VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated - Page 72

Rev,
You literally managed to make me cry how can maanvi be so selfless? She is thinking about others and nt about her pain and fear of chemotherapy...this is so heart wrenching...i swear you and khushnav are 2 writers which manage to get me so addicted to ur writing tht i always want more...Ur utterly and simy great so much detail u write in is unbelievable ur probably the only writer who always gives long updates which are soo amazing...please continue soon on a regular basis and whenever u do jus pm me i will be waiting impatiently for part 15

Wow... I loved it, please continue soon.

I am speechless after reading this update!! You truly work emotion into the story so well. I love how you express their love for each other. Virat is shown as the best partner for Maanvi ever, he cares for her like no other. And I love how you showed how much he cares for her by stating that he could just about feel the pain during the biopsy. And their conversation in her old hospital room was just so emotional and it felt so true and real!!! I love how you conveyed the couple and everyone else. Umm im just speechless once again you have written a work of art. I love how you do the flashback and present day, it just makes it that much better. I swear I could see the whole scene playing in my mind as if they were acting it out infront of my eyes. Marvelous!!!!!!! :D

wow another fablous update...reva you rock evrytime  you wield your pen...err key board!!!!

Speechless...loved it...
waiting 4 next  update...
thanks for d pm...
Edited by nai1311_ysp - 12 years ago

I loved it...it was awesome

very lovely 😊😊
the unlimited love bet virat and manvi was awesum👏👏👏

Rev! Another beautiful part! 😃

aweshome rev u r the best writer till date i have ever read wat wording wat imaginations u use it is just like seeing a picture every word with a scene collects in my mind!!!!1 love it very much

Awesome I think you should write the original story