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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 27 (Last Part)



Mitali was shouting at the servants for completing the decorations...Sulekha was asking the priest regarding the time and other things which might be required for the wedding...


Manmohan organized the grand wedding for her only daughter at their five star hotel...

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The wedding Day...


Ananya "you are still scared...i can't believe...now you go and get ready..."


Veer "how will I get down...???"


Ananya "how did you come up???"


Veer "silly girl...i mean there are so many guests...how will I go down??"


Ananya "hmm... wait...let me check..."


Veer "see that's why I don't like your ideas...but you never listen...now if I don't reach on time...how will I get ready for the wedding..."


Ananya "you panic a lot Veer...let me think of a solution..."


Veer "yes yes...go on..."


Ananya "ok ...there is no one on the back side of my room...you can get down by his pipe and easily escape..."


Veer "you will surely kill me" he slowly got down the pipe...


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Mitali knocked Ananya's door "are you ready??? lets go we need to reach the hotel..."


Ananya made sure Veer got down the pipe and escaped from the garden "yes mom...coming.."


Mitali "just pack each and every thing...you will get ready at the hotel.."


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Shilpa and Baldev were looking for Veer "Veer...Veer... where are you??"


Baldev "shilpa, beta ring on his cell phone...see where he is...he must get ready soon"


Shilpa "yes papa...i will check..."


Veer "mom, I forgot something...i am on the way...coming..."


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Evening...at the hotel...


the wedding started with showers of flowers all around...for Ananya and Veer this was their happiest moment... all the friends and family showered their blessings upon the lovely couple...


after the wedding...they headed off for lunch...



It was a grand lunch... Manmohan made sure everything was perfect... all the family gathered around the round table...they were enjoying their lunch...


Ananya saw a bottle of Vodka and mixed in her orange juice...one after another she had too many glasses... Veer noticed and took the bottle from her... "are you mad Ananya..."



Ananya stood up "i...i want to raise a toast"


everyone was surprised to see her drunk...


Sulekha literally fainted "oh my God...Any"


Ananya "please please...you don't have to over react...i didn't had any alcohol...i...had orange juice..."


they all smiled but asked her to sit...


Ananya "mom...dad...grandma...and my loving Veer...and my mom -in law, father in law and grandpa...i thought of confessing one thing..."


Veer tried to control her...but she would not listen to him...


Ananya "well...i love Veer...and he loves me...and we both love each other"


Mitali "Ananya beta...we know this...now sit and ..."


Ananya smiled... "but...you don't know this...that...i ….i am.."


Veer "Ananya...you must sit...i think you are tired..."


Ananya "no no...Veer...i am so so happy today...we won..."


Mitali "won???"


Shilpa "won???"


Sulekha "won???"


Ananya "yes...won...i ….i am not pregnant..." she giggled...


Mitali "what??"


Shilpa "what??"


Sulekha "really??"


Veer put his hand on his face...


Ananya "yes...yes...i am not pregnant...i lie to all of you...so that I can marry Veer..."


everyone was silent...for few seconds...


Ananya's smile vanished... "Veer...why is everyone quiet..."


Baldev laughed... then sulekha...


Mitali and Shilpa smiled...


Baldev "i am lucky to have an honest daughter in law..." all laughed...



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Veer and Ananya's first wedding night...


Veer "don't talk to me"


Ananya "no don't say that...i am sorry...please..."


Veer "let me sleep"


Ananya "sleep...no no...Veer...we can't sleep today...its our first night and"


Veer "and you have spoiled it..."


Ananya "alright I am sorry...i promise I will agree what you say"


Veer "promise? I want something from you, will you give me"


Ananya "of course Veer...what ever is mine...its all yours"


Veer "no you promise me that what ever I ask you will give me"


Ananya "alright...i promise"


Veer "then a need a promise"


Ananya "promise...??"


Veer "yes...promise that you will never touch alcohol again in your life...i hate when you drink"


Ananya looked at him and came closer "Veer...its just an alcohol...if you ask me I would have given my life for you...i love you...i only need you...i will never drink again"


Veer happily embraced her tightly in his arms...


After some time... Ananya came closer and kissed him passionately...he pulled her towards the bed...


Ananya "i am so happy...finally I will be one with you"


Veer "i love you"


Ananya "i love you too"


Veer made love to her...she smiled under him...



And they lived happily ever after...

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Posted: 11 years ago
reso jii

last part h😭
~EDITED~
god, damn hilarious

alcohol evn on wedding day

she disclosed evrythng
wow, 
yes really honest dil.

lovely prt
n damn lovely stry

really enjoyed it
i will miss anu, n dhwani iwll miss her too.

veer is realy sweet.

first nite.
veer finally tamed her
vry good 

loved the stry 
lov u

write more di


Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
last part...di u finished it so soon...😲
but it was really good...πŸ‘
finally they got married...anu's trick worked...πŸ˜‰
n vodka on her marriage...hey bhagwan,n she tell everything to their family...honesty...good...😊
n veer...finally he succeded in taking promise from her that she never drink again...πŸ˜†
n then they lived happily ever after...😍
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb ud dhanvi...
luved it...😊
sorry for commenting so late...πŸ˜”
luved alcohol scene...sometimes drinking is beneficial...πŸ˜›
n finally they got married...πŸ₯³
fabulous ud ...
luv uπŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
 
It's last part
ohhh
 
But I loved that finally they  are married now
n Anu is so sweet she told to family that she isn't pregnant .
Veer only for you she left Alcohol .
they lived

And they lived happily ever after...

wow 😍  😍  😍
 
Dhanvi di than you for giving such a beautiful story
n keep writing like this
we all liked to read
 
Love u ⭐️ 
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Posted: 11 years ago
πŸ˜†
Originally posted by: Freethinker

Part 27 (Last Part) nhhhiii😭



Mitali was shouting at the servants for completing the decorations...Sulekha was asking the priest regarding the time and other things which might be required for the wedding...


Manmohan organized the grand wedding for her only daughter at their five star hotel...

-wow wedding dayπŸ˜ƒ-----πŸ˜ƒ

The wedding Day...


Ananya "you are still scared...i can't believe...now you go and get ready..." anu is anuπŸ˜†


Veer "how will I get down...???" 🀣


Ananya "how did you come up???"


Veer "silly girl...i mean there are so many guests...how will I go down??"


Ananya "hmm... wait...let me check..."


Veer "see that's why I don't like your ideas...but you never listen...now if I don't reach on time...how will I get ready for the wedding..."


Ananya "you panic a lot Veer...let me think of a solution..." 🀣really


Veer "yes yes...go on..."


Ananya "ok ...there is no one on the back side of my room...you can get down by his pipe and easily escape..." omggg by pipe yeh scene to hona hi chahiye love stories me..pipes paly an important role in love storiesπŸ˜†agar pipe na ho to boyfriends ka kya hoga


Veer "you will surely kill me" he slowly got down the pipe... πŸ˜ƒsaccchiii



Evening...at the hotel...


the wedding started with showers of flowers all around...for Ananya and Veer this was their happiest moment... all the friends and family showered their blessings upon the lovely couple...


after the wedding...they headed off for lunch...



It was a grand lunch... Manmohan made sure everything was perfect... all the family gathered around the round table...they were enjoying their lunch...


Ananya saw a bottle of Vodka and mixed in her orange juice...one after another she had too many glasses... Veer noticed and took the bottle from her... "are you mad Ananya..."oopppsss😲



Ananya stood up "i...i want to raise a toast"


everyone was surprised to see her drunk... me tooo😲


Sulekha literally fainted "oh my God...Any"


Ananya "please please...you don't have to over react...i didn't had any alcohol...i...had orange juice..."


they all smiled but asked her to sit...


Ananya "mom...dad...grandma...and my loving Veer...and my mom -in law, father in law and grandpa...i thought of confessing one thing..." wow she is so cute naaa πŸ˜›


Veer tried to control her...but she would not listen to him...


Ananya "well...i love Veer...and he loves me...and we both love each other"


Mitali "Ananya beta...we know this...now sit and ..."


Ananya smiled... "but...you don't know this...that...i '.i am.."


Veer "Ananya...you must sit...i think you are tired..."


Ananya "no no...Veer...i am so so happy today...we won..."


Mitali "won???"


Shilpa "won???"


Sulekha "won???"


Ananya "yes...won...i '.i am not pregnant..." she giggled...omggg


Mitali "what??"


Shilpa "what??"


Sulekha "really??"


Veer put his hand on his face...bechara veer


Ananya "yes...yes...i am not pregnant...i lie to all of you...so that I can marry Veer..."


everyone was silent...for few seconds...


Ananya's smile vanished... "Veer...why is everyone quiet..." she is so innocent


Baldev laughed... then sulekha...


Mitali and Shilpa smiled...


Baldev "i am lucky to have an honest daughter in law..." all laughed...

πŸ˜ƒthank god everything is fineπŸ˜ƒ

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Veer and Ananya's first wedding night...


Veer "don't talk to me" whyyy?????πŸ˜’


Ananya "no don't say that...i am sorry...please..."


Veer "let me sleep"


Ananya "sleep...no no...Veer...we can't sleep today...its our first night and" 😳😳😳


Veer "and you have spoiled it..."


Ananya "alright I am sorry...i promise I will agree what you say"


Veer "promise? I want something from you, will you give me"


Ananya "of course Veer...what ever is mine...its all yours"


Veer "no you promise me that what ever I ask you will give me"


Ananya "alright...i promise"


Veer "then a need a promise"


Ananya "promise...??"


Veer "yes...promise that you will never touch alcohol again in your life...i hate when you drink"


Ananya looked at him and came closer "Veer...its just an alcohol...if you ask me I would have given my life for you...i love you...i only need you...i will never drink again" thats like a gud girlπŸ˜ƒ


Veer happily embraced her tightly in his arms...


After some time... Ananya came closer and kissed him passionately...he pulled her towards the bed... ☺️☺️☺️


Ananya "i am so happy...finally I will be one with you"


Veer "i love you" 😳


Ananya "i love you too"😳


Veer made love to her...she smiled under him...☺️



And they lived happily ever after...πŸ˜•

_________**************************





lovely update tha di but why u ended itπŸ˜•
aise thode hi hote hota h
im going to miss maa fav n cutie pie couple😭
but koi baat nhiπŸ˜•

thank u for this lovely ff

thanks 4 pm
love u πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi di!
lovely part...finally they got married.
Finally Anu confessed the truth in her stupor..
liked Baldev's comment in this scene..πŸ˜†
Thank God Veer finally made Anu promise not to drink...
Lovely ending...it was a great story di πŸ‘
Can we please get an epilogue? Don't the readers deserve a little sneak into their post marriage life? Plz? Pretty plz?. Pretty plz with a cheery on top???😍
Love u...πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by glossyglassy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved whole update!!
its beautiful
atlast they got married!!
loved she confessed truth to all!!
n liked balvant comment on tht!!
after all she is lady sallu!!
thank god veer took promise from her not to drink again
thanks for beautiful ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww it ended :(

but really awesome ending so no complaints
loved it <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dhanvi diii πŸ˜ƒ

oh man,i love you so much for writing such amazing stories πŸ€—

Im telling you,you're epicness knows no limits πŸ˜Ž 

Loved this story BIGTIME.CUTENESS at hi best!

But why did you end it so soon? πŸ˜­ 

Chalo anyways,thank you for giving us such an amazing story! πŸ€—

Love you πŸ€—

p.s : It saddens me that tum mere ho and my jigar da tukda r both completed. πŸ˜” Now my only hope is shikar as ur oder ff's are completed.Dont even think bout ending it,im super addicted to that one πŸ˜