VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated - Page 73

loved the update and sooo looking forward to the next!

Awww, so cuuutee!! I love your story! I think it's my fave VirMan story so far! 

Ommgggeee!! Loved this part!! Please pm me when you update!! 👏

Edited by Khushi2187 - 12 years ago

AWW...DAT WAS SO NYC...THNKS 4 DA PM...😊

Hey..loved the update..the gradual growth u hv brought in the VirMan relationship is naturally n beautifully done..by showing Manvi being hesitant of sharing her fears initially n then opening up..Virat consoling her bt being concerned as 2 y she has developed these fears suddenly..u hv wid subtlety brought forward the fact that these 2 innately put the others happiness/ mental peace b4 their own..their understanding n interdependence portrayed very well..Dabbu-Manvi relationship i love n i enjoyed reading their part..'m glad u included him, he is close 2 both sisters bt d bond he shares wid manvi seems more special..i'm luking forward 2 his reaction 2 manvi's illness on show as well..Mannu's bodyguard, her dabba wil turn more protective i guess..

This content was originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

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It was the most beautiful chapter till date👏.Virat and Maanvi,the unimaginable extent of support,respect,trust and love they share,it's just epic!!😳 VirMan never fail to touch my heart!! I hope Maanvi will overcome this  tough phase of her life,along with Virat!!😊

Thanx for the PM dear.Continue soon!!😳

Antara, thank you so much for the lovely comment. Glad that u feel the same as I do for VirMan😊

This content was originally posted by: lemy

loved it!! loved it!! loved it!!...😃

Thank you so much dearie😊

This content was originally posted by: fcashruti

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Thanks dear, waiting for ur comments😊

This content was originally posted by: inlvwithehmmbh

Rev!!!!! 

brilliant!! too good and emotional!! I'm becoming you fan more and more as u update... Every update is so good that i can't stop reading it... and as u know i have read all the 13 parts tgt more than once and now 14!! woohoo!! the day i read it all tgt again, i'll be so excited for part 15!! hahaha!!

LOVE YA AND ALL YOUR UPDATES!! *hugs*  Thank you!! 

Aww Jit, Hugz... Thank you so much dearie. I hope part 15 don't disappoint u yaar. Btw wen are u updating urs as well?😉

This content was originally posted by: niha12345

so here comes another beautiful update by a very talented writer..

luved it a lottt..

pain makes people one which is clearly seen here.

virat 's concern and the pain manvi is enduring has been beautifully written by u

heart touching update..

luved it

thanks for the pm

please continue soon

 

Niha, thank you so much. Hope you will like the next update as well. 😊

This content was originally posted by: preethis

awww lovely part dear loved it.. quiet emotional no words...

Thank you so much Preethi😊

This content was originally posted by: ashred12

sooo sweet n cute...🤗
d part wer virat said abt breathing practice...🤣
loved how u detailed dabbu-manvi relation...
loved every bit...pls continue soon...thanx for d pm... 😊

Thank you so much Ash...😊

This content was originally posted by: Khushnav

*Grabs the 1000th tissue* Why do you make me cry so much?! I've got to get therapy, cuz you're leaving me speechless quite a lot!

Mia, sorry for making you cry... Hugz Mia🤗
Well let me know when u find the therapy, I need one for myself as well. You have the same effect with me, I m speechless all the time. 😊