VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated - Page 93 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing.. I just happened to come across this topic and once i started reading could not stop till i read all parts, and it was liking reading a novel ;) great going ..

waiting for the next updates ;)

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767548

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Posted: 11 years ago

Waiting for next part ...

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vikrusam

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Posted: 11 years ago

👏hey good job...u have gone way ahead in ur story compared to the current situation!!!!! we r getting to see 2 versions of EHMMBH together...pls update soon and if possible add some romance of VIRKA...awesome 4's!!!!!! keep up the good work!!!!! pm me also!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Shruti Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

hi...

its kinda too late to comment i guess..

but i needed to...

actually not only for ur last part this entire story...⭐️

yeah i know i never commented on ur every part...

though i wanted to give long comment as i feel few words are

not enough for it...but always stucked in one thing or the other,..🤢

i must say u are a amazing writer...

hats off to ur thought...the plot...cv's should take some idea...😆

every bit of emotion is well explained...

ur words compel us to really imagine the story..

and you do succeed every time...😃

to explain one's feeling is really difficult...

but u do it brilliantly...😊

u jus balance ur parts so well with the convo plus emotion

explained... "sab kuch naap tol ke hota hai"

hehehe😛 😆

ur every update jus make me speecless...!!!😳

seriously i can jus get enough words to tell u the beauty of ur ff...

i'm in so love with this story...i even have a print out of it...

yeah din showed it to anyone..as it is ur work...

but whenever i jus want a break i read it..

again n again...

i can say that ur story...i can read millions of times...

its so awesome...⭐️⭐️

thank you for the wonderful story...👏 and even for pm

update soon...

and yeah u should switch over this to fan fiction...

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767548

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Posted: 11 years ago

I cant help but check this post daily to see if you have updated part eighteen 😃

Waiting to read further .. Hope you do it soon ..

Edited by rezevendous - 11 years ago

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tanridhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow all parts are just awsome...i read all 17 parts in one go...
Well pls pm me when u update..

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melliflous

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Posted: 11 years ago

Can't believe revathi!!! I read till part 8 n it's amazingly stuff! How did u manage it???????? Virman shot in part 8 was amazing!!

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melliflous

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 11: yeh yeh 'he' confessed!!! What an amazing confession yaar. Part 11 was just beyond words. The way u hv included each character is so brilliant !!

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melliflous

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 13 : superb yaar! Manvi's wait... Jeevika's explanation n meaning of love n imp of viren n manvi in her life... N finally manvi's confession ... Manvi relating to the song thode badmaash for virat... Everything awesome. Loved it!

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melliflous

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 14: I just loved the way u got them back to present from flashback. Virat's comment abt breathing exercise n jeevika's prenatal class was hilarious. How did u think of it? Jeevika being pregnant was a super idea in the SS. N then u took them back to flash at right time. Manvi's deteriorating health due to chemotherapy side effects was heart breaking :(. But virat's presence during all this time ... I can only imagine how strong their bond must hv grown in the present wrt the ss. Btw, we hopefully fingers crossed r gonna witness similar track in the show in some time... Will b interesting to watch but one thing at least has to be constant between ur ss n the show n that's virat's constant support to manvi n his presence arnd her in all these difficult times. As usual LOVED it! No further words.

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