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sanyogitaprc Senior Member

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Smile nice update dear...

veer & ananya r madly in love with each other Embarrassed...

so their families r having problems due to businees Unhappy...hmmm...

i hope both grand-parents will support veer & ananya ...

plz update soon...

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Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 6:08pm | IP Logged

Part 5

Chadha house

Mitali "wear this suit...don't argue Ananya"

Ananya "i will never wear know I don't like...and I have never worn suit"

Mitali "one day you will have to wear...these skirts, and jeans won't look good at the pooja"

Ananya "fine...then leave me I don't want to go"

Mitali "Ananya you never listen to hurry up..."

Sulekha "Ananya are you ready??"

Ananya "look wants me to wear this"

Sulekha looked at the lovely pink suit... "oh wow...this is will look so beautiful on my Any"

Ananya "not again Grandma...please you know I hate wearing suit"

Sulekha "Ananya...i want to see you in suit...i have never seen you in this dress before...i am sure you will look so wear it fast...i am waiting downstairs"

Mitali "Mom...i won't be able to come as Manmohan and I have a business meeting...he informed me 15 minutes back...its an urgent meeting"

Sulekha "ok...Ananya will come with me"

Mitali "ok mom...take care"

Ananya made a big frown and wore the pink chudidaar suit... she looked in the mirror... "is that you Ananya??" she said ….

Sulekha was waiting for her downstairs...she saw her coming and was surprised "Any I can't believe you look damn good"

Ananya "what?? really Grandma...i thought I must be looking like a fool..."

Sulekha "i hope no evil eye looks at my daughter" while putting black dot at the back of her ear

Ananya "oh no Grandma...not again...i hate this black dot"

Sulekha "ok lets go now...every one will be jealous of me...i have the most beautiful grand daughter."


Malhotra house

Shilpa "but suddenly...ok I will come now..."

Baldev looked at his handsome Grandson who was getting ready...

Shilpa "Dad...sorry I can't go with you...i have to go for an important business meeting...Veer be nice"

she left and Baldev asked Veer "lets go Putar...i am sure you will enjoy the pooja"

Veer made a big frown "i am going just because you asked me..."

Baldev smiled "ok...ok now lets go..."

Veer "why driver??? I will know I don't like sitting in the car..."

Baldev asked the driver to leave and Veer will drive...

Both left for the pooja at Sharma house...


Taj Hotel Delhi

Shilpa "now this meeting?? but I don't understand that if we have constructed the hotel in the right place then what's the matter??"

Khushwant "don't know...i am waiting for the chairperson to come"

Mitali saw Shilpa and made a face...

Manmohan stared at Khushwant who angrily stared back at him...

Chairperson "please settle down...we have come to discuss regarding this land area on the outskirts of Himachal..."

Khushwant "i paid more money so it should belong to me"

Manmohan "how come you paid...i have paid equally and I like this place"

Khushwant "you can buy somewhere else...i want this land"

Manmohan "are you threatening me??"

Chairperson "wait gentlemen... I have not completed my sentence...both of you have five star hotels, why do you always fight, now I will make a suitable decision and you have to agree..."

both the parties looked daggers into each other...


Sharma house

Sulekha "Ananya you drive so must drive please park nicely..."

Ananya "i know Grandma..."

Sulekha got off the car...Ananya while closing the door got her duppatta stuck in the door... "you go ahead , I am coming Grandma"

Sulekha went inside the was a huge hall decorated with flowers all around...some girls were making rangoli and some were busy dancing...

Sulekha met Mrs Sharma "hello are you??"

Mrs Sharma "i am fine are you...where's Shilpa?"

Sulekha "sorry beta she had other work but Ananya has come with me"

Mrs Sharma "oh that's good...where is she??"

Sulekha "she coming..." and glanced at the door...

Ananya will standing near the door of her car "how stupid...this duppatta and this place...and me"

she was talking to herself...when one car stopped right in front of her...she didn't bother to look until she heard a voice " here??"

She looked up and saw Veer, she was surprised to see him "oye what are you doing here??"

Veer "oye hoye suit and you...i must say you are looking like an ice cream cone..."

Ananya "what??? ice cream??"

Veer " i feel like eating you" gazed at her...

Ananya "is someone else with you...i mean your parents??"

Veer "My Grandpa …..but I left him on the gate...he saw his friend and went with him..."

Ananya sighed "thank park your car then come and help me"

Veer looked at what Ananya was doing...He parked his car and came back to her...helped her to take her duppatta carefully from the door...

both looked at each other and smiled...Veer glanced around... "lets go now"

Ananya shook her head willingly...


Taj Hotel Delhi

Manmohan "but how can we have a joint land??"

Chairperson "sorry that's the only both are too stubborn"

Khushwant "i won't even look at that land which I have to share with him...i don't need it give it to him"

Manmohan "even I don't want such keep it"

Chairperson got irritated of them... "please...tell me your decision in another half an hour...i need a break"


Sharma house

Baldev saw Sulekha and went to say hello to her...

Sulekha "have we met before?? let me think..."

Baldev "park...jogging"

Sulekha "oh yes are you gentleman??"

Baldev "i am very well how about you??"

Sulekha "i am alright...just waiting for my Grand daughter"

Baldev "really? I am also waiting for my Grandson..."

Veer and Ananya entered the hall...Sulekha glanced at the door and went towards Ananya...

"Any where were you???" Sulekha asked...

Veer "Any??? is that your pet name??" laughed

Ananya got red "no..." then stared at her Grandma "my stupid dupatta got stuck in the car"

Sulekha looked at Veer "do you know each other Ananya??"

Ananya "yes Grandma...he studies in my class"

Veer "hello aunty..."

Sulekha "beta you can call me Grandma"

Veer smiled "sure..."

Baldev "Veer putar...i was looking for you..."

Sulekha "so he's your GrandSon??"

Baldev "yes...isn't he handsome" while standing closer to him.. then looked at Ananya "oh so this is your beautiful Grand Daughter"

Sulekha smiled "yes...isn't she the most pretty girl?"

Ananya wished Baldev...

Veer and Ananya looked at each other confusedly...

Ananya "Grandma do you know..."

Baldev "yes putar...we are friends..." and smiled..

Veer and Ananya shockingly looked at them... "Friends!!!!"


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ridhithakur Senior Member

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
veer n ananya made 4 eah other
great update thanx 4 sharing

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ananyashera Senior Member

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Smile awesome update dear...

veer & looks like destiny also want them to be together always...

thank god...their grand parents became friends...veer & ananya r shocked Shocked...

their parents having joint land...hmm...interesting...

plz update soon...

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Simran_14 Goldie

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
great update dear
loved it
veer n ananya r made 4 each other
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm

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Rukmini13 Groupbie

Joined: 21 August 2011
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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Thank u for new ff on rtmc...nd i just luved the Characters...ananya nd veer...oh god ananya is my favourite...they both are perfect for each other...nd yah the great grandfather nd grandmother they r awsom...hmm so there parents r pahlibar any ne suit pahna hai...can imagin... I m in luv with ur ff...luv u

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prahelika Senior Member

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Nice ud veer and anu in puja...and gran nd granny too...but why these 2 r so shocked knowing their grans r frnds? LOL plz ud soon waiting Day Dreaming

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anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 7:28am | IP Logged

simply amazing n awsum part di..

loved it..

friends...wat a shock veer n ananya got..

continue soon..

thnx for the pm...

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