VirMan SS: Yeh Pal (last part: pg.11) - Page 3

Originally posted by: rev4eva

Oh Reya, another wonderful piece from you. Loved it, will add your new ID to my buddy list. 😊

Originally posted by: moksha89

mystery mystery .. i love it!

cant wait for the part 😊

Originally posted by: mohseena

amazing ss kindly add me to ur pm list!!

Originally posted by: thesh

Lovely add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: krystal1234

I m speechless this is great there's so much suspence I love it plz pm me when u update

Originally posted by: love_never_dies

lovely,, different and interesting story,, contiue soon and please PM me when you update the next part..

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

ermm, okay i'm a bit down today. don't ask..i'm in a permanent state of melancholy since i was born. 😆 ..i was gonna ask before u said not to to ..hopefully u are better now 😊

but really glad that you've decided to start a SS!😳 ..I'm sure if I would be all shivering in my seat right now if I was in my reading mood, because even though I'm down, I was going 'oh-my-gosh'...maanvi falling in virat's arms was perfecto. 😆😛😉hehe..thanks baby :) i personally loved their fall too...and it had to be dramatic cause they were coming face to face after 10 years😳

and hmm..looks like virat doesn't know that maanvi was adopted...i'm wondering why maanvi never got in touch with him if her khadoos dad went out of the way. 😕 yeah, i'm a bit morbid, don't mind me...🤣 not minding at all😆..but she had her reasons which will come into light in the next part 😳

anyway..don't forget, now I'm also your Eternal Reader.😉 yayyy😃

and i want to see you make a series  of short stories and one shots the way you did on Maaneet😳..(hehe, stalked out your maaneet works, they were amazing! 😉) counting on you for providing me loads of inspiration! 😳 you did ? Maaneet were the reason i started writing..all those pieces made me discover the love i have for writing 😳

(and don't worry..you can be as sadist with me as you want..🤣)hahaha😆..u sure u want to ditch ur comedy ?😲 because personally i love it 😃..but i am sure u will rock at the sad pieces as well😉

P.S. Viren is the party animal in this one? 😲🤣 haha😆..ya..because Virat is kinda sober in this one and Viren may not seem to fit but i have seen KT's last two shows and he can pull it off😉