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sanyogitaprc Senior Member

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Posted: 09 January 2012 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
thanks 4 updating after long time...loved this partSmile...

Any is so possessive...veer surely knows how to handle her angerWink...good job veerClap...

plz update soon...

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shruja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
thanks for update n pm
sorry for late reply
loved the update
ananya is damn possessive for veer
but y he was so closed to that girls
so granpa helped veer n he got right gift for her
heheheh poor veer had to enter in house thro window
n ananya is too foody her anger melted easily
waiting for next update

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Amor. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
superb...too good part

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Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 4:54pm | IP Logged

Part 8

Chadha House

Ananya "wait...where are you going??"

Veer "going back home yaar...look at the time..."

Ananya "why the hell do you always want to go back??"

Veer "then what should I do here??"

Ananya "you dumbo...come here."

Veer "where...that close to you..."

Ananya put a chocolate in her mouth and signaled Veer to eat the other half from her mouth...

Veer "you want me to share that piece that's already in your mouth..."

Ananya frowned and took out the chocolate from her mouth "are you insane..." she came closer to him and put the chocolate in her mouth and moved closer to Veer's mouth...

Veer gazed at her pink lips that looked like rose petals...he came forward to bite the chocolate, he cupped her face and pulled her more closer...she bit his lip...this time he didn't stop and fiercely kissed her making her lips sore and painful...she lifted up after few minutes...

Ananya "wh...wha...what was that??"

Veer "that was a wild kiss for a wild cat"

Ananya "wait I will show what wild is"

She came closer and pushed him on the bed...both started kissing each other. Ananya sucked his lower lip and bit him...

Veer shouted "what the hell this the way you kiss..."

Ananya laughed... "yes and when you sucked my lips so badly then?"

Veer "fine, how much wild do you want to go"

Ananya came closer "i can go far...very far."

Veer "if that's what you want...take off your clothes and lets get wild" he said annoyingly

Ananya "...ok ok...i won't bite you now"

Veer looked outside the window...Ananya came closer and gently kissed him on his cheek... "is it hurting"

Veer touched his lips as he could taste his blood...

Ananya "wait I will get something to apply..."

Veer "no need...its fine...i must go now"

Ananya "lets go out for dinner...i haven't had anything since morning..."

Veer "you are crazy...what if someone catches us together at this time??"

Ananya "you always worry about little things...leave that on just jump out of this window and take these keys of my car and hide in the car..."

Veer shockingly "jump!!! you want me to break my legs..."

Ananya cupped Veer's face in her hands... "my sweet Veer...i know you are so brave...can't you jump of this window for your Any..."

Veer gulped " are really dangerous...i...i will die..."

Ananya "you won't my sweetheart...ok I will give you a kiss..."

Veer looked at her "your kiss won't save me..."

Ananya "fine then I will never kiss you Mr Veer Malhotra"

Veer "ok...ok...let me breath first...don't get angry Ananya...i will jump"

Ananya "that's like my hero"

Veer slowly looked outside the window and then looked at Ananya who was smiling '.he carefully held the window...then the pipe beneath it to get down...while getting down he got a scratch on his thigh...he looked at his jeans...that showed the mark of the scratch...

Ananya looked outside the window and saw Veer looking at his clothes...

Ananya "Veer..."

Veer looked up " come down"

Ananya "what should I wear??"

Veer "wow you are asking me here...when I am standing under your are come down quickly I will catch you"

Ananya "oh my God!!!!"

Veer "now what???"

Ananya "you would have gone through the main door...there isn't anyone home."

Veer "wow Ananya what brains you have...i came in a great risk and look at my jeans..."

Ananya "now stop complaining, I am go and sit in the car..."

Veer thought Ananya had no brains while he was sitting in the car...

Ananya came and sat on the driver's seat...she drove outside the gate...

Veer " car"

Ananya "leave...pick it up when we come back"

Veer "then let me drive"

Ananya "you know I hate sitting in the car without driving"

Veer "same here let me drive or I will take my car"

Ananya thought something... "ok I have a solution '..i will drive now and you can drive when we are coming back..."

Veer thoughtfully answered "alright"

Ananya " where are we going...expect for our hotels and restaurants..."

Veer "everyone is this city knows us so well...go anywhere...who cares"

Ananya "well you are right...lets have pizza..."

Veer "ok..."

Ananya stopped near a pizza place and again thought something "see we don't have to eat outside..."

Veer "what??"

Ananya "we will get the pizza in the car..."

Veer " are telling me as if you found out a great idea"

Ananya "you don't know anything...wait I will get the pizza..."

Veer was surprised as how come Ananya wasn't drinking today.

After some time...

Ananya got the pizzas and drove away to a silent street...

both were having pizza...

Ananya "oh wait...i forgot something..."

she took two glasses and a bottle of vodka...

Veer "i was thinking about that...but please I am not drinking today..."

Ananya "just one shot...please Veer"

Veer "arre...please I seriously don't want Grandpa will kill me"

Ananya "you told your Grandpa...????"

Veer "he knows I am with you"

Ananya "what???? are you crazy??...why did you tell him?"

Veer "long story please let me eat something first"

After some time...

Ananya and Veer were silently sitting on their seats and looking straight...

Ananya "Veer you know what...i hate you sometimes"

Veer "why??"

Ananya "i can't see you with any other girl...i feel you are only mine..."

Veer "of course I am only yours..."

Ananya thought something... "do you feel I am not so good looking??"

Veer "not at are beautiful"

Ananya "what about my face, my hands, my feet, my waist, my back.."

Veer "hmmm...can't say about the parts that I haven't seen"

Ananya "wait I will show you and then you tell me"

Veer "no no '.you are drunk...i can't see here"

Ananya "hmmm...i think we should go home...sitting in the car is a boring idea..."

Veer "that was your let me drive you come on this seat"

Ananya was drunk she couldn't move easily...Veer lifted her legs to shift her towards the seat...

Veer started driving...soon they reached Chadha house...

Veer "Ananya wake up...and drive your car inside the drive way"

Ananya "where are you going...don't go now"

Veer "i have to go car is you should go and sleep..."

Ananya "please veer...come for some time" she said innocently...


Edited by Freethinker - 10 January 2012 at 5:00pm

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shruja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 12:21am | IP Logged
nice update
both had good time with each other
n wild kiss for wild catLOLLOLLOLit reminded me our jungli billi n bigda rais Embarrassed
but will like to read their love story from startBig smile

Edited by shruja - 11 January 2012 at 1:09am

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samikshachauhan Senior Member

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Posts: 181

Posted: 11 January 2012 at 1:40am | IP Logged
haahaha ... ananya is really dangerous..LOL bach ke rehna dear veer..Tongue

lovely update dear!!! they complete opposite of each other... yet dey are so perfect togetherEmbarrassed

waiting for the next update...Smile

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sweetsanyo IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4262

Posted: 11 January 2012 at 1:47am | IP Logged
ROFLyes veer ...yes go inside wid her ...

i really love ananya's character...its cho chweet 
i love her

super dooper ud

best part-Ananya thought something... "do you feel I am not so good looking??"

Veer "not at are beautiful"

Ananya "what about my face, my hands, my feet, my waist, my back.."

Veer "hmmm...can't say about the parts that I haven't seen"ROFL(couldn't control laughing at dis)

Ananya "wait I will show you and then you tell me"(dis was crazy)Silly

Veer "no no '.you are drunk...i can't see here"

lov u 

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sweetnandu Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 2:22am | IP Logged
hilarious update..ROFL

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