OS: Unbelievable - Page 6

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

It was too short!! Before my smile started widening the OS ended!! Unbelivable😃..!

Nice cute OS! Will make sure to bring a smile on every reader's face!

Glad you liked it even though it was short :P

Originally posted by: Raha26

Really amazing!
This is first time I read a "dreaming" segment!
Short and very good!

Originally posted by: kausar1219

amazing!!!

can u write anoder plz but a little longer one...dis lends makin us want for more...

but its absolutely wonderful!!!!

Originally posted by: soni4eva

wow dat was a short n beautiful os

luvd it x

Originally posted by: arnshi

Short and lovely.⭐️
I just so wish this to happen.

Originally posted by: arooshee

nice

Originally posted by: dyhardfan

Love it when arnav says unbelieve. Thanks great os

Originally posted by: SiRul

Love asr" unbelievable

Thanks everyone!

Originally posted by: nadak

ahaha, it made me smile. Short but very sweet :D Nice work. xx

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

nice os. loved how he used "unbelievable"

Originally posted by: moon_mine

superb one!!!!

jst loved it!!!!

Originally posted by: mademoiselle927

SWEET :)

Originally posted by: devishree

cool os unbelievable shuheda and i loved the lines "iam here and you're here"

simply superb

Originally posted by: rumu

Very sweet 😊..

Originally posted by: meenaluma

short but great os

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Nice os 

Originally posted by: sarach

woww.loved it.this was really cute.loved it

Thank you all!

i don't know about khushi, but i just felt a sense of security...

WOW...short and cute OS!!!😛👏⭐️

Originally posted by: RiyaDutta

WOW...short and cute OS!!!😛👏⭐️

Thanks!

Originally posted by: reena544

WONDERFUL

Thank you!

Originally posted by: sharneil92

i don't know about khushi, but i just felt a sense of security...

NO IDEA WHY. 😕

ANYWAYS! as always, a delight to read your work! 😳

That's exactly what Khushi was feeling ;)

Thanks so much! :D

Originally posted by: rbarretto

lovely 

Thanks

Loved it. Cute and short <3

just how khushi would react!!! loved it!!

Really good OS, just a bit short. Lovely how khushi can have a conversation, ask or plead with arnav through her eyes and it's unbelievable like arnav says! Amazing the impact I'm here can give.

amazing os... tooo good
short and sweet:):)