FF:Seducing MR.KESAR-Chapter16 updatd pg 29 (Page 24)

sharmishta Groupbie

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Posted: 01 April 2012 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Ayushi... sorry about your dadu... my commiserations dear...

kk... aww, gulaal jealous of talli... shoo cuteEmbarrassed... evn though her mind reprimands her nt 2 hav any sft spt 4  kesar she jst cn't resist his chrms,na...
 so finally she gt d keys of his secret cabin.. bt ye kya... she got caught..
 nw wht vil b his reactnUnhappy..
update soon...  lots of  4 dis awsme chappi

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kalika.j Senior Member

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Posted: 02 April 2012 at 1:23am | IP Logged


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Ayushii_Angel IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Guys any thing wrong???Shockedkuch weird post kar dia kya maine..res k baad no comment???thanx sharmishta.guys meine to chhiii mini or aditi ki paapi atmaon ko khush karne k lie dala yarWink..plz comment yar!!!!CryCry
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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
Hey Ayushi,aisi koi baat nahi hai,don't feel bad yaar,I have to update my SS on weekends so I didn't get chance to read but I will pakka read and comment tom night sorry for the delayEmbarrassed


Ok I am finally hereErmm sorry for being so late, more than ahem ahem I liked how you portrayed Gulaal's conflicting thoughts in one moment she is all jealous and possessive in next she is questioning his fidelity and  his morality in next she is completely nonchalant about his flings and his larger than life images and in next she is all attention seeking ,crazy and bossy Girl friend, ooops, she needs to get her act straight what is she in love with him or not, more than him it's her that is getting affected with his closeness and his physical proximity

It's high time she decided where her priority are, with Vasant or with him, you ended on the interesting not,will look forward to the update, once again sorry for the delay in getting here nothing to do with the chapter in general life just got extremely busy

Edited by enchanted23 - 05 April 2012 at 3:18pm
minizz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
AyushiHugI am so,so sorry for this late comment.Somehow I had it in my mind that I had already commented but now I see I haven't.really sorry about that.I loved this chapter a lot.I did like the ahem ahem stuff but more than that it was Gulaal's thoughts about the whole situation and Kesar that I liked .bechaari Kesar ko phasane aayi thi aur khud hi phas gayi.I really felt sad for her here,I mean it was nice to see her get all worked up over Kesar and Talli but It made me sad when she later thinks about Kesar's words wondering whether she is just a time pass for KesarCryThat was nice.Does she even realise that she is in love with Kesar and Vasant no where figures in the equation anymore.uff you ended it on a cliff hanger.want to know please update soonBig smileThanks for this wonderful chapterSmile

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Ayushii_Angel IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MR21

Offo...gulaal full on jealousy mode seeing chipkoo talli with kesar...kesar ke ithne bhure din aagayee ki woh talli ke saath date par jhaaraha hai...loved the chapter yaar...
I am very sorry for your daddu...May his soul rest in peace...yes yar we can only pray for him,thanx for ur lovely cmnt ramya,i realy need ur support,plz keep reading nd han dnt wory uske achhe din bhi ayengeySmile

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by minizz

This chapter was lovely.Talli aa gayiLOLShe had to come in at some point of time na.chalo yahaan pe she is brought in to make Gulaal jealous  hmm varna serisl ki gulaal ko to kbhi talli se jealos nahi hua.It was great to see Gulaal in full on jealousy modeLOL
I agree with Ramya,Kesar ke itne bure din aa gaye ki Talli ke saath date pe jaana pad raha haiLOL
looking forward to the next update eagerlyBig smile oho dont worry mini uske achhe din bohat jaldi ayengey..

Ayushi,sorry about your Dadu.May his soul rest in peace.Take care.thanx for ur consern dearSmile

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Ayushii_Angel IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged

beautiful update an 
Originally posted by arti07

finsihed reading me always the late comerErmm but seriously it was lovely chapii so wen we assume everything is going smooth and fine between the two and the world is free from dinosaurs enters talli trinocerous in blackmini dress Shocked haha thanx for ur comming aru,god save the production houseConfused save?from whom?from talliii hahaLOL...and she came made a huge messAngry  kesar is all flirty flirty with her chii re tell him to take bath chi chi chi ROFL han dekhlo aru tumhara flirty kesu..nahata to wo roz hai.. LOLand gulaal is in jealous mode ubercool me lking it and since she is boiling and all angry could i expect some serious confrntation in the next chapii hmm thanx for ur lovely comment,hope u will like the next one also
gle me eagerly waiting for the nextTongue keep reading dearBig smile

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