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VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated (Page 93)

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
I am speechless after reading this update!! You truly work emotion into the story so well. I love how you express their love for each other. Virat is shown as the best partner for Maanvi ever, he cares for her like no other. And I love how you showed how much he cares for her by stating that he could just about feel the pain during the biopsy. And their conversation in her old hospital room was just so emotional and it felt so true and real!!! I love how you conveyed the couple and everyone else. Umm im just speechless once again you have written a work of art. I love how you do the flashback and present day, it just makes it that much better. I swear I could see the whole scene playing in my mind as if they were acting it out infront of my eyes. Marvelous!!!!!!! :D

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
wow another fablous update...reva you rock evrytime  you wield your pen...err key board!!!!

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Speechless...loved it...
waiting 4 next  update...
thanks for d pm...


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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 1:20am | IP Logged
I loved it...it was awesome

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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 2:18am | IP Logged
very lovely SmileSmile
the unlimited love bet virat and manvi was awesumClapClapClap

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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Rev! Another beautiful part! Big smile
 
Virat is so caring towards Manvi - making her feel wanted and loved, giving her so much support during this difficult time!Heart
In return Manvi has so much trust in him... really sweet part! Totally LOVED!
 
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Posted: 27 February 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
aweshome rev u r the best writer till date i have ever read wat wording wat imaginations u use it is just like seeing a picture every word with a scene collects in my mind!!!!1 love it very much

thanks for the pm and continue sooon!!!!!!!

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Awesome I think you should write the original story

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