Originally posted by: rsk16really romantic updates thanx dear.just caught up with themso nice of u dear
Ayushi Dear...what to say??? it's just suuuperb yaar... ๐ when i have started reading the 1st chappi i really did not liked it so much ๐ because that was sooo filmy but after reading all chappis i really became fan of your this ff ๐๐ผ ..so romantic and so passionate ff โบ๏ธ ...but vassy sounds cruel kind of ๐ฒ ...but loved the characters of kesar Rai and Gulal Sharma.. ๐...in total it's just awesomne ๐...waiting for the next chappi...update it soon dearie...๐
Originally posted by: canuck-umzNice to read something so romantic since these days the romance is missing from the shows I watch. Thank-you for the wonderful update thanx dear nd ur always welcome๐.
Originally posted by: enchanted23Ok Ayushi,I have finally got around reading last two chappies and both were really lovely, one had a depth and intensity other was amazingly romantic.thanxxx alooot dear aditi
Gulaal is slowly but surely falling in love and have started realising the difference between what she feels for Vasant to what she feels for Kesar,she is trying to get away from this reality by trying to convince herself that it's all illusion created by Kesar but in her heart she knows the truth and is trying to run away from the same, You portrayed this brilliantly...nd u describe it more beautiful than me...Vasant's mysterious I am going to reserve my judgement on him,he looks at acts very sly but this again can be due to my biased feelings for Kesar ๐คemmComing to 10th chapter I was pleasantly surprised to find Gulaal at her seducing best and that almost kiss, sigh! I wish you wouldn't have stopped there,ek kiss ho jane dena chahiye tha..realy???i thought bache se paaap karwane k jurm mein kahi tum log jail na krado๐yeah we all paapi here,so that's bwhat everyone will want...dekhna everyone will second me...chalo then ok...aagey dhayan rakhungiiAb jaldi se update kar,can't wait...aww love u dear
Originally posted by: Piyalibose4uAyushi Dear...what to say??? it's just suuuperb yaar... ๐ when i have started reading the 1st chappi i really did not liked it so much ๐ hmm yar actually it is realy my first attempt new new reader thi to bt dekh ab improvment aai hai na๐ because that was sooo filmy but after reading all chappis i really became fan of your this ff ๐๐ผ ๐ณ aww thanx..so romantic and so passionate ff โบ๏ธ ahan๐ ...but vassy sounds cruel kind of ๐ฒ .yahi to sara suspence hai..but loved the characters of kesar Rai and Gulal Sharma.. ๐...in total it's just awesomne ๐so plz keep reading...waiting for the next chappi...update it soon dearie...๐ ok dear love u
FOR YOU DEAR...๐คโค๏ธ heart nd huge accepted๐ณ
Originally posted by: sharmishtahi yaar, luvd their chii scenes.thanx yar. good going... updte soon, keep reding dear
Originally posted by: minizzAyushi,I am still blushing yaar๐ณ ohoo!quite romantic.Do update soon๐
keep reading ๐dear...apna naam to bata naa!!
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