To the PH - I don't want to compare you with Balaji or other productions because you're fairly new in business but can't you spend just a little bit more money? Maybe you can start of by cleaning that so-called pool. What if Sarun (who spends the most time near the poolside) accidentally falls into that dirty pool? What if one of the crew members falls in?
Can you please try not to recycle your sets? AR office becomes a shop and RM becomes a caf; like we wouldn't notice. How about an outdoor shoot? Is it really that expensive?
To the CV's and Gautam Hegde - Can you please refrain from jumping from one track to another? First you delayed the Payash track. While being on the Faraq padta hai track, you suddenly shifted gears and jumped on to the Payash track. I was in favour of the Payash from the beginning but you could have gradually developed it. Whatever happened to the Farq padta hai track.
Can you focus a little bit more on the storyline, character sketches and consistencies instead of symbolisms? Symbolisms are great and I love them but shouldn't you bake the cake first instead of making decorative icing?
Shyam - Shyam is the biggest blooper of the show. Yes I am actually calling this character a blooper. He is a lawyer who never works. He spends his day at the GH and supposedly spends his nights at RM. If he is a PG he should be spending his nights at GH and work during the day. I know he'll be caught soon but when does he work, where does he sleep and how does he manage to sneak in and sneak out without getting caught? Did he really use the window to get out? When the show started, Anjali's husband was on some tour for the longest time. Why would a lawyer go on tours? Apparently he is in love/lust with Khushi. How exactly was he planning to juggle to wives who happen to live in the same city?
Anjali - Anjali and her puja ki thali. Akshay Dogra said it all.
Buaji - Buaji clearly has problems with her vision. Give her a corrective surgery asap. And I suppose she needs therapy for her obsession with a man half her age.
Garima - Whatever happened to that old Lucknow Garima who called the shots regarding her daughter's lives? She was capable of silencing buaji with her glares.
Khushi - Please do not spoil Khushi's character sketch. There is a fine line between being naive, innocent and annoying. She is supposed to be smart yet childlike and not dumb. Are you having a tough time multi tasking Mr. Hegde? You often seem to get confused between Khushi and that other female lead of that other show that you write.
I love her antics but the least you can do is make them believable. Can you seriously puncture a tire with a hairpin? Companies who make such tires should be sued.
The Prakash brother's - How many members of the Prakash family work at RM? JP, OP HP'.?? The Raizada's are rich and they need multiple people to maintain the mansion but how come they never work there at the same time? It's like one comes and the other disappears. Do they work in shifts? How come there are two HP's? Are they fraternal twins with the same name?
Lakshmi - Why the hell is there a goat in that mansion? I didn't know goats could be toilet trained. And the actors (particularly Jayshree T) carries her most of the time. Are you sure that's a good idea?
To the actors - Okay this is a sensitive topic. Most of the actors are doing a fabulous job but I still have some complains. I don't intend to bash. No offense to the actors or the fans.
Abhaas Mehta - I suppose you're doing a fine job with your character but maybe you need to work a bit on the expressions. They often seem exaggerated. Ever heard of subtlety Mr. Mehta? As an actor there is always room for improvement. And No I am not confusing between Abhaas and Shyam.
Deepali Pansare - I am glad the cv's finally focused on your character and it finally looks like the parallel lead. But being the parallel lead means that you have to be able to justify that character. Please work on your expressions. Thanks god for the dialogues otherwise during that apology scene I couldn't make out form the expressions if Payal was surprised, sad or angry.
Garima ( Not sure about the real name ) - Maybe you need to focus on the dialogue delivery a bit. You seem to slip with that Lucknow accent.
Yes I am ardent fan of the show but some things just can't be overlooked. As a fan I only want the best for the show. That's why I am ranting.
Just because I am Meerabai doesn't mean I don't notice.😉
NOTE: SEE MY LAST POST ON PAGE 5
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