FF:Seducing MR.KESAR-Chapter16 updatd pg 29 (Page 7)

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Ayushi...vasant n gulaal convo made me suspect vasants intensions more...gulaal trying very hard to not to listen her heart...well have to see how much she will be successful doing scene is very good...
Very excited abt the do update the next chapter soon...

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
AyushiEmbarrassed...Thank u for another lovely update...meine pehle bhi kaha dha na , yeh Vasanth teek nahin hein, na hi uska irada, he want to trap Kesar and its only for his good or for his own gain and nothing else and for this he is using Gulaal in the name of love; I really feel like Vasanth is a pathetic personality...he dont even trust her...Ouch..On the other side Kesar is very genuine, I cant think on the other way..when she realises the fact she will surely regret for the slightest doubt she is having on him at present...the kitchen scene was so cute and any one with normal sense could realise that Kesar is a gentle man from that one incident...Gulaal is again losing the grip on her and it is becoming tough for her to do so as each moment passes...hope her heart soon wins her mind.
The phone call???Was his manager giving info about her?? but if it is so then from reading the promo, he is still so gentle towards her, here Gulaal is so unfair to him, and sometimes to herself too...all this is because that she loves Vasanth blindly, I do feel for her...the day when Vasanth betrays her is not so far and then she will be totally shattered, but at that time , hope to see Kesar at her side as her strength, her support, her love and everything...Waiting for the update..Smile

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AyushiHugwonderful chapter yaar.ab tho Gulaal gayi.ab aayega mazaaBig smile
You got inTwilight tooLOLbechare Kesar ko Gulaal kya kya bulaati hai,Vampire,monster,beast-that was funny.I loved how her heart is making the right choice.Her instinct is telling her that Kesar is true but her head filled with Vasant's nonsense is making her deny her heart.Let's see for how longEmbarrassed
Vasant sounds so selfish here.He sent his beautiful girlfriend to live with a rich, handsome, young guy all alone with an ulterior motive to trap him and then he dares to question "usne tumhe chua tho nahi"really nowAngryGulaal,better realize soon that her boyfriend is not worth her love and trust.

acha hua Kesar got to know.looking forward to what he will do now.Whatever it is,it will be very interesting for us to readSmile
Thank you for this lovely chapter.Update soon.

Edited by minizz - 07 January 2012 at 9:02pm

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wow ayushi Big smile, superb chapter, full of mystery Big smile vampires n twilight bhi here Big smile vasy ko aakhir prob kya hai yaar, i m getting a negative feeling from his side n gulaal is innocent n sweet n loves vasant so much but i feel like he is using her Ouch n kesar Shocked is ki kya mystery hai, hmmm he seems to be a good person but alone too Ouch gulaal is stuck between the fight of her mind n heart, i hope her heart wins Smile update soon yaar, cant wait to read what happens next Big smile

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great update n promo .eagerly waiting for more.

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hey ayushi whrz the update yaar? Ermm update soon Smile

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Note:thanx 4 ur beautiful and precious coments.Hope ur enjoying ds ff.Bt i have a request plz dnt curse vasy "alot",as he is my crush from HATIM.Rahil azam the most ever green actor,m watchng him 4m my childhood.Plz do coments abt the story nd ofcourse our GULSAR.
Gulaal came out of the washroom,she have wore jorjt baby pink dress,with lite blue embroidry on it,hr silver nosel ring was adorning hr face,she dryd hr hairs nd face wd towel,nd sat infront of the dressing table,she made up hrself brushed hr silky hairs,apply maskara nd gloss nd correct hr duppata,as hr dres was backless,she put hr hairs on hr left shouldr to show hr bare back,she said2hrself,jab loha garam ho, chot tb marni chahie.Ab mujhe samajh agaya hai that mujhe is "young,rich,handsome bachelor"ko kis trha control krna hai,mr.Vampire ab dekhie mein apko,ap he k trap mein kaise phasati hun.Jo sb ab tk tum mujhe trap krne k lie kr rahe thay ab gulaal sharma wahe sb tumhe trap krne k lie kregi...An evil smile acrossd hr face,she throw hr towel on the bed nd came out of the room,she saw kesar talking to some1 on hz cell while sitng on the dining chair.He was not lukng at hr,nd was bzy in his call.Gulaal intentionaly moved hr hands,to make a noise from hr bangles,she was smoothing hr hairs,nd was correctng hr dupata again nd again,for getng hz attention.He lookd at hr nd gt stunned 4a moment,than may b got undrstand tht wt she wantd to show,bt then again gt bzy in call,nd said to mr.Sinha,ya done! hm kal chalenge.He ended the call,gt up,took out dining chair from the table nd extends hz hand 4 hr,come princes,she smirk nd hold hz hand,he made hr sit nd thn sit on hz place,While serving hr pizza,he said:madam aaj ap mere hath ka bna pizza khayengi,to apko pta chalega tht world best pizza sirf mein hi bnata hun.
G:smiled nd took pizza from the plate,while eatng she said in hesitation,wo actualy kesar,i want to say u Sorry!
K:sory?Kis baat k lie?
G:meri waja se ap ko kitni problem ho rahi haina,aap itne achhi cooking krte hain,nd wo b kitne perfection k sath.Or meine flour gira kr apka sara kitchn kharab kr dia,mein wo upar wali shelf mein rakh rhi thi,bt pta he nahe chala kaise..?M so sorry,mein sach mein apko bht disturb kr rhe hun na,
k:nahe gulaal,aisi koi baat nahe hai,mera paon by mistake apke foot ko hit kr gaya,apka balance out hogaya nd thn u fell.Is mein apki kya ghalti hai,plz gulaal dnt say sory,otherwise i'll mind.
G:smiled,nd said ok ab nahe kahunge,waise..,she askd in hesitation,abi ap phone par kahi jane ki baat kr rhe they?I mean kal apka...kahin bahar jane ka... plan...Hai?
K:han wo mujhe kuch dino k lie out of town jana parega,shooting k lie,shayad ek week k lie.
she got stund to hear this,oh shitt! Matlb pura week waist,agr mein iske sath nahe rahunge to kaisa kuch pta kr paunge,or mera paon?Mein to uske sath ja b nahe skti,ab kya krun?
K:kya hua?Acha nahe lga?
G:mmm,delicious,yummy.Ap to sach mein awesome cook hain,mein to taste feel kr rhi thi,she tried to hide hr thoughts.
k:thank God tumhe pasand aya,varna mein to soch rha tha tht mein apne piza ki kuch over tareefain kar gaya.
G:nahe kesar,its realy tasty.Waise aap ka jana zruri hai kya?I mean apke bina mein kitni akeli hojaongi,kya krunge mein?
K:with smile said,kya krun,jana to parega,bt u dnt wory meine doctor saab se bat krli hai kal unke hospital se ek nurse tumhari dekh bhaal k lie ajayegi,nd mein tumse touch mein rahunga,or waise bhi doctor ne kaha hai k bs ek week k andar andar tumhara paon bilkul thek hojayega.
G:haan,bt i'll realy miss u...
K:me too..
Gulaal's glance fell on his cheek,she saw a trace of ketchup on hz cheek,she thought somethng,nd the icecream incident ran across in hr mind,as kesar wiped away the trace of icecream,she extended hr hand towards hz cheek,he was eatng pizza nd bzy on hr celphone,when he felt hr hand is comng closer to him,he lookd at hr hand bt didnt stop him,she wiped away the traces of ketchup with hr soft fingers,they were lookng deep into each others eyes,their eye lock broke,whn kesar's phone rang,ya mr.Sinha, itni subha,mm..ok.
After dinner she eased hr self on the sofa in living room,kesar kept two cups of hot coffee on the table infront of hr,
k:lijiye madam,thandi thandi raton mein hot hot coffee enjoy kijie.He took a sip nd said mm,yumy.
Gulal smild nd said,m realy sory,mein apko sch mein kitna disturb kr rhe hun na,apne ek bar kaha tha na,ye shimla ki thandi ratein,aap or apki hot coffee,or koi nahe.Or mein in sb k beech mein agae na,m extremly sory,bt realy mera paon(leg) jaise hi theek ho jayega,mein foran he koi achi si job dhund lungi,or yahan se chali jaungi.
Kesar kept his cup on the table,pressd his lips,fold his hand nd was lukng at the floor.Gulaal was w8ng 4his ansr,kya hua?She askd.
k:plz gulaal,mujhe sab pta chal gaya hai,mein jan gaya hun k tum aisa q kr rhi ho,its over now.
Hr eyes opened wide,like hr breaths hv stopped.Lump passed down in hr throat,nd she got shocked.
G:kya?Kya pta chal gaya hai?
K:yahe k tum aisa q kr rhi ho,tum ye sb isi lie kr rhi ho na kiunke tum mujhe embarras krna chahti ho,or q na karo meri waja se tumhari life mein kitni problems hogain,meri waja se tumhara paon facture hogaya,tumhara saaman kho gaya,or to or 3mahine dhundne k baad tumhe itni mushkilo se ek jaga job milne ki umeed bhi hui to meri waje say tum wahan interview k lie b nahe ja paen.She took a sigh of releif,thank God ise kuch pta nahe chala. Gulaal trust me main bohat sharminda hun,maine jo kia hai,mein use badal to nahe skta,lekin usey theek krne ki koshish to kr rha hun na,He said.
G:she tried again hr skills and said,nahe nahe kesar ji aap ghalat smajh rahe hain,mera yeh matlab bilkul nahe tha.Trust me mera intension apko hurt krne ka nahe tha.Aap plz aisa mt sochie,kesar mein apko sach mein embaras nahe krna chahti thi.Mein to bas...She brust into tears.Ap plz mujhse naraz mt hoiye,i dnt wanted 2 blame u...,
k:nahi gulaal plz aap roie mat,main wo..M so sory..I dnt wanted to make u cry.Lekin agr aisi bat nahe hai,to phr ap bar bar ye formal batein q krti hain.Plz ye sory, thanq mat kaha kijie,jab tk ap yahan hain aap purey haq se yaha rahiye.
G:she wiped hr tears,thanx kesar ji..Wo,oh sory.I mean..Ab mein aisi koi bat nahe krungi.
G:ya promise,they both smiled aftr coffee.
Gulal was upset nd said,apke jane k baad main kitni bore hojaungi.
K:mm...Ek tareeqa hai jis se tum bore nahe hogi,let me show u somethng.He hold hr hand nd took hr to his study room,
g:tum mujhe yahan study main q laye ho?
Kesar beckoned at a door,gulaal got amused nd said arey wah,ye study mein kahan ka door hai,kesar opnd the door nd askd hr to come in,
Gulaal went inside nd got surprisd,wow,yeh sab..Tum,i mean yahan?
K:yeh mera private room hai,m sure tum to kya,yahan kbi bhi koi bore nahe ho skta.That room had all the possible ways for entertaining of a person in it,like computer,laptop,tv,dvd,all indore games which could be posible was there like ludo,carem,video games etc,there is a seprate gymnaziam,a seprate place for music instruments whr piano,vilon,guitar and many other instruments was kept,nd a seprate place for painting also,the room was huge nd decorated with odd bt beautiful paintings nd rakets hanging on the wall,she went to the piano nd started pres the keys madly,
K:arey tum ye piano q tor rhi ho?
G:tor nahe rahi,bja rhi hun,said in puppy face.
Kesar went to the shelf nd took the mouth organ,he started playing it.Gulaal amuzd to saw this,whn he finishd.Gulal claped nd said wow,ur awesome.Kya tum baqi sab instruments bhi itne hi ache play krte ho?
K:han,q tumne seekhna hai mujhse?
G:nahe dekhna hai,plz guitar play kro na.
K:nahe,abhi nahi,phir kabhi.
k:acha,do u hv acount on skyp?
K:kal jb mein chala jaunga,to hum skype pay baat krainge.
G:han ok,my id is gulaal_sharma,
k:princess,chalo gi mere sath?
K:wonder land...!
She was confusd,kesar than took hr to the window,he opend it,the fresh nd cold air overwhelmed on them,hr mouth opnd wide to saw the panorama.A beautiful view of lake could easily be seen from there,moon light was making the lake more glimmer.Gulaal was stil in wonder,wow beautiful yeh to sach mein wondr land hai,
k:yeh is room ki sb se achi jaga hai,is rum ki khasiat(speciality)hai yeh.
G:room ki nahe,ye to pure ghar ka best place hai.
K:smiled nd said han ye to hai,Aftr sometime he closd the window.
G:arey window bnd q krdi?
K:bahar bohat thand hai gulaal,tumhe sardi lag jayegi.
k:mm..Chalo Ek kam krte hain,movie dekhtay hain,
G:gulaal was blank,aisay mt dekho,meri nahe shahrukh ki movie dkhte hain.Gulal:bt mujhe lake dekhna hai,
k:nahe gulal,no means no,he maid hr sit on the couch nd insert the disk.They both watchd Ra-one togethr,gulaal thought mein yahan movie dekhne thori aai hun,waise b ye kal chala jayega,kitna tym wst hoga,chalo jane se pehle ise ye to bta dun k gulaal kesar ji pay kitna trust krti hai,an evil smile acrosd hr face,while watchng the movie she yawned nd pretend to b sleepy,she came close to him nd kept hr head on his shouldr,kesar lukd at hr nd said,neend aa rhi hai to room main chal k sojao,
Gulaal in infantile tone said,nahi mujhe puri movie dekhni hai.
aftr smtime(whn ra-one kill shahrukh),she hold hz hand with hr both hands to pretend to b lost in a movie,kesar noticd bt didnt say anythng,aftr few minuts she kept his hand on hr thigh nd startd playng wd hz fingers,slowly slowly she move hr hand up nd startd rubng hr muscles nd lockd hr othr hand into his hand with fingers,hr breath was touching his neck,she pretend tht she hav sleep,she could easily feel the warmth of kesar's hand,the sensational touch cozing butrflies in hr stomach,she was so close to him,her heart wanted to kiss him right now,bt hr mind was controling her,she was gloating at him,his lips was making hr thirsty,hr mouth went dry,she moved hr nose to his neck,his deep fragrance was giving hr calm.she was pretending bt she didnt come to know,when she went to sleep.
It was drizzling,she was twirling in the garden,nd dancing with hr duppata,he came from behind nd wrapped hr in his arms,she closed hr eyes,nd turned around they kissed eachother deeper,
G:i love u,
k:i love u too,she opnd hr eyes nd pushd him.
She woke up,the room was echoing with the chirping of birds,God ye ulte seedhe sapne mujhe pagal krdainge,she yawned,ruffles hr hairs nd remind wt hapnd last night.She freshn up,nd came out of the room,bt she was late,he hv already left.She was in deep thoughts nd biting hr nails,
G:pta nahi mujhe kya hojata hai jb bhi mein uske kareeb jati hun.Aisa lgta hai k mein khud ko usey sonp(hand over)dun.Mein kiun us vampire ki taraf itna atract hoti hun,zahir hai,wo vamp hai to atract to hongi na,Lekin jb mujhe itna kuch mehsoos hota hai to usey b to atleast ek pinch to feel hota hoga.Bas kisi trah usey yaken dilana hoga k mein us se bohat pyar krti hun.Ek bar use yaken ajaye tht m totaly in love with him bas phir samjho k mera kam hogaya,baqi ka kam uska hai.The day passd with hr confusion.Next day whn she woke up nd came out,servant told hr abt hz calls,he did in night whn she slept nd in the morning whn she was sleepng,this information add more confusions in hr problem,She went to his study room nd saw tht his pvt rum was opnd.She went inside,took laptop nd brought it to hr room.She opnd skype nd found 3new mails,she opnd them exitedly thnkng them of vasy bt it was of kesar.She wonderd,kesar hv maild hr at the times of hr medicine,for remindng hr to take them.She close them frustated,vasant came online nd got shockd to saw hr on.
G:hi vasy,
V:gulaal meri jan tum online kaise?
G:vasy actualy kesar shooting k lie out of town gaya hai,nd wo apna laptop mujhe day kar gaya hai takey mei bore na hun,u dnt worry mein yaha bilkul akeli hun,balke ek kam kro,mein to aa nahe paungi bt tum yahan mujhse milne ajao.
V:gulaal tumhara dimag to theek hai,mein tumse kaise milne aa skta hun,tumhe kya lgta hai kesar jitna chalak admi tumhe yahan akela mere lie chor kr gaya hai?na jane kitne jaasoos lga rakhe honge,uske servants tum par nazr rakhe hue honge,darling plz tum b koi aisi harkat mat krdena jis se hmara sara plan flop hojaye.U k9 wt i mean?
G:han vasy ur right,mein to uske jane se kitna relax feel kar rhi thi,bt i should b alert.Lekin koi baat nahi hum mil nae sakte to kia hua,daily video calls to kar skte hain,
V:of course janu,itne din hogaye the tumhe dekhe hue,
G:acha,to janab ko meri yad arahi thi?
V:bohat...Bas jaldi se ye din guzr jaye...
G:itni b kya jaldi hai,she blushd,acha how is uncle?
V:han bilkul thek hain or tumhe boht mis krte hain.
G:vasy,tumne unse shadi ki koi baat ki?
V:nahi gulaal,mein kaise krta,unhone foran tumhe phone krna tha,or yaha bula lena tha.Unhe to yahi pta haina k tum apni cousin sis ki shadi mein gae ho.
G:han,koi bat nahi.Hope to hai k kam jaldi hojayega.
V:q?Koi proof mila kya?
G:nahi,tumhari beauty wid brain haina,phir kisi sboot ki kya zrurat?
They both laughed,their convo interupted by the voice of tia(collegue).
V:ok janu,abhi kam hai raat ko bat kreinge.
G:ok,bt kon hai wahan?
V:tia hai,agr use kuch pta chala to musibt hojayegi.
G:han thek hai,bt tum us churail se dur rehna ok,!
V:ok meri jan,jiske pas tum ho,use tia jaise stupid larkio ki kya zrurat..They ended the call.Gulaal thought abt the proof.Mein ek bar phir check kr leti hun.She prowled in the whole house bt all in vain,then she went to his room,she mess all the room,she lift up the foam of the bed with so effort.Hr glancd fall on some papers undr it,bt it was so heavy so she left the foam.She than push it nd completly remove it from the bed nd found an envelop,there was some letters inside it,she sat on the floor nd took one of them nd start readng it.
"Kesar,mein tumhare bina nahe ji skti,mein mar jaungi kesar.Plz mujh par reham kro,tum mujhe dhoka nahe day skte.Bhul gaye tum wo pal jo humne sath guzare they.Mein janti hun tum bhi mere bina nahi reh sakte,islie main aaj raat mere ghar pay tumhara intezar karungi,or mein janti hun us raat ki tarha aaj rat b tum zarur aaoge.I love u.."she frozed to read it,may b something broke inside her,ofcourse hr heart.Tear were flowing 4m hr eyes.She was gropeing the papers madly,she found two
pictures,one of kesar nd hr nd the other of hr single,Yeh kon hai,she turned it,the name was writen on the othrside."Natasha"

M so sorry guys for late,mera laptop kharab hogaya thaHope u like it,plz coment.Thanx...By AYUSHii!!!

Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 20 May 2012 at 1:53am

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really interesting.want to know more abt this natasha .loved the way you wrote it.plz do continue soon.

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