FF: ArHi: Perfectly Imperfect::COMPLETE - Page 11

The update was seriously amazing!! Arnav's emotions and jealousy was perfectedly highlighted.. and judging by the precap I'm guessing that Khushi got Arnav to confess!!

Ugh. I didnt read chapters 2 and 3 b/c I didn't know they existed. So I went back and wow nice portrayal of emotions. A whole different atmosphere then the "flashbacks"! Looks like a kiss in next chapter?! But I'm wondering why Khushi thinks Arnav doesn't deserve her?! Well continue soon and thanks for pm

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Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

Woah... That was intense!!! Waiting (im)patiently for more...please! thanx for the pm.

Originally posted by: dumas

jealousy prompted him to act to go against every thing and take wanted he insults her but hearing the same words repeated back to him made him feel pain loved the update well written  

awesome update thanks for the pm

Aww thank you dumas...but u've broken my heart with the lack of Chocolate...😭  i'd gotten used to drooling over ur reviews

loved the update !!!!!!! the way u have written and the words you have used to describe everything is just superb !!!!!!!!

What the.!! You didn't just leave it incomplete,did you? Oh no.

Oh That was Awwsme! Awsme!

That was perfectly suuperb kiss.

Yes it was soo passionate nd possesive.

He s yellin al wrong things to her bt he cant able to control wen she scolds herslf..,Too much na.

Anyway waitin 4 nxt update.
Thanks 4 pm.

the kiss was too good
awesome update
loved it!!!