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FF: ArHi: Perfectly Imperfect::COMPLETE (Page 57)

sweetdesire IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Love the update
written beautifully
do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

Aussiegal Senior Member
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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Hi Nmyra
 
Thanks for this wonderful update. Loved it! Sorry i didnt comment on the previous chapter but I struggle to get access to typing some times.
 
Anyways, as said wonderful update. Loved ASRs reaction to Khushi and the way you described he's emotions as well.
 
Are you seriously thinking of ending this FF??? CryCryCryCryCry 
 
Anyways, hope to see the next chapter up soon. xx 
asumi Goldie
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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 10:06am | IP Logged
"a man with two broken ribs and a lot of alcohol in his system to accompany his bruised heart."   

i thought that was good but then

"
Do I look like a man who's had his heart torn out?"


now THAT is BRILLIANT!!! Clap soo beautifully written!!!


and the way he showed it to her!! soo sweet!! loved every bit of it!! 
     


Glimmer Goldie
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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged
That was so beautiful that I was speechless !!!!!!
Loved the way you wrote and described Arnav and Khushi's feelings !!!!!!
Have no words for it !!!!!!
Can't wait to read more !!! Thnx for the pm !!! Update soon !!
starstuff Groupbie
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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged
ohhh,,, WOW... again...

i'm a little dazed!!! you're giving me hope for the real show here!! oh good Lord!!!!!! :)

i can't wait for the next part!!! a love so deep... khushiii... arnav is hurtinggg :( they both are :(

lovely writing... beautiful!
Orion_N Goldie
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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
this is sooo amazing!!! her love for him is maybe more twisted and wonderful than his love for her... but they work!!! thanks for the PM
akshiankita IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
hey
nice update
finally they r 2gether
namirakhan Groupbie
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Posted: 16 February 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
u r way above my wave length so i need to take time to read btwn the lines

but did u mean she was now preg? 

but still with the heady song in the backdrop, itall seemed very appropriate- the final confrontation and the togetherness

do pm me in future too

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