Originally posted by: -Garima-LOLL!
I absolutely loveee that dialogue from Main Hoon Naa! :D HAHA! Amazing OS Nayika! I loved how Khushi addressed him as "uncle" lololl had a huge grin at the end of it! :)You always bring a huge smile to my face with your writing, keep it up! (:--Garima
Originally posted by: smileyhug7679kushi uncle mat khao yaaar
poor fellow will get is BP high
Originally posted by: egleSo damn cute! π
Originally posted by: areeba_blossomoh my godd!! π€£π€£π€£
that uncle totally put me into fitss of laughter!!
Originally posted by: arhi-sarun-fanIts really very nice Uncle???!!!!π
Originally posted by: maanviluvzviratFIRST OF ALL THANK U FOR THE PM
AND THEN I LOVED IT I REALLY LOVED IT I LIKE HOW U USED ''UNCLE''. iT WAZ SO CUTEπ
Originally posted by: desisweetheart9Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Loved the muh toh bandh karo uncle.
Originally posted by: ..Jojo..This was just amazing! LOL! I can so see Khushi doing that to him one day! Nayika, you write the most amazing OS's! Loved this one, now I am off to read everything else :D
Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarunthis was amazing...that uncle part gave me a good laugh...you always write amazing stuff...love your work...thanks for the pm hun
Originally posted by: nyxxUncle π€£
Oh how I would love to see things like this after Shyam is revealed in the show. Loved both of the convos between sibilings..and ofcourse, ArHi. πFab as always Shuheda :)- Dee
Originally posted by: LyssaPieLOL UNCLE? ahahahahah nicee keep going
Originally posted by: zafiLoved it. Loved the dialogues.π Oh Arnav is such a goner after seeing Khushi.π³Thanks for the PM.π
Originally posted by: pinkpearlzUncle! LOL.
Nice one.
Thank you everyone! :)
Originally posted by: khahaniHow I love logging in here to find something written by you! I only log into this forum to see if anything good has been written.
You write really well, it's so easy to follow and get into the story. I have started watching this show about a month ago and then slowly stared to revive my journey to I-F all over again after eons :P
I have read some of your other one-shots and short stories (yet to catch up on everything)...but the current favourites are '30-Days' and 'Wait'please stay'
I really enjoyed reading 'Stay'...that is exactly the kind of ending I would want in a real life situation, if the girl in question was mistreated like Kushi.
Looks like the Laad Governor doesn't appreciate Kushi reffering to him as an 'uncle'...I don't blame him especially with his wayward thoughts regarding Miss Pompom LOL
Keep up the good work :)
Nahee
Originally posted by: MrDarcyfanThanks for the PM Nayika! Naughty... naughty Khushi! Wish I could see this scene on the show!
No reason why NOT?π
Originally posted by: sari.loveI love how u try to creat little romance with funny behave of khushi..i wish if this happen in serial...dying to see their romance...π
Originally posted by: MairaKhan1180Thank you for the kind message and for the links π I remember watching Main Hoon Na so many times, it was one if the great movies. Very well written, just love it!
Originally posted by: dbr_kmichilol!! very nice
Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evrLOL this was cute π€£
Originally posted by: sushi-launcle!! oh my! what a sexy uncle..hehe ππ³
loved it! thanks for the PM!
Originally posted by: malluangelhaha leave it up to khushi :P UNCLE?!?!?
Originally posted by: mollycoddlesimply fab
Originally posted by: reyabearπ€£"Uncle?" the last part had me lol-ing. Loved it! Gosh, now I feel like watching Main Hoon Na. :P
Originally posted by: mystique_girlit was awesome...
i dont know how it realtes to Main Hoon Na but I can relate it the "uncle" that the kids called him when he was standing while Khushi was fixing the tyre of his car !! LOL
Originally posted by: savi-tan
Didn't know that there was such a dialogue in Main hoon na...good one!
Originally posted by: minimuffin86UNCLE!!! π€£
HAHAHA! he really hates it when she calls him that! but i loved this. and Akash is such a woman about this whole thing yaar! ahahaha
Originally posted by: littlemoi
hahahahahahπ€£ "uncle?" lol awesome os!! thank you so much for the pm!
Originally posted by: lollipop4uThis was absolutely awesome!! Please continue!
Originally posted by: arshi93LOVE IT!!!
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