Hey guys, this is my first OS on my favorite couple Virat and Manvi. Usually I m just a reader and normally just comment on other people's fabulous writing, But I couldn't resist writing this. So here is small piece of my stupid writing, Please do comment and tell me if I should continue with it..???
Background
Info : A month passed to Viren and Jivika's wedding. Manvi was
staying with the Vaderas for some days. Virat and Manvi were in love
but no one else knew... Hope you guys will like it.
She was ill and she knew it now. Yesterday evening she got her test reports. Now she knew what all those fainting spells, that high fever, the severe headache and easy bruising meant. She was having blood cancer in its second stage. No one else knew except Virat as he accompanied her to the doctor. She wanted no one to know about her illness but she knew sooner or later they will come to know. But she wanted some time to figure out how to tell everyone, and she was grateful to Virat that he accepted her wish to give her some time.
She was sitting on the bench in the garden outside Vadera mansion with the photo album of Viren and Jivika's wedding. Her head was throbbing with pain. But she ignored it and watched the pictures of the wedding.
Virat
watched her from behind. She was happy, looking at the photos and
smiling. Virat loved her and her smile. But he knew that she was
going through pain form inside. He wanted her to tell everyone about
her illness, but he couldn't deny her innocent wish of the need for
some time. He admired her quality of giving out happiness only to
others and keeping all the pain to herself. She was the ray of
sunshine in his dark and empty life. It was she who broke through all
the barriers he had built around himself. She made him forget the
sorrows of his past and made him live in the present to the fullest.
She made him realize that he can do whatever he want to in his life
and taught him to follow his heart, his dreams. She was the light
which brightened his life. SHE WAS HIS LIFE!!!
Done. So please tell me how is it and if I should continue with it or not?? Joote, chappals are always welcome...😆
Thanks!!!!!!
Niki 😊
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