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part-8...while bhumi was sitting in her house,she hears
                                                      Arjun calling from
                          outside:bhoomiiiiiii. B was
                                                                                     
                          surpised 2 see him there.
                                                      A:the result came.i
                                                                                     
                          won..B was so happy that
                                                      she 4got everything &
                                                                                     
                          hugged him.this was seen by
                                                      yuvraj's mom. she thinks:let
                                                                                     
                          yuvraj cum back after his
                                                      trip.i'l tell him
                                                                                     
                          everything.these stupid girls'
                                                      plans will be spoiled.
                                                                                     
                          she laughs. B goes out in
                                                      search of job.but she
                                                                                     
                          fails.she was tired & cumes
                                                      back in the evening. she was
                                                                                     
                          dull:my efforts did'nt
                                                      work.did'nt get any job.
                                                                                     
                          bhoomi's mom:bhoomi,there is a
                                                      sweet news 4 u.it'll make u
                          4get
                                                                                     
                          this worry. B was anxious
                                                      2 no. manasvi smiles.
                                                                                     
                          B:i don't hav the patience 2
                                                      wait anymore.plz tell
                                                                                     
                          me..r u all teasing me?
                                                      mom:never! M:here sum
                                                                                     
                          ppl came.arjun's parents & his
                                                      dadi. B was
                                                                                     
                          surprised. M:they asked
                                                      whether we'll giv u 2
                                                                                     
                          them. they want u & arjun 2
                                                      get married. B becomes
                                                                                     
                          shy. she runs away...dreams
                                                      about arjun...song in which
                                                                                     
                          they perform:tum pass
                                                      aaye......yuvraj's mom tells
                          him
                                                                                     
                          whatever happened here
                                                      concerning A-B .he
                                                                                     
                          becomes angry & he beats
                                                      Manasvi.mom cud'nt save her.
                                                                                     
                          M:i no why u r angry.u
                                                      won't get bhoomi,thats
                                                                                     
                          why.. Y:yes,i want
                                                      bhoomi.i don't leave her 4 that

                                                                                     
                          stupid arjun. M:arjun
                                                      is not stupid.he is so nice
                                                                                     
                          that he luves bhoomi very
                                                      much.he'll save her from this
                                                                                     
                          hell. B comes hearing
                                                      this.her eyes got filled up
                                                                                     
                          with tears.Y beats
                                                      M again. N cud'nt
                                                                                     
                          tolerate it. she shouts at
                                                      B:if u beat my sister
                                                                                     
                          again,honestly i'll die.
                                                      Y stops beating
                          her:ok,but
                                                                                     
                          don't dream about ur wedding
                                                      with arjun.its not going 2
                                                                                     
                          happen. he goes out.
                                                      bhumika,manasvi,their mom start
                                                                                     
                          crying.they hug each other. bhoomi
                                                                                     
                          cud'nt tolerate Y's mom & she
                                                      shouts at Y's mom:i no that u
                                                                                     
                          torture my mom & sister.if u
                                                      repeat it,u'll see my true
                                                                                     
                          color.i'll break u into
                                                      pieces.i'm not like didi 2
                                                                                     
                          tolerate everything. she
                                                      pretends that she's going 2
                                                                                     
                          beat her.that lady got scared.

                           

oh great
i misssed a lot
so i read all

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part-9...Bhumika goes 2 Arjun's house 4 the party which
                                                      is conducted 2 celebrate
                          A's success.she was treated
                                                      well by arjun & his family.but
                          when other guests cum
                                                      they all go 2 them. then cumes
                          A's childhood
                                                      friend;the rich mishti.she
                          talks 2him very freely.kripa did'nt like the freedom she
                          was taking 2 him.Bhoomi feels
                                                      lonely.she begins 2 go.but
                          unexpectedly angad holds her
                                                      hand.she feels very happy. but
                          she goes & stands at the
                                                      verandah.A cumes:bhumi,why
                          r u standing here?cum &
                                                      enjoy the party. B:no
                          arjun,i don't hav any mood.   A:i no bhumi,u feel
                          isolated here.but don't feel
                                                      like that as long as i'm
                          alive. his words were touching
                                                      2 her. she:arjun,will u luv me
                          4ever? he:ofcourse.
                                                      she:but seeing my sister's
                          life i doubt about it.b4
                                                      marriage didi& jeeju were so
                          close that they were even
                                                      willing 2 die 4 each other.but
                          now he wants only her 2
                                                      die. A:all the men r not
                          like yuvraj. she:i no ..i
                                                      trust u,i no that u'll never
                          be another yuvraj.
                                                      A:bhumi,if i die also i'll
                          continue luving u.
                                                      she:plz don't talk about
                          death.bcoz i want u 2 be alive
                                                      4 me.u r my breath. Arjun
                          smiles. B:i'm so happy
                                                      2hear ur sincere words..if we
                          were alone i wud've kissed
                                                      u. A:thats ok,no 1 will
                          see,giv me a kiss. Bhumi
                                                      becomes shy & smiles:no
                          way....she runs away from
                                                      him.his eyes follows her &
                          smiles. A's family hav
                                                      sum debt left.his dad
                          tells:there is only 1 way 2
                                                      escape. A:whats that? dad:u
                          hav 2 marry mishti,only
                                                      her money can save us. Arjun
                          was shocked.

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Part-12....Kashish did'nt get a gud welcome from TUshar's
                          ppl.they think that she'll keep in her line thru her
                          beauty.K was very affectionate 2 T's
                          baby;Shubam.
T becomes very happy:kashish,i respect u
                          ,bcoz u r becming a wonderful mom.
K smiles. Sujal
                          decides 2 leave 2 bombay. his parents did'nt allow.
                          S:no,i've 2 go.i'll stay with rishi.i want freedom 2
                          think & dream.i've lots 2 dream about..my
                          childhood...kashish....
S leaves.his parents become sad.
                          Rishi was surprised about S's return.
R:i thot u won't
                          return.i thot u'll b enjoying ur romance with kashish.
S
                          smiles.
R:ur smile shows thAT u r in luv with kashish.that
                          day itself i told u no.but u said no.
S:that was the
                          gr8est blunder of my life.my biggest mistake.i feel like
                          singing a luv song.
R:but 4 a duet,kashish is not here.
                          S:but i see kashish with the eyes of my mind.the magic of
                          luv makes a lover 2 write a luv song & 2 sing it.
R
                          laughs:is it?
S sings:hum dil de chuke sanam....S
                          feels that K is also there with him 2 sing.later when he
                          realises that it was only his dream,he becomes really
                          upset.he cries loudly.R was shocked:why r u crying?
                          S:kashish was not there with me 2 sing.
R laughs:only bcoz
                          of that?u r not able 2 liv without seeing her 4 a
                          moment?its ok.after wedding u can see her 4ever.
S:the
                          wedding is over. R was surprised:its over?then why
                          did'nt u bring her here?i wud like u see ur childhood
                          luv.
S:its impossible 2 bring her here.bcoz the person
                          whom kashish got married 2 is not me,its tushar.
R was
                          shocked.

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PART-10...Arjun loses his control:papa,how cud u ignore
                                                      bhoomi?u 4got what he has dun 2
                          us?she is the reason why
                                                      i'm here now. dad:i no
                          that,but our
                                                      circumstance..A:i don't want 2
                          hear anything.
                                                      dadi:arjun is rite.he shud'nt
                          cheat bhumi. A
                                                      reveals his luv 4 Bhoomi 2
                          mishti.M was very sad:its
                                                      ok Arjun.i understand.i'm fond
                          of u,bcoz of ur true luv
                                                      4 bhoomi.but plz see me as ur
                          gud friend. A:i always
                                                      saw u like that.still i'm.
                          m smiles:thank u arjun.so
                                                      a gud friend shud help the
                          friend when he is in
                                                      need.rite?so i'll giv u sum
                          money.ur debt will be over.
                                                      A was shocked. M:don't be
                          shocked arjun.4 this
                                                      money only ur dad forced u 2
                          marry me.but i'm telling u
                                                      that u don'r hav 2 marry me 4
                          this.its just a friend'd
                                                      help. he:thanks 4 ur big heart
                          mishti.but i can't recieve
                                                      it. M:thats ur complex
                          arjun.if u don't pay
                                                      money,u'll lose
                          everything..then ho can u bring bhoomika 2
                                                      ur life?she'll suffer along
                          with u.u want 2 see it?    
                                                      A:no..i won't allow her 2
                          suffer. M:then u
                                                      recieve this money. A
                          accepts her money. Bhoomi's
                                                      mom cumes 2 see
                          Arjun:yuvraj is becoming really
                                                      cruel.he won't allow 2 conduct
                          this wedding.yuvraj will
                                                      not be there 4 2 days.b4 he
                          cumes back plz take bhoomi
                                                      away. she cries. A:tell
                          bhoomi 2 get ready.i'll
                                                      cum 2mrrow 2 take her home.
                          she becomes happy. Yuvraj's
                                                      mom finds it out & informs
                          him.bhoomi was getting
                                                      ready.she hears the sound of a
                          vehcle:Arjun has cum.but
                                                      unfortunately it was not
                          arjun,but yuvraj.

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pART-11..YUvraj shouts at bhumika:what do u think of me?u

                                                                                    
                          thot u can easily fool me?let
                                                      Arjun cum.i'll kill him.i
                                                                                    
                          won't allow u 2 go with him.
                                                      B got scared. he goes
                                                                                    
                          near manasvi:u thot u can
                                                      save ur sister?
                                                                                    
                          M:yes,she'll be saved.u
                                                      cannot do anything.when
                                                                                    
                          i'm alive u won't get her.
                                                      Y:so that means i won't
                                                                                    
                          get bhumi if u r alive..then
                                                      i'll kill u.then i'll get
                                                                                    
                          bhumi no. Yuvraj beats M
                                                      heavily.bhumi-mom
                                                                                    
                          cud'nt save her. M's
                                                      situation was really
                                                                                    
                          dangerous.so B takes a
                                                      knife & stabbed him.ppl were
                                                                                    
                          shocked.B screams. Arjun
                                                      reached.he did'nt
                                                                                    
                          understand anything. B
                                                      cries:i killed arjun...A
                                                                                    
                          was shocked. B:if u had cum
                                                      a little more
                                                                                    
                          earlier,this wud'nt hav
                                                      happened. A was really
                                                                                    
                          upset. B:u go arjun.god
                                                      does'nt like us living
                                                                                    
                          2gether.u marry misti.don't
                                                      spoil our life.u go
                                                                                    
                          arjun..plz giv me ur fav
                                                      violen.thats enuff 4 me 4 ur
                                                                                    
                          presense.but in jail i dunno
                                                      whether they'll allow me 2
                                                                                    
                          carry.go arjun...but plz don't
                                                      say 'gud-bye'.i can't
                                                                                    
                          bear it. A:bhumi.. suddenly
                                                      she falls into A's
                                                                                    
                          arms. she:u shud not cum 2 see
                                                      me 2 the jail.don't see
                                                                                     me
                          in that situation.sumtimes
                                                      i won't be seen alive
                                                                                    
                          there. A:bhumi,how can i liv
                                                      without u? he hugs her
                                                                                    
                          tightly. A sees Y's
                                                      hand moving slightly. A:yuvraj
                          is not dead.we'll take
                                                      him 2 the hospital.
                                                                                    
                          B:no let him die.otherwise
                                                      he won't giv us piece.
                                                                                    
                          A:r u crazy?
                                                      M:arjun,we'll take him
                          2 the
                                                                                    
                          hospital. B:u r mad.he'll
                                                      kill u. M:i don't
                                                                                    
                          want him 2 die,not bcoz i luv
                                                      him.bcoz if he dies,u'll
                                                                                     be
                          in jail.u'll miss a happy
                                                      life.i won't u 2 be happy
                                                                                     in
                          Arjun's hands. B was
                                                      touched by that. Y gets up.
                                                                                    
                          M
                                                                                    
                          stares at him. Y:i tried
                                                      2 kill u.then also u saved
                                                                                    
                          me? M:that's not bcoz
                                                      of my luv. Y becomes
                                                                                    
                          sad:i won't destroy bhumi's
                                                      life.let her go with
                          arjun.bhumi,i'll be ur old
                                                      jeeju.u can trust me this
                                                                                    
                          time. M:i can't trust
                                                      u. Y:i no that.but giv me
                                                                                    
                          chance..2day onwards i'll be
                                                      ur faithful husband,i
                                                                                    
                          promise. he catches M's
                                                      hand.she gets relieved.
                                                                                     Y:bhumi,thanku 4
                                                      teaching me a lesson.all these
                          days
                                                                                     i
                          was not conscious.now with
                                                      ur punishment i think i've
                                                                                     a
                          change. Arjun-bhumika smile.they
                                                      get married & hav a
                                                                                    
                          happy life.   THE END.
                                                     
                           

great story jas
it was wonderful and sweet 😛

wow...... very nice.... till the end.... 👏
but y did ya end ???????    
els u shud continu writing such small sweet stories... it was really nice !!! 😊 😊 😊