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FF: ArHi: Perfectly Imperfect::COMPLETE (Page 53)

moonlight99 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
LOVED it! I love your writing style! 

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY!! You are brilliant!!ClapClap Finally she told him why she left him! It was so emotional and perfect! Perfect in that way..that like always every purple-blue lines of yours fits perfectly with the situation Arhi is going through!Clap Arnav did the only he could and thought would bring her back to him for forever...by kissing her! He explained and apologized through their kiss!Embarrassed So so so so beuatiful!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please continue soon! Also thanks for the pmSmile

Edited by felly_a - 15 February 2012 at 2:33pm

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LyssaPie IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
I love the way he said everything so he knew i guess and damn when he said that happy without you? was just too good!!

He used words and now his actions will speak louder

and Oh my precap Wink

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
I loved the update it was amazing!!!! Plz update soon can't wait to read the next chapter

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 2:36pm | IP Logged

A part written at 3 am your time merits an immediate read and an immediate comment at 2 am my time :-))

 
 
I like the way this FF reads - there's a strange calm which is accompanied by tumultous passion waiting to be unleashed!
 
 
ASR may never have been very good with romantic words with her, but I think his "Without you? How?" spoke much more than any declarations of love could!


Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 15 February 2012 at 2:39pm

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
aww amazingly  beautiful...i loved how he waited without rushing things..
and her unrest, insecurities finally out in the open and now he can help her get over them and then they can truly be together..

thanks 4 the Pm and do update soon:-)

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Love U for the update... ur brain works so well at this time... WOW...
i love ASR's language... 
my fav part...
""You wanted me to be happy?...


'...Without you? " he clarified himself, waiting painfully for her slight, jerky nod, before he asked her one last question.


"How?"

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Ahhh, so beautiful, loved how he said " happy without you " how", that was so so sweet. hope he can reassure her that if its a choice between having children wid someone else or living without her then he will always choose her because without her he is a walking corps. loved the update, thanx for the pm and pls continue soon.

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