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FF: ArHi: Perfectly Imperfect::COMPLETE (Page 72)

smithasrk IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Perfect ending ...and i didnt want it to end. I love  Aryan. He is so cute...
Love U for this

Can we expect an another one?????Big smile

smitha

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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
OMG I couldn't stop laughing through out the part. LOL Aryan is really really sweet . it shows in his action n words ...
I loved how he has connection with both Khusi and Arnav not in appearance but inside personality. And that's lovely Khusi sees Arnav in him and Arnav sees Khusi in him. Truly he's their child and not another child.

I really loved how you ended perfectly this one. I too believe that giving Khusi a miracle child and making her mother would have been very unreal.

Superb end.. Clap

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sweetdesire IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 12:09am | IP Logged

Hey dear...woww you completed the story...Love the Epilogue to the core...Awiwee Poor Aryan...Have to witness  the desperation for his parents...But Love the way you end this Perfect story...I am so glad to be part of such a beautiful journey...Thanks for the PM...Take care

 

Lots of Love

Geet



Edited by sweetdesire - 22 February 2012 at 12:09am

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meghnas Goldie
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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 12:22am | IP Logged
awww it was adorable!!! Aryan's reaction to the kiss LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
n loved Arnav's 'payback time'...so Arnav-like WinkWink

loved this story n your writing style...waiting to read your new one Smile
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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 12:41am | IP Logged
OMG!! tht was the end..im gettin really emotional nwCry
Aryan was soo damn cute and i liked  how his personality was like Arnav & khushi.  This was a BEAUTIFUL story indeed.. I absolutely loved each part and thoroughly enjoyed reading it!!
Never stop writing cause u can touch people's hearts wth ur word's Smile
Thanx alot for all the pm's.Heart.I'll always be looking forward to read more of ur work

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ashna27 Senior Member
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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
perfect ending to a perfect story...of an imperfect life...

Oh hey...when are we doing the joint fiction thing? (this is divvy btw)- i was lookign forward to that idea of yours!

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nj123 Senior Member
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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
LOVED THE ENDING! you are an amazing writer...do do do write more!Smile

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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Heheheh...another ASR!!!!perfect way to end the story...thank u sooo much for spending so much of ur time to rite for us...u r an amazing writer...i hope i havmany more of ur fictions in future for me to comment on!!!

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