VirMan SS: Yeh Pal (last part: pg.11) - Page 9

Awww!! Cute wonderful part... perfect ending.. loved it to the core...

Hey it is a wonderful update contains almost all the feelings,,, longigness, happy, heartbroken... everything,,👏... Edited by love_never_dies - 12 years ago

Like it? I totally loved it Reya... It is indeed an awesome piece of SS. Virat and Manvi are indeed destined to be together and how you brought them together even after 10 years is simply perfect. Every word described their emotions, how they endure the 10 years of separation yet the love for each other never faded away. It is sad that this SS ended but liked the ending alot. Please continue to write more and include me in your PM list for your future creations.

Reallynice ending very sweet and emptional u actually made me cry at the father daughter moment. Loved it thanx so much for the pm

awww !!! tooo gud , nce endng ..

awww I loved it 😊 what a cute ending!

really sweet ss..loved it!!

woww..what an amazing way of giving closure..it's as if maanvi's heart finally gave her the go-ahead in the form of a vision of her dad..👏 that was truly haunting! 😲 and the ending, god it was ☺️ no prizes for guessing why..🤣 it was picture perfect...gosh..i'm not supposed to like happy endings.  🤣

arey yaar! kya kaho?it was fantabulous, a perfect ending to a perfect story :)

wow its really very nice . enjoyed every bits and pieces of it