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FF: ArHi: Perfectly Imperfect::COMPLETE (Page 75)

nimra21 Senior Member
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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Okay. So I just read this FF in one go. I am supposed to be studying for a physics exam but that can be dealt with later. This is much more important. Haha! Simply amazing! I am completely floored. You are an absolutely amazing writer. Probably one of the best here. Everything was perfect. The music. The emotions. The language. The visual imagery. Loved it! And epilogue was so funny. Great writing.

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Nimmi...that has got to be the best ending ever. Aryan imitating his father and Arnav's payback for interrupting some much needed quality time (the man's still making up for those 6 months and more). Akaash...oh my god he speaks!!!! He understands the kid (with a mother like mamiji how could you not?) and the awkwardness of seeing your parents make out session. I think your decision not to give them a "miracle baby" was a really good choice. To me Aryan as he grows up will understand his adopted parents more than their own kid would, he's seen the crazyness, probably the pain as well. He's also the perfect combo of Arnav and Khushi at their best. Keep writing. 

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Just read all the chapts n wow.
Glad I gt hold of this.

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Posted: 11 May 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Damn IT! You made me cry when khushi was finaaly found in shimla. The words you use hit me sooo much!
AND then you made my day by getting htem to adopt such a wonderful kid who is soo like them both !

THX THX THX

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asumi

"She had never, ever given up on him. And he would be damned if he gave up on her"

that was soo awesome!!! how do you write soo well??? describe it the feelings with such perfect words!!! too good ya!!


before i forget- the song you chose- "what hurts the most" one of my fav songs. Rascal flatts's Why!, My Wish!, and this one- i just lOVE them. . . and i wouldn've found a more better story to relate with this song!!! Smile

brilliant baap- your way of writing!!


true words

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Posted: 13 May 2012 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Fantastic FF.. Loved it.. Just read the entire thing in one go.. Can't believe I missed this one.. Thanks for putting the link to it in Aryan's story.. I'm off to read that now..  :) 
 
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Posted: 13 May 2012 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Amazing!  Loved it!!!!!Clap
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Posted: 13 May 2012 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Just read the entire story and i freaking loved it!!!
it was superbly written!
and the epilogue was my favorite! truely aryan singh raizada is just too cute!
 
 

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