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Posted: 12 years ago
part 117:maan geet ne tuje jabardast jatka dia na tu har baar use kiss kartha hug kartha daata protect kartha jo chahe wo kartha aaj geet ne to tuje shaadi hi karli dichak na
Maan ' r u sure.. ?? he asked
he still can't believe it was Maan Singh Khurana written clearly there!!! Geet Rathode..
rathode.. is that her sur name he wondered & signed.. he was so having mixed feeling of the situation.. but still didn't know if it was some kind of a joke.. still the joke was so perfect.
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 117 & 118 
damm cute both wify & hubby are β€οΈ
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Posted: 12 years ago
hae so cute mr and mra khurana 😳
what a shadi πŸ˜‰
pahele abortion
then shadi
now honeymoon
what will be next 🀒


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Posted: 12 years ago
πŸ₯³OMG!!!!! M@@@@@neett Are Marrieddd.😲...yipeee...πŸ₯³
loved the update...kya mast updates di di...πŸ˜›.nw i m feeling lil goog after yeterday .πŸ˜’
loved the updats.❀️
do con soon😊
w8ing eagerly...😍
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 118
Great

Fabulous

Mindblowing

Amazing

You rock yaar...
I so very much...
lartay lartey... all documentation mistakes rectified and in the end Maaneet are
i loved the nok jhok of Mr. and Mrs. Khuraana...
shaadi k bad honemoon pe hi jaatey hain... 
haan bhai kyon nahi
after all they are
 
she thought k    kerne ka koi mok anahi chortey or ab to...  
he said he is special pati who is being beaten up from first day of marriage...
Amazing
and precap...wow  
offcourse shaadi ki hai... hug k iliwa b buhat kuch banta hai...
me winks...  

muskaan
for such a wonderful update...
Continue Soon...
Edited by softly_spoken - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
all the parts are daamn cute
di pls update soon
precap:😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE=muskanp]

Dhundlae aks

PART 118
 

Mid of all this Nt got really tensed .. she was not willing for this marriage at the forst place & upper yeh sab ..it is definitely not a good sign she felt & walked away.. Dev exactly knew wat she might be feeling.. he dipped his head .. then calmed Geet.. don't worry Geet..
u both talk to him & sort it out. I don't think it is much of a problem..  legally dehka jayen tho u both r married.. bhi aur nahi bhi.. I mean BOD..aur name is not correct na..


he looked at Nt .. walking away.. wiping her tears.. he excused himself.. Geet nodded.. she knew.. Nt needed him right now.
 

The moment Dev went behind Nt...
Maan looked at her awe.. she actually had nothing to do with  Dev. 
If she had anything to do with Dev,😲😲😲😲😲 why on the earth she would have heard all your nonsense bashing and still over concerned about your feelings?❓

He dipped his head low in shame.. thinking of accusing her as someone trying to rope in the khurana family guy.. here she is fighting to free herself from someone who has willingly..
he sighed.. he couldn't stop cursing himself.. 😑😑😑😑
Just by cursing your self you are not going to ease her sorrow, do something or say something which you really mean and will keep up till the end, so that she will feel happy which will make you & your father all the more happy. She is a gem who can change your fortune & future dear. Think fast and act fast.

how could he be so mean & said all that.. he even tore their puchki. Every thing he said to her that day without thinking even once.. not even pausing..all seen to suddenly feel fresh in his mind.. hurting his heart. Why didn't she say anything, why didn't she deny.. why didn't she protest???.. his heart felt burden with his own deed. To add to his misery she was angry at him yet again.

 Aap ko pata tha na.. phir aap ne sign kyun kiya?

Tumne hi kaha tha.. kuch mat pucho
ab pata chal gaya tume, usko pata tha, for the first time in life he did something which you have told him to do and you have problem with that. If he doesn't follow's your instruction, you have problem & if he follow it then also you have problem😑😑😑. This is not fair Geet...πŸ˜‰

main kaho ghi well main kudo tho kud javogen

whar else he has done now sweety. he has jumped into a well & trapped in there hanging himselp to a branch which has no steps to climb up. neither he can jump down to the bottom of the well as he fear of getting hurt by the tiger nor he can climb up go on his own as lion is there on the edge of the well. (Geet didi, you are there inside the well who will eat him alive if he says he is married and live with you & Mr. Yash , your sweet boss & his own father will kill him with bare hands if he says he is not married)either way his life is at risk😭😭😭😭😭


useen main tho kuda hoon
she made a big O
aur kya ..shaadi wo bhi tumse
she crossed her hand.. & looked away. Mujhe kaun si shaadi karni thi aapse
just then the registrar's assistance came & requested for their Ids.. they gave their respective licenses & continued to argue.
Maan ' leker tho tum hi layen thi
wo tho Dev aur di ki shaadi main witness ban ke liyen, mujhse shaadi karne keliyen nahi
chado..aap se tho baat karna bekar hain.. main jaake registrar's baat karti hoon

Maan pulled her back.. wo kyun?
Aisen Geet nahi shaadi karti

his eyes couldn't stop admiring her cutely stressed face.. he softly pushed her strands behind.. phir Geet kaisen shaadi karti hain
she waked him.. aap ko mazak sooj raha hian
nahi I am dam serious.. if want to get married in a different way.. challo

Despo, why are in such a hurry to make her your wify in whichever way she wants to get married? Do you still fear that she will go away with Karan or someone else?????? this is not right console her first.

she looked tensed..
yash sir ko pata challega tho pata hain kitni problem ho sakti hain
Maan almost left her instantly & stepped like a one arm distance.

Muskan, this Geet is the advanced version of Geet from TM. But there she had high hopes on her wedding whereas this girl is dumbstuck with the idea of she got married.

She marched angrily to the registrar..
 
Registrar smiled weakly at her.. wondering wat she was planning to do now.. before she could say anything.. he promptly gave back their Ids..
sorry for all the confusion mam he said very politely.
Geet wanted to tell them to cancel the whole dam thing, but jhuta hi sahi.. she didn't want break this unknown.. meaningless bond with him. She couldn't say anything.

Geet puttar, you can not run away from your inner feelings for Maan. You have agreed to be his wify when you accepted his mom's chain. (you are already wearing it as if it is Mangalsuthra which he himself has put on your neck). Don't call it meaningless bond. Both of your hearts have bonded very well even before you have realized it (sorry you people are still confused, Muski, make them understand there feeling fast)

maan took advantage of her silence. he came around  & whispered in her ears.. Challen Mrs Khurana
Geet almost jumped..wat??
wat ?' wat did u say?
Very innocently looked at her..main ne kya kaha
nahi aapne abhi kuch kaha
challen
uske baad..
he pretended.. kis ke baad..
she knotted her brows..
he teased legally hi sahi.. ho tho tum Mrs Khurana na
she was getting so angry but couldn't hide the blush that was getting reder every time he addressed her like that.
Dehko... yeh shaadi yeh sab wrong hain.. main nahi manthi.. aap bhi nahi manthen
phir problem kya hain he said taking the car keys from her
she sighed.. dehko this is not done.. we r not married ok
r u kidding, dad will kill me

Either way Dad will kill you , manlo ya na manlo, you arec dead the moment Sr. Khurana comes to know about these proceedings...

she sat in the car.. still not able to let go..  that happened.

All that was just one big mistake ok she said reassuring herself more than him. He could just eat her up live.. she was so innocently cute. He took the car out of the main road .. & turned into a different road.
Yah kanha ja rahen ho aap?
honey moon pe
he said very casually
she screamed in horror honeymoon???
he stopped the car.. & looked at her intently. She fluttered her eyes gave him a amused look. Yeh tho waisen hi kiss karne ko koi mauka nahi choten.. aab tho..
her heart began to beat frantically in anticipation. He opened his seat belt & leaned closer to her. His breath deepened .. she took in his smell.. natural.. just him. She could feel herself completely helpless underneath his gaze.. the crimson eyes that just mesmerized her.

 ye lo, madam is already ready for the kiss and still blames him that he is an oppotuninst who doesn't leave any ocassion to kiss.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰


Shaadi ke baad sab honey moon pe hi jathen hain na.. he teased.

Arrey Baba, if you take her out now in the pretext of honeymonn, it wont be honeymon anylonger. It will turns out to be Honeybees stings and HOT SUN. You will get burnt. So apply some sunscreen lotin on your skin and take an antidot for bees sting before attempting any further action. (pata nahi chala what i meant, manofy her fast and confuse her so much that she will follow you, but even as a joke, don't try to blackmail her emotinally. You will be dead)
His lips were so close to hers.  Her heart was racing thousand beats per minute & she felt her breath would come out faster than normal. She felt her skin burn now wherever his breath touched her leaving her longing.. & terrified of this longing.
He started to laugh.. looking at her nervous face..
she breathed out in release...
she waked him.. u r so mean..

Oh, really mam????

aauch.. main ek lota pati honga puri duniya main jo aapni shaadi ke din se hi patni se mar kha raha hain
wat do u mean shaadi ki din se hi??
waisen sab pati mar kaaten hain

oh really??
aur main tho special.. aaj se hi mar kha raha hoon
very funny
aur nahi tho kya
Don't give her free ideas, she will make use of them in the due course siting your words. So keep all these ideas of husband getting beaten up by wife to yourself.

aisen thodi hota hain.
Mera hi haal dehk lo..
she made a cute frowning face & looked awaymujhe aapse baat nahi karna
yehlo.. abhi tho madam gussa bhi hogayen.. yaar Mrs Khurana.. aaj ke din tho gussa mat karo
main Mrs khurana nahi hoon..
he pulled her in his arms.. nahi ho??
his gaze searched her eyes.
She looked down immediately  turning out of embrace.
 
Turning out of embrace. what the hell?
 
 
 
Precap
wify hubby passionate hug.
Just the hug... this is not fair, even you are acting like the CVs. Just with a hug, mannet had the child and here looks like you are also planning to go in line with them. should we expect maan teasing her that after the SR they got married. She did everything like, SR & marriage etc???

Jaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
as promisec I have given a lengthy comment. Now it is your turn to give a very long & spicy & jovial update. btw, give some relief to DEV & NT.

jaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome, fantastic muskaan :) love you for clearing misunderstandings between them! loots of hugs nd ummah!! 
still sad that geet actually ended!
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Posted: 12 years ago
MUSKAAN DI
OUTSTANDING 


 UPDATE


I CAN'T  STOP LAUGH FOR PART-117