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SS:Fragile memories (Arni& maaneet)last part at 42 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow really lovely aayr this update

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
It was such a nice update. Really happy they were and there sr. But i just feel like killing this shyam. He everytime there to seprate them.
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This content was originally posted by: pinkpearlz

Cant wait for arnav to wake up, and beat the hell out of shyam.

i hate dat creep😡...luv ARHI...😳
lovely update...😳😃continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update dr...it was grt
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww .. awesum update nadziee ..loved it !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
why does this creep shyam have to spoil everything! I loved the update naddiya and i reaaly want to read the next part so please update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
relii nyc update
relii cute plzz update soon
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Loved the update Naddiya!!!😛😃👏⭐️
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Khushi: tears were absorbing in his shirt collar "bus kara na" she just shake him  he just open his eyes

Arnav:tum thek ho he just placed his hand on her cheek

Khushi: just hug him kissed him like she will never get hi again

Arnav: what happen he look around ?

Khushi: you were fainted for last 24 hours her eyes was triple in size because of crying

Arnav: what you have done to yourself?

Khushi: just didnot reply hold his hand tight

Arnav felt she was warm"khushi "

Khushi: just dont say anything i will not listen any one and do think of saying to me to rest .she was just holding him.

Anjali heard them she walk in she saw Arnav caress her hairs "chote "she just kissed his fore head and  then khushi ."i knew she will wake you i knew"

Arnav: just look at the Dr who just came in with Maan and Geet

Geet: and Anjali: force her to get up from his side , she was crying badly

Maan: he is fine ,we will take him home ok he just hug khushi . with eyes he said Arnav he had broken her .

Arnav: just look at DR

DR: you just rest and take care of your wife she is not in stage to sit for long .

Arnav: look at her Anjali was making her eat

Maan: just hold his hand "she cannot live without you do you know that"

Arnav:just sat "Khushi i am fine "

Khushi: just look at him

Geet: "take some medicine she needs to sleep "

Maan: ok

Geet; to Arnav"i never thought you both will be so much in love , she just didnot move a min away from your side , the girl who use to say what is love is she paused

Arnav: i took her wrong , i listen LA and Shyam.

Maan; we can talk on this later ,lets go home


at home

Arnav:look at khushi who was fixing his pillow "are you annoyed from me?"

Khushi: no

Arnav: hug her tight in his arms

Khushi: just felt she will again start crying just placed her head on his shoulder "our fault and we both paid for it , we love each other so much but we don't trust .i hide from you that he use to bother me in parties . i should have told you , but i just stop going with you . and made you feel lonely ."

Arnav: just kissed her head " my fault too i knew you love me more than your self but i listen what he said ?"

Khushi: felt movement in her belly she placed his hand on it

Arnav: felt it too he look at her .

Khushi: we didnot thought of our baby .

Arnav: just kissed her belly " papa saying sorry beta "

Khushi: smiled "papa you dont have to say sorry its ok "

Arnav: our love is still weak that why he didnot trusted each other and listen that b***

Khushi: smiled "please make mama sleep "

Arnav: sure sweeti he just hug her tight in his arms as he knew she cannot sleep without his embrace . with in few mins she slept  he just look at her face she was looking so tired and so weak . he just kissed her fore head .


next day

Arnav: just filed a case against Shyam as he has evidence ,the waiter who Shyam had hired to dissolved sugar in his drinks.he was not willing to have a enemy but this time Khushi force him to take an action against Shyam  and LA.

Epilogue 


after 1 year

Maan & Geet were invited on a dinner at RM .

junior  Arnie crawl to Maaneet daughter pram

Khushi: please hold him Arnav

Arnav: wait Khushi he will not do any thing he is my son

Khushi that is way i am scared he is your son , she was about to get up he just stop her .

Maan: wait khushi lets see.

JArnie just crawl he just  kissed her

Khushi Like father like son ,his father has just taught him one thing . she just pat Arnav.

Geet: uff abhi yeh haal ha what he will do when he will grow up?

Khushi: just poke him to get up but he was busy making video .

Maan: oh he stole my daughter teether as maaneet mahi started crying and JArnie with teether in his mouth crawl back to his papa .

Maan:" i am just having a flash back" he walk to pick up his daughter ."same way year and half back Arnav ran to my office after steeling her chewing gum. and Mahi is crying like her massi " he pat her daughter 

Khushi: shyly pat both father and son  who were laughing at each other ..

Geet; the look at arnav he just whisper something in his son ear he just crawl back to Mahi who was in Maan lap he just gave back her teether and look at his papa  made a gesture 

 he kiss her hand.

Arnav: papa and son are not that bad if the make cry they just make their love ladies laugh too he hug Khushi 

J Arnie was caressing Mahi and smiling at him 

Geet just pick him up and made both sit together "Future Arnav and Khushi"


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Kindly give long comment on last part

it was so close to my heart loved writing it i hope you all enjoyed reading it . it is better to end then to drag 😭 loved it 


Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*edited*

fab fab fab
it was sweet, cute lovely story

i loved epilogue especially the baby ones that was shhhooo cute
Edited by srahs - 12 years ago