VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated - Page 82

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by tina_1234


nycc part

Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by 1D_D3-Crazy


congratulations for passing 100 pages and lovely update and thanks for the pm :D

Thank you... Glad u liked it๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by bhavnah


Fab update dr...loved it :)

Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by isha.raj_98


Wooow!!!!! u are by far the best writer on IF plz  plz pm me the next update i cant wait to find out what happens next...thanks

Thank you so much... Glad you liked it.๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by anyacrazy


ausum update as always..i just luv ure writing...thiss ff is amazing nd pleeease update soonn..really cant w8 toread nxt part...thnx a lot for the pm nd congratz on completing 100 pages!!!!

Thank you so much dearie...Hope u like the next part as well๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by Fafu77


im speechless
it was amazing n beautifully written
loved it 
thnks 4 the pm :) n update more quick plzzz :)

Thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by kriyansh960


Just the read the whole thing in one go !! and i must say... actually iam
speechless !!! that was like AMAZING !!! <3 <3 <3 i was just a little 
confused whether the flashback was over and all !! other than that 
AWSUM !!! VIrMan is like my second fav couple in tellywood !!!
please do pm me too !!! 

Thank you so much for taking ur time to read the whole update. Sorry for the confusion between flashback and current track. Will try to make the following ones bit clearer๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Sonika1988


rev
U r tooo good . I loved the whole part. And u know what weneva I read this os of yours I literally feel like m in heaven.
Update soon . Loved devar bhabhi interaction.


Thank you so much Sonika...๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by ANTARA-2244


Just loved da update!!! I can't see Mannu in this state!! It's too sad!!๐Ÿ˜”
thanx for da PM dear.โค๏ธ

Thank you so much. Mannu will be alrite, trust me๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by jz4amrit


loved it.. very touching...
thanks for the PM. cant wait for VirMan convo in the next update.. :)

Thank you so much. Hope the VirMan convo lives up to ur expectation๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by hs7071


Do u think the update is quite short????...
This update was simply heart wrenching and amazing...everything except the length if the update *winks* was perfect...i loved jeevika in the last dialogue of hers:
"jitna haq mera hai maanvi par uthna haq tera bhi hai"...
So sweet beautiful bhabhi devar bonding,adored the behna bonding and...
Literally loved virman even though maanvi was unconcious virat jus killed me...so emotional...hate seeing lovers separate but i love reading about them only if at the end they unite again *hopefully this FF will be a happy ending*
ur a fab writer rev loved this an u for the outstanding update keep going dont stop at all this should minimum last about 40 parts...*hopefully fingers crossed*
Thank for the pm and definately update soon not 10 years later but soon and do pm me when u do cant wait to see more virman parts in the next part 16
Continue Soon


I juz hope I didn't bore you with the length... I know the the nxt update was delayed compare to the previous, apologizing in virat style. I dun think I can survive for 40 parts update. Most of them will die of boredom. Hope you like the next part as well. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by coolchick


Awesome keep writing and u become the writing guru๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘

Thanks dearie... Not  entitled for the guru stage yet๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by maria0123


Awesome plz continue fast

Thanks Maria๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by priasweet


nice update tat last lines are awesum

Thank you so much. Those were my fav lines as well๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by jessiekarthik


res

Jes, waiting for your awesome comments๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by sajit


as usual wonderful yaar can't wait for next update ๐Ÿ‘
 
Thanks Sajit...๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by Amri174


Heart wrenching chapter. The way you portray the emotions is excellent. Very poignant.
Waiting for more:)

Thank you so much. Really glad that u liked it๐Ÿ˜Š



Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Khushi2187


Awes0me
Fantastic
Superb
Mindbl0wing Update...
Waiting 4 next Part...
PM me...

Thanks gal, glad u like it๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by JULIEL


beautiful!!! you made me cry!!! as always looking forward to the next update!!

Sorry to make you cry dearie...๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by rockinggirl5


Loved it, please continue soon.

Thank you so much gal๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by alicemath


hey dear...simply superb...as usual...u hav left me speechless...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
da most heart touchin update sofarโญ๏ธ...could actually feel the emotions dat viraat n the rest wer goin thru...u truly r an awesum writer...๐Ÿค—
hav workd a loot on the cancer part too rite...not lik da cvs who doesnt evn bothr 2 go in to the details of the disease while handlin such a plot...gud job girly๐Ÿ‘
n luvd the last line by jeevika a looot...kash v get 2 hear such a line in the show tooo...๐Ÿ˜”
nywayzz thnx a loot 4 the pm...waitin 4 the next update...๐Ÿ˜

Thank you so much dearie... Reading your comments has made my day๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
revathy di ... it totally splendid...i have no words to explain how i loved it...tussi gr8 ho...first a big hug for giving us such a best part... ๐Ÿค—
coming to the u have brialliantly transformed the pain of mmanu , jeevi and viraat from eyes of visualization to heart where every pain made us cry!so silly to cry right but jeevika's pain for maanu and viraats pain everything was brialliant!!!!!!!
u beautifully described the  whole atmosphere pain and tension and nail biting moments !!!!!!!!
again i would like to add every time i read i literaaly get the feeling of some kind of feeling that i reading a different version of walk to remember ๐Ÿ˜›
and the ending was so beautiful silent conversion of jeeman and lovely and so beautiful reaction of virman...wow it was so gr8!!!!!the final dialog made me so crazy today!!!!!!


love u so much for writing wonderful pieces !!!!!


love 
ur fan 
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by uniquebluerose


Wow!!!!
an action packed update dear and well i dunno what to say...its mind blowingly superb...For a moment when Maanvi was critical i could feel the fear rise in me and when she revived i felt tears tugging the corners of eyes...so wonderful is you writing!!!

Thank you so much dearie๐Ÿ˜Š Loved your comments as usual

Originally posted by snehamaanvirman


wow reva that was superab fantstic update
once you got my lfe out when manvi was gettng defbrillator yar
i wasscared but thnks she is back
about medical terminology all was well done dear itna hume itne sall pad k aaya hai u must have done a lot hard work
well i know bonemarrow replacementif she got donner will b best
thnks for pm

Thanks dearie๐Ÿ˜Š Glad you liked it

Originally posted by innocentmanvi1


lovely yar loved it!!!!!
the whole scenes were coming in my mind as if seeeing a movie or a serial awesome plz continue sooon and mmmuah for u

Thanks dearie... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Sukrutha


that was awesome..!!..add me in your PM list..please...!!!๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks dearie... Already added u to my buddy list๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by bollyrockstar


awww, cute update!!

Thanks dearie๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by Fantasies


awesome!

Thanks๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by geethapapi


hey i really loved the way u explain the emotion with ur writing i really loved it to the core plzz... do pm me 4 the next part

Thanks dearie...๐Ÿ˜Š Will PM when I update

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