hahahhaha...ye wala mast tha...
tumne unki shaadi kawayi bhi and nahi bhi...Maan finally got to know ki Dev is interested in NT and not Geet and that his inner desire too was fulfilled... but ab bas make them talk... like really talk...make them have a hearty conversation... your Maaneet never have a hearty conversation... most of your stories have misunderstandings... your stories have so much of day to day life like ours but so much of misunderstandings... hope you do this story of yours differently and clear the misunderstandings right away... all they need is 15 mins of conversation... sane conversation...aankhon se baat cheet nahi... they need to open their mouth n talk... give answers and ask questions about all the grudges they have,doubts they harbour and love they hide...maybe this is the right opportunity for them to sort out the big mess they have created by not opening their mouth ... I mean they have a sea of misunderstanding here - it starts with Geet being Karan's GF to Maan being with Prachi, then Maan pining for Prachi and then the Karan's night stay with Geet to Maan's thought of Geet being pregnant...kya raita faila rakha hai dono ne apni apni life mei... plzzz yaa!! you can do it... for once write a story where you have misunderstandings in batches.. yeh wala batch clear kar do... fir nayi wali misunderstandings le aana bhale hi... but abhi ke liye inka misunderstanding ka bucket full ho gaya hai... ab sab saaf kar do plzzz!!!
aaj ke din mei itna dhaasoo update diya hai tumne ...dil khush ho gaya mera!!!
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