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prahelika Senior Member

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 8:55am | IP Logged
dhanvi dear...where r u????Crywhen r we gonna get the next update??Cry

Edited by prahelika - 28 December 2011 at 8:56am

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samikshachauhan Senior Member

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
wer is the updateCry Cry Cry

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ananyashera Senior Member

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Posted: 04 January 2012 at 12:23am | IP Logged
no update...

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Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 4:06pm | IP Logged


Chadha house

Ananya quickly came out of her room and rushed outside. Sulekha saw her Grand Daughter running so fast...

Sulekha "Ananya have some didn't had anything since morning"

Ananya "later Grand ma"

Ananya picked up the keys and drover so fast...

Mitali "i wonder mom how will you handle Ananya after we leave" she said worriedly

Sulekha "oh...don't worry about her...i think she must be late for her class"

Mitali "ok mom I have to leave...i have packed everything...Manmohan must be waiting for me at the airport"

Sulekha "ok bye beta..."

At the college

Ananya entered the gates with full speed...she glanced around and saw his car, she walked up towards the canteen...with her sunglasses, short skirt and a sleeveless top everyone placed their eyes on the beauty cat...

Tanya was sitting close to Veer... "thank God Ananya is not here today"

Veer "what do you mean yaar"

Tanya "nothing Veer...we know you are cool... but Ananya she thinks you are her property"

Naina "that's true...and I always want to be so close to you"

Veer felt funny and started laughing...Vishal saw Ananya coming from the back door...he patted on Veer's back but Veer ignored him and was laughing with the girls...

Ananya took off her sunglasses and glared at Vishal...Vishal did not say anything and ran from there...

He came out and sighed "Veer you are dead today"

Ananya was standing behind Veer...she touched his shoulder but he thought of Vishal and ignored it...

Ananya "Veer..."

Veer stopped laughing at the voice and turned his head to look behind...he smiled at first and then saw her anger bulging... "Ananya I was just chatting..."

Ananya "how dare you Veer?"

Veer "what did I do?? believe me I didn't do anything wrong"

Ananya picked up the pastry and smashed on Naina's head...then she saw a bottle of soft drink , she emptied the whole bottle on Tanya...

Tanya "what the hell Ananya?"

Ananya came closer to her..."bitch"

Tanya "how dare you call me …."

Ananya again repeated and slapped her... "so you want to sit next to Veer...and you don't like when I come..."

Tanya remained quiet and walked off from there...

Veer looked at Ananya who was so angry that she would kill him...

Veer "listen Ananya..."

Ananya glared angrily at him...then walked off from the canteen towards her car... "i knew you will be just leave me"

She drove her car outside the gate...

Veer knew she hated when any girl came near to him...he knew she loves him a lot...he felt bad for hurting her...he was actually sitting too close with the girls...

Chadha house

Ananya entered the gates with full anger... she went straight to her room...her Grandmother saw her...

Sulekha "Any open the door...what happened ??"

Ananya "nothing grandma ..please leave me alone...i will be fine"

Sulekha knew Ananya is very strong and she can handle herself... "ok Any I have to go to Mrs Batra's pooja...will come must have your dinner"

Sulekha left...

Malhotra house

Veer was upset and not having his dinner...he dialed her no again but she had switched off her phone...

Baldev "what happened are not having your dinner"

Veer "nothing Grandpa..."

Baldev "veer putar, anyone on this earth can tell while looking at you...why you are upset...what happened"

Veer " girlfriend isn't talking to me"

Baldev "oh...why?? did you do something wrong??"

Veer "no... not exactly...i was talking to some other girls and she was angry"

Baldev "so you were only talking to other girls and she got angry"

Veer "no I was sitting too close with them...without realizing that she was standing behind me"

Baldev "hmmm...this is not good putar...when you have one girlfriend then you shouldn't be close to other girls..."

Veer "i know grandpa...but what should I do now..."

Baldev "ok...let me think..."

Veer "fast grandpa...i have to do something today"

Baldev "its too late...look at the time..."

Veer "doesn't matter...please tell me"

Baldev "fine...i think you should go now and say sorry...and take some gift for her...what ever she likes"

Veer "good idea...i will go now"

Baldev "but Veer putar...finish your dinner first"

Veer "thanks I will have my dinner with her...i know she must be hungry as well"

Chadha house

Ananya didn't open the door...she was still thinking of how Veer was sitting with other girls...the more she thought the more she sobbed...

She heard some noise at the window...she didn't bother...

"come help me get in Ananya..." Veer said while hanging at the window door...

Ananya rushed towards the window... "good just jump from here, I will be happy if you get hurt"

Veer "please don't say least let me come in..."

Ananya "what do you want??"

Veer "Any my Any...please don't get so angry...i will explain everything"

Ananya at last helped him get into her room...

Veer "who else is in the house??"

Ananya "no tell me"

veer " one...and you are at home...lets go to disc"

Ananya "no I will never go anywhere with must go with Tanya or that bitch Naina...just forget it Veer that I will go with you"

Veer "Any..."

Ananya annoyingly "don't you dare call me Any..."

Veer "Any...Any..Any"

Ananya "you...i will not leave you now"...she tried to hold his neck but he hold her hands and gazed at her... "leave me...and don't touch me"

Veer "ok ….fine...then I will have these Rum chocolates myself"

Ananya looked at the chocolates but still didn't came near him... Veer jumped on Ananya's bed "wow I love your bed...its so comfortable" he was eating and looking at Ananya...

Ananya "wait...don't finish...give me..." she took the box from Veer and started eating... "hmmm...these are so yummy...i just love them"

Veer "i know my Any loves them..."

Ananya annoyingly stared at him "what do you want??"

Veer "you" he came closer to her...and cupped her face with his hands... "i am sorry Ananya...i love you...that's all I know"

Ananya "then don't repeat it again"

Veer "of course I hug me"

Ananya smiled and hugged him tightly...


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sweetsanyo IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 April 2010
Posts: 4262

Posted: 08 January 2012 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
chooo... cute
its such a cutie pie couple...
i love them both
rum chocos r even ma fav...mentioning them in ur ud ...u hav made ur ud a hit...superhit.

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Simran_14 Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 8:11pm | IP Logged

awesome part

loved it dear
they r swwet
cont soon
Thanks 4 da pm

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sweetnandu Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
cute one..!!Embarrassed

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prahelika Senior Member

Joined: 13 December 2011
Posts: 901

Posted: 08 January 2012 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
so cute update after a long time...Hug...luv u...
aww and veer any is so sweet couple..Embarrassed...umm...ok sometimes any gets a little violent LOL but she is possessive about veer na...Embarrassed
but will it start some sort of problem later??Confused
loved how veer cared for any's feelings too..Big smile
waiting for the next update...Day Dreaming

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