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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 23


Ananya called Veer "you have to come now or I will come at your place...you need to talk with my parents now"


Veer "fine...let me talk to my parents first"


Veer was angry that everything was happening so fast...he didn't wanted to loose Ananya...


Veer went to his parents and told them about Ananya...


Shilpa yelled at Veer "how dare you Veer...how dare you even think of that...you know we don't like those people and you want to marry their daughter...are you out of your senses??"


Khushwant was angry at his Son... "Veer I never expected this from you"



Veer "Mom Dad...i love her and I can't leave her like that...i have to go and talk to her parents...they are marrying her somewhere else...please understand"


Shilpa "good if they are marrying her...now you don't go...Veer understand beta...we can never accept her as our daughter in law"


Veer "fine and I can never forget my promise..." he left and drove towards Ananya's house...


After some time


Chadha house


Veer entered and shouted "Ananya...Ananya come out"


Ananya was crying in her room when she heard him...she smiled and came out...


she went outside and hugged him...she cried out bitterly...


Veer "don't worry...i am here to take you away"


Ananya "take me ??? I thought you would first talk to my parents..."


Manmohan saw this and yelled at Veer "how dare you touch my Daughter...you came inside my house...i will shoot you..." he went towards the wall to take off the gun which was hanging since last so many years...


Ananya "no dad...please"


Manmohan "get away...i will shoot him"


Veer held Ananya's hand "come Ananya...we won't stay with them..."


Manmohan "how dare you hold Ananya's hand..."


Veer looked at Manmohan "i love her...and I don't care what you say..." he was rude with Manmohan...


Manmohan lifted his hand to slap him...Veer held his wrist


Ananya was getting angry on Veer "Veer...stop it...i called you to talk to my parents and you are so rude with them...how could you talk to my dad like this...i hate you"


Veer "Ananya!!!...what did I do??"


Ananya "should I explain what you did???...you just leave from here"


Veer came closer and hold her hand "come with me"


Ananya "leave me...i won't come with you"


Veer pulled her "you have to come...these people won't let us meet"


Ananya "stop pulling me Veer"


Veer didn't listen to her...


Ananya forcefully pulled back and slapped him...


Veer angrily stared at her "you slapped me??"


Ananya didn't look at him "i...i want you to leave right now"


Veer "i am not your servant miss Ananya Chadha...i will never come in your way"


he left and Ananya fell on her knees... "why...why Veer...why did you hurt me?"


she cried out...


Manmohan looked at her miserable Daughter...he took her to her room...


_____


Veer "mom I will never see her face again...i hate her"


Shilpa "what happened now??"


Veer walked towards his room...


Khushwant "all that happens, happens for good...we didn't have to do anything...he himself broke his relation with that girl"


Shilpa "but I am worried for Veer...look at him"


Khushwant "he will be fine...don't worry about him..."


_____


Ananya and Veer felt helpless...Ananya was expecting Veer to call her and on the other hand Veer was angry at her and never wanted to call her...


Next day


Ananya "Dad...i don't want to go to college...please..."


Manmohan "fine...you can do what you want"


Mitali "but her marriage"


Manmohan "no Mitali, I will not force my Daughter...if she doesn't want to marry now...its alright..."


Mitali was not happy but she was relieved that Ananya broke her relationship with Veer...


Manmohan "you can join our business...you already have knowledge about hotel management..."


Mitali "oh that's a wonderful idea...i think your Dad's right Ananya..."


Ananya "not now Dad..." she said and went back to her room...


Mitali "Manmohan, don't worry she will be fine in few days..."


______

Veer was at the college...


he was thinking about how Ananya slapped him...


Vishal "hi Veer...have you completed the project??"


Veer "i have to remake my project"


Vishal "why??? and where is Ananya...she is also with you in this project"


Veer "don't you take her name again, I hate her...i will make the project by myself"


he said and walked towards the building...


Vishal was surprised to see Veer saying those words for Ananya...



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After two months...



Veer "yes Dad...i can join our business now...i have given my final exams..."


Khushwant "i am so proud of you my Son..."


Shilpa "i think he can handle our next project in Himachal"


Khushwant "oh yes...Veer...we have our hotel in himachal, but we are renovating it...you can go there and look after the work..."


Shilpa "yes beta...you can stay there until the work finishes..."


Veer "alright mom...i will leave tomorrow"


Khushant and Shilpa were happy to see Veer working towards their business...

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It was a long journey for him...the hotel was surrounded with the mountains and green valley...


the caretaker and manager came to receive him...


Manager "sir the construction is going on the ground floor...but we do have our guests staying in our hotel..."


Veer "that's good...i would need the whole report please..."


Caretaker took the luggage '..


Veer looked outside the window of his room...it was a pleasant weather...he thought of going for a walk.


As he walked towards the narrow path... he heard someone shouting for help, he went towards the cliff by the end of the path... a girl had slipped over... he helped her...


veer "how did you reach here?? he asked her"


Rani "hi my name is Rani...i was clicking some pictures when my foot slipped over...but thanks for helping..."


Veer "that's alright..." he said and started walking...


Rani "wait...hello...whats your name???"


Veer "Veer Malhotra..."


Rani "are you a visitor...i am sorry if I am asking too many questions..."


Veer "i am getting late.."


he said and walked away...



______



Few days later...


Veer "so this is the list of our competitors"


Manager "yes Sir...and top most is this hotel...which is located a few minutes away..."


Veer "alright...i would check around and see...you keep this list in my room"


Veer strolled casually towards hotel 'precious stone' who were his biggest competitors...


while he was walking he heard the horn twice...he came on the side...still he heard the noise... he turned around...


he was shocked to see her...


Ananya stepped out of the car "does this road belong to you???"


Veer "you blind girl, if you see carefully you can pass through this road...i am not walking in the middle"


Ananya "i am blind??? what do you think of yourself???"


Veer "just leave before I loose my temper"


Ananya banged the door of the car angrily "you know my temper very well"


Veer came closer "don't you dare point this finger"


Ananya "what will you do??"


Veer "i will break it..."


Ananya "really??? ok go ahead...then I will break you..."


Veer "listen, I don't want to talk to you..." he said and walked away...


Ananya was furious at him...in anger she picked up a stone...was about to throw at him but it dropped and fell on her foot instead... "ouch" she said and pressed her lips in pain

____*********

Edited by Freethinker - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭reso ji
at last. dis one updated.!
~~**EDITED**~~

god, i just loved d twist...
man, so happening.πŸ‘
so just mindblasting twist.⭐️
nw plz ud dis regularly, or else i miss this twist n turns...
gosh , wat a story dis gnna be, makes me hell excited!.

veer shouted at anu's parents, πŸ˜­
may b he din meant to b! but sm tmes bad circumstances makes the brain go dull.
bt anu slapped him!
 veer joined his father in business, dats too good!
god he is trying to forget his ananya! sad

but who the hell is rani!.
stay away u rani, verna anu tumhara band baja degi!
she cn neva eva tolerate a gal near veer1
she is gonna eat u raw!

inntne saare dinno ke baad mile, voh bhi jagda karne ke liye!

but fight ws awesome!πŸ˜‰
they both r annoyed wid each other! i noe!
but gussa bhi tho usese hote h na jisse pyaar karte h!😳

i m sure anu's hotel is veer's biggest competitor!
thn more fun awaiting.πŸ‘
god i just love this fighting love story!
they fight, mess up, ...cute fights, thn they finally patch unknowingly!😳

i still remember d days wen they use to b totally in each other, god kisses n cuddles all d time!😳

may abhi tho anu ne VODKA bhi pina chod diya hoga!
coz usse sambhal ne ke lye koi nhi h!
wenevr she thnks it, she cud hav remembered veer!, so may be she quited drinking, to prove dat she cn live out veer!
she evn noe to drive nw!, i mean she din noe driving.😭
she is trying to b self reliant, living widout veer!😭

but i guess, she still need shim sm wer?????????at least!

god, di!
just love u for this ud
di plz ud dis sooper soon!
i just love veer n anu!
and the way u turned d story is just mindblasting1

plz ud soon ! n don't ignore dis story!

if u do to! i won't let u!, 
i will...
i will...
will...
yes, i will eat ur heat by sending 1000s of pms to ud ma jigar da tukda!πŸ˜†

lov u di.
just a awesome ud.😳

ud soon!
Edited by sweetsanyo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

😭reso ji

at last. dis one updated.!
~~**EDITED**~~

god, i just loved d twist...
man, so happening.πŸ‘
so just mindblasting twist.⭐️
nw plz ud dis regularly, or else i miss this twist n turns...
gosh , wat a story dis gnna be, makes me hell excited!.

veer shouted at anu's parents, πŸ˜­
may b he din meant to b! but sm tmes bad circumstances makes the brain go dull.
bt anu slapped him!
 veer joined his father in business, dats too good!
god he is trying to forget his ananya! sad

but who the hell is rani!.
stay away u rani, verna anu tumhara band baja degi!
she cn neva eva tolerate a gal near veer1
she is gonna eat u raw!

inntne saare dinno ke baad mile, voh bhi jagda karne ke liye!

but fight ws awesome!πŸ˜‰
they both r annoyed wid each other! i noe!
but gussa bhi tho usese hote h na jisse pyaar karte h!😳

i m sure anu's hotel is veer's biggest competitor!
thn more fun awaiting.πŸ‘
god i just love this fighting love story!
they fight, mess up, ...cute fights, thn they finally patch unknowingly!😳

i still remember d days wen they use to b totally in each other, god kisses n cuddles all d time!😳

may abhi tho anu ne VODKA bhi pina chod diya hoga!
coz usse sambhal ne ke lye koi nhi h!
wenevr she thnks it, she cud hav remembered veer!, so may be she quited drinking, to prove dat she cn live out veer!
she evn noe to drive nw!, i mean she din noe driving.😭
she is trying to b self reliant, living widout veer!😭

but i guess, she still need shim sm wer?????????at least!

god, di!
just love u for this ud
di plz ud dis sooper soon!
i just love veer n anu!
and the way u turned d story is just mindblasting1

plz ud soon ! n don't ignore dis story!

if u do to! i won't let u!, 
i will...
i will...
will...
yes, i will eat ur heat by sending 1000s of pms to ud ma jigar da tukda!πŸ˜†

lov u di.
just a awesome ud.😳

ud soon!

thanks sweetie...your comments are always beautiful...loved reading it... i don't know if i can update...there's a problem in pm... but if i update i will after few hours...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh thanku thanku thanku for updating this.

Awesome part dear
loved it thoroughly

omggg,they got separated to each other oh no
ab kya hoga yr even they hate each other too

n this new entry rani...yeh yahan kyun aayi h?

Little saddy update
but i enjoyed it
twist is very nice

last scene is gd
jo dusro ke liya gadda khodta h wo khud usme girta h ...hehehehe

i think that competitor is none other than anu
oh god don't make them rivals like their parents

update soon
waiting

thanks 4 pm
luv u

muahhh 4 updating this
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing di...πŸ‘
veer fought with his parents for anu and said that  he will not break his promise done with anu...cho sweet...😳
n veer misbehaved with anu's dad...but it was not intentionally...
n anu slapped him...n veer too was very angry...with her...😭
both themselfs have created problem in their relation...😑
he has joined his fathers business...n who is this rani...?????...πŸ˜•
hope she will be a ray of hope for the patch up b/w veer n anu...not a hurdle...in their relation...
n two months...two months have been passed...they met after a long time  n started fighting...😲
god if they have tried...they have solved that problem at the next day of their fight ,they didn't have to stay away from each other for so long but they didn't even gave a chance...to each other...😑
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Ye kya ho gaya:O hope everything will be fine soon,... Love Veer and Ananya:-):-) very well written dear:-) SuPERB:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnk god
ud to mila iska 😊
di is bar chote cmnt se kam chalo
tbiyat kharab h bachche ki
wt a twist πŸ‘πŸΌ
ye dono to ek dusre k jani dusman bn gye
bt h to ek dusre k jigar da tukada hi 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

that was really amazing n superb part..

oh so both r going through tough time..

cont. soon..

it would be interesting...seeing them against each other..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice n interesting
loved the new twist

continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update both are responsible for breaking their beautiful relation hope they will understand their mistake soon.thanks for pm