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Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prahelika

Nice ud veer and anu in puja...and gran nd granny too...but why these 2 r so shocked knowing their grans r frnds? LOL plz ud soon waiting Day Dreaming
Thanks dear...will update soonSmile

Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

simply amazing n awsum part di..

loved it..

friends...wat a shock veer n ananya got..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

Thanks dear...Smile
Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanyogitaprc

nice update...

so grand parents of veer & ananya r friends now...good...

but their parents...joint owners of land...hmmm...lets see what happens...

update soon...

Thanks sweetieSmile will update soon
Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridzzi

awesome update...Clap anu had wore the suit for the first time...n that too pink...Tongue
an veer...u feel like eating her...hmmm...go eat one is stopping u...(just kidding)...LOL
well veer atleast appreciate her in a nice a good a gentleman...not like this...Ouch ROFL
n veer's parents n anu's parents are rivals...Shocked...o god what will happen to their their relation survive...????????...Cry
so they all r going for the same puja...hmm...
n baldev n sulekha r fr8...???????...kab se...ShockedLOL
update soon...
luv u...Smile

Thanks for such lovely comments...will update soon...Smile
Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged

Part 6

In the disc

Veer "now stop thinking Ananya"

Ananya "no Veer...i don't understand how on earth did they become friends?"

Veer "now leave it...its good atleast someone has become friends in these two families"

Ananya "hmmm...get me one more drink"

Veer "enough already had too lets go"

Ananya "Veer...please...ok last one"

Veer "fine...but last" he went towards the bar...while Ananya was sitting on the couch in the corner...

Rishab "wow look at that beauty..." Ananya was wearing black short dress...

Vinay "oh...she's so hot...lets go"

Both approached Ananya while she was looking at Veer...

Rishab sat next to her...he was about to touch her bare thighs...when she turned towards him...she stood up and slapped him hard on his face... "bloody bas***d"

Rishab got angry and hold her wrist "what did you say? bas***d"

Ananya hit him on his feet with her high heeled sandals and with her other hand gave him tight punch...then she twisted his hand towards his back "don't think I will let you scoundrel" she angrily pushed him on the floor and hit him hard with her sandals...

Vinay was about to approach her...when she glared at him he stood back...

Veer saw the crowd and came hurriedly towards the corner... "oh no..." he said and grabbed Ananya from her waist... "leave Ananya..."

Ananya "how dare he hold my wrist...i will beat him so badly that next time he will never touch anyone..."

Veer "you already beat him too much...Ananya leave...ok I will handle...please calm"

Veer pulled Rishab's hair... "next time don't do these cheap things..."

Rishab asked Ananya to forgive him... but Ananya was about to slap him again when Veer stopped her...

Ananya "why did you come in between...i was enough for these morons"

Veer "let it be lets go home..."

Ananya "why do you always want to go home?...can't you stay some more time with me" she came closer to him...he was sitting at the edge of the couch...Ananya came more closer...

Veer "Ananya"

Ananya "i am coming closer to you and you are going far"

Veer "wait" he pulled her and made her sit on his lap... "now tell me..."

Ananya gazed at him lovingly...his right hand was rubbing her soft and fair thighs while his left arm was curled tightly around her waist... Ananya's hands were rubbing his hair..while she was looking down at him...she came closer to feel his lips...Veer pulled her with a jerk and kissed her lips... he sucked on her lips fiercely...she pulled back... "you are wild at times Veer" she said while passionately gazing at him

Veer "you haven't seen how wild I am yet" pulled her again and deeply

kissed her...

After some time they were madly kissing each other...


Chadha house

Sulekha "i will go in the park today"

Mitali "mom we are planning to go to Himachal, since the land dispute is becoming a headache for us"

Sulekha "ok...when are you planning to go and is Ananya going with you??"

Mitali "we have to leave Ananya isn't going with us"

Sulekha "alright...don't worry I am here to take care of her"

Mitali "Mom...when did she had dinner last night?"

Sulekha "she slept very early ...around 7pm"

Mitali "how come she's still sleeping...its not good Mom...sleeping too much is also bad...its 12 in the afternoon"

Sulekha "wait I will go and see"


Malhotra house

Shilpa "Dad we both have to go...we need to settle this problem once and for all"

Khushwant "yes Dad... we need to finish this story"

Baldev "whatever you think or do just make sure that in quick decision you don't make wrong decision, because that land is very valuable...and if you construct a hotel there, it will give you big benefit..."

Khushwant started thinking...

Shilpa "Dad you are right, we shouldn't say anything in frustration...i know even I don't like those people but we have to get rid of it so we don't have to see their face again"

Khushwant "yes...we have to make a firm decision this time"

Baldev "when will you come back?"

Shilpa "lets see shouldn't take more than two days"

Baldev "alright, don't worry about Veer..."

Shilpa "but where is Veer?? I haven't seen him since morning"

Baldev "he's gone to gym"

Khushwant talking on the phone "ok...thanks"

Khushwant "Shipla lets are confirmed..." then looked at Baldev "ok Dad...please take care and call me if anything urgent"

Baldev "ok putar God bless"


In the gym

Veer was exercising...

Priya "where's Ananya??"

Veer "don't know...must be sleeping.."

Naina "thank God...she's not with you today...i must tell you Veer she keeps spying on you all the time..."

Veer didn't responded...Naina came near Veer….he was lifting up the weights... "you are so hot Veer..." she gazed at his body...

"we should go out for a date..." Naina said while touching his shoulder...

Veer "stop irritating me" and went away

Priya "i told you Naina...why do you do that?"

Naina "i just want him...he's so..."

Priya "stop this you even know if Ananya gets to know about this, what will happen??"

Naina "what?? she will blast on me...what else can she do...i understand she is Veer's girlfriend but that doesn't mean he can't even talk to other girls"

Priya "its not Ananya whose stopping him, he himself doesn't talk to girls much"

Naina "do you know how Ananya became Veer's girlfriend??"

Priya "yes...when they were in school..."

Naina "what?? but did Veer propose Ananya??"

Priya "no Ananya proposed was the last month of our schooling...Ananya was badly hurt while she fell of the stairs...she couldn't even walk...then Veer helped her and carried her in his arms...since then they both got some connection and I think they both fell in love"

Naina "what?? anyways" while gazing at Veer "Veer must be very passionate...look at his body...everytime I look at him ...i just want him...Ananya will be lucky in this matter"

Priya "shut up could you imagine such weird things"

Naina "i had a dream where Veer was lying on top of me and kissing me passionately...i was sweating badly...he was not leaving me...and"

Priya "you are too much...come out of your wild dream and start your exercise.


Chadha house

Suleka "Any darling wake up...its so late...i hope you are well" she shouted outside Ananya's room

Ananya opened her eyes...she had was still the hangover from last night... "i think I had too much" she said to herself...then got up...she saw she didn't even change her dress...she quickly went to the bathroom for shower...

"Grandma I am having shower...will come out in few minutes"

Sulekha "alright my doll"

Ananya had shower and came out to check the time...she was shocked to see its 1:00pm...then she checked her phone... "he didn't call me at all" she said "how mean" she dialed his number ….

Veer "hi baby..."

Ananya "why didn't you call me??"

Veer "i thought you had too much last night so you should rest."

Ananya "where are you now??"

Veer "just came back from Gym"

Ananya "fine...i will call you later" she disconnected the phone...


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Simran_14 Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
awesome update!!!
love it dear
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm

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prahelika Senior Member

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Cute ud dhanvi Smile so i guessed it right..any proposed veer LOL any beat rishabh...luv this girl everything is happenning jst opposite to what happens in other stories LOL i wanna know sum more about their school days romance plz plz plz..waiting Day Dreaming

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ridzzi Goldie

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
awesome update...Clap
so anu proposed veer...veer what are u doing...?????
so they are together since their school...Tongue
n loved the scene where anu beats rishab...LOL
it's like the story...jaane tu jaane na...where hero believes in non-voilence...n heroien is totally believes in voilence...LOL
n loved the kissy kissy part too...Embarrassed

update soon...
luv u...Smile

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