Originally posted by hs7071
Do u think the update is quite short????...
This update was simply heart wrenching and amazing...everything except the length if the update *winks* was perfect...i loved jeevika in the last dialogue of hers:
"jitna haq mera hai maanvi par uthna haq tera bhi hai"...
So sweet beautiful bhabhi devar bonding,adored the behna bonding and...
Literally loved virman even though maanvi was unconcious virat jus killed me...so emotional...hate seeing lovers separate but i love reading about them only if at the end they unite again *hopefully this FF will be a happy ending*
ur a fab writer rev loved this an u for the outstanding update keep going dont stop at all this should minimum last about 40 parts...*hopefully fingers crossed*
Thank for the pm and definately update soon not 10 years later but soon and do pm me when u do cant wait to see more virman parts in the next part 16
Continue Soon
I juz hope I didn't bore you with the length... I know the the nxt update was delayed compare to the previous, apologizing in virat style. I dun think I can survive for 40 parts update. Most of them will die of boredom. Hope you like the next part as well. ๐
Originally posted by coolchick
Awesome keep writing and u become the writing guru๐๐
Thanks dearie... Not entitled for the guru stage yet๐
Originally posted by maria0123
Awesome plz continue fast
Thanks Maria๐