ananya...are you waiting for the driver?"

Ananya "oh yes Veer...see its so late the driver hasn't come till now..."

Veer "oh...do you want me to drop you..."

Ananya "no no...its fine Veer...i will manage somehow..."

Veer "how will you manage...come with me..."

Ananya "i had to go to the swimming pool..."

Veer smiled "i am also going there...come we can go together"

Ananya smiled and sat with him in the car...

Both went to the swimming club...



After some time...

In the pool

Ananya and Veer were in the pool swimming and talking...

Veer "you know my Grandfather also comes in this club"

Ananya "is he coming today??"

Veer "no not today..."

Ananya "thank God...otherwise what would he say"

Veer "can I tell you something"

Ananya immediately "yes yes"

Veer "i hope you won't mind"

Ananya "not at all...now tell me fast"

Veer "i like your costume..."

Ananya "what???? that's what you wanted to say"

Veer "pink color suits you..."

Ananya smiled …. "what is favorite color?"

Veer "pink" while gazing at Ananya...

Ananya "what??? pink"

Veer "i mean I like pink but my favorite color is green"

Ananya thought something naughty... "oh no Veer...my back is itching …..its so difficult to swim like this"

Veer "where...???" he tried to look behind...

Ananya "my back...on the right side"

Veer "should I rub there...if its ok with you...you will feel better"

Ananya "really...it will help? She looked at him "then please rub...but softly"

Veer moved his hand to touch her back...as soon he touched with his fingers...Ananya closed her eyes...she felt as if she was carried away in some other world...

Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi



Veer "is it okay now??"

Ananya opened her eyes..."oh yes, thanks Veer"

She looked at Veer...there was something stopping her to tell what was there in her heart for him...

Ananya "i feel hungry...lets go and eat something..."

Veer and Ananya went inside the cafeteria...

Ananya "you know what I like to eat"

Veer "sure...i will get for you"

Ananya "Veer can you promise me one thing"

Veer "i can promise anything to you..."

Ananya "you won't ask??"

Veer "it doesn't matter...all that matters is the promise that we keep"

Ananya looked at him and smiled "Promise me you will always be my best friend"

Veer " I promise that I will always be your best friend and I will never leave you alone..."

Ananya "no matter what happens...Ananya and Veer will always be together …."

Veer and Ananya said together "its a promise" both were holding each other's hand.

_____********



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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
wow me first!!!!
superb dear
amazing
very sweet part
hope ananya tells him soon
cont soon dear
thnx 4 da pm

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