VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated - Page 93

Posted: 11 years ago
amazing.. I just happened to come across this topic and once i started reading could not stop till i read all parts, and it was liking reading a novel ;) great going .. 
waiting for the next updates ;)
Posted: 11 years ago

πŸ‘hey good job...u have gone way ahead in ur story compared to the current situation!!!!! we r getting to see 2 versions of EHMMBH together...pls update soon and if possible add some romance of VIRKA...awesome 4's!!!!!! keep up the good work!!!!! pm me also!!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Posted: 11 years ago
hi...

its kinda too late to comment i guess..
but i needed to...
actually not only for ur last part this entire story...⭐️


yeah i know i never commented on ur every part...


though i wanted to give long comment as i feel few words are
not enough for it...but always stucked in one thing or the other,..🀒



i must say u are a amazing writer...
hats off to ur thought...the plot...cv's should take some idea...πŸ˜†


every bit of emotion is well explained...
ur words compel us to really imagine the story..
and you do succeed every time...πŸ˜ƒ


to explain one's feeling is really difficult...
but u do it brilliantly...😊



u jus balance ur parts so well with the convo plus emotion 
explained... "sab kuch naap tol ke hota hai"
heheheπŸ˜› πŸ˜†


ur every update jus make me speecless...!!!😳
seriously i can jus get enough words to tell u the beauty of ur ff...



i'm in so love with this story...i even have a print out of it...
yeah din showed it to anyone..as it is ur work...
but whenever i jus want a break i read it..
again n again...
i can say that ur story...i can read millions of times...
its so awesome...⭐️⭐️


thank you for the wonderful story...πŸ‘ and even for pm
update soon...
and yeah u should switch over this to fan fiction...

Edited by Shruti21 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
I cant help but check this post daily to see if you have updated part eighteen πŸ˜ƒ
Waiting to read further .. Hope you do it soon ..
Edited by rezevendous - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow all parts are just awsome...i read all 17 parts in one go...
Well pls pm me when u update..
Posted: 11 years ago
Can't believe revathi!!! I read till part 8 n it's amazingly stuff! How did u manage it???????? Virman shot in part 8 was amazing!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Part 11: yeh yeh 'he' confessed!!! What an amazing confession yaar. Part 11 was just beyond words. The way u hv included each character is so brilliant !!
Posted: 11 years ago
Part 13 : superb yaar! Manvi's wait... Jeevika's explanation n meaning of love n imp of viren n manvi in her life... N finally manvi's confession ... Manvi relating to the song thode badmaash for virat... Everything awesome. Loved it!
Posted: 11 years ago
Part 14: I just loved the way u got them back to present from flashback. Virat's comment abt breathing exercise n jeevika's prenatal class was hilarious. How did u think of it? Jeevika being pregnant was a super idea in the SS. N then u took them back to flash at right time. Manvi's deteriorating health due to chemotherapy side effects was heart breaking :(. But virat's presence during all this time ... I can only imagine how strong their bond must hv grown in the present wrt the ss. Btw, we hopefully fingers crossed r gonna witness similar track in the show in some time... Will b interesting to watch but one thing at least has to be constant between ur ss n the show n that's virat's constant support to manvi n his presence arnd her in all these difficult times. As usual LOVED it! No further words.

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