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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!!

Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:27am | IP Logged

ok...this fanfic will continue from where suraj was holding manasvi's hand in his......

Manasvi: plz....suraj maath jao...yeh parivaar tumhare bina adoora hoga...khushi...mummy...bhoomi...arjun...

Suraj: arjun kyun adoora mesoos karega...voh tho abhi mujhe dushman samjhtha hai...

Manasvi: lekhen mera kya hoga...?

Suraj: erm....lekhen manasvi...amin ek aise ghar mein nahin reh sakte jahan....jhuth aur fareeb ka raj hai...mansen kakasaheb aur yuv ki saath main nahin reh sakta...

Manasvi: kaun kehta hai..ki tum kakasaheb ki beta bankar raho...siddarth papa ki tho beta ban sakte hoo..haina?

suraj(luking at manasvi): lekhen arjun ki yeh nafrat main nahin bardaash kar sakta hoo....baar baar voh mujhe ek bhai ki tarha nahin...ek dushman ki tarha dekhtha hai....

manasvi: arjun...nadan hai....abhi bacho ki tarha....lekhen.....hum sab tumhare zaroorat hai...aur khushi ka kya hoga...tumhare aur khushi ki kitne chalte hai...

suraj: manasvi.....voh...

manasvi(folds her hands): plz...hume chor kar maath jao...aaj ek dost pehle baa kuch maang rahe hai....

suraj(takes her hands into his his): theek hai...nahin jaaoga....ek dost ni ek request kya hai..tho phir nahin jaoga...

manasvi(smiles): thank u...so much....

suraj: hey...dost kabhi bhi ek doosri ko thank u nahin kehte.....rite?

manasvi: hmm....rite...

(bhoomi comes in)

bhoomi: arre...manasvi bhabhi.....kya hua..?

manasvi; suraj abh humare saath rehega...

suraj: kyunki manasvi ni request kiya hai...aur main iska request kaise inkar karta..

bhoomi: so sweet of u...surajji...abh ki tarha bhai ka koi mukabla nahin ho skata....

suraj; acha.....koi kaam tha.,..bhoomi?

bhoomi: haan....voh baisa aur bade dadaji.....bula rahe thi...aur vaise kakasaheb aur yuvraj bhaiyya bhi aapse kuch kehna chahti thi...

suraj(luking angry): kehne ko abh kya baaqi hai?

manasvi: suraj....arram se...nicely..huh?

suraj: theek hai...chalo....(leaves)

manasvi: chale bhoomi...

bhoomi; haan theek hai...(both leave)

Precap: Mansen and Yuv ask Suraj for forgiveness, Suraj refuses to forgive them. Manasvi feels happy over Suraj's reaction.

Howz dat, ppl?

Mastang Senior Member
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:52am | IP Logged
hey not bad......yaar agar yeh real saarthi story main rahe to kiya hi baat hai.....
waise good yaar....
Suraj_Kiran Senior Member
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
That was fantastic.Keep it up. Clap
tunna Goldie
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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 2:23am | IP Logged
hey.... good 1... nice going gal.. main 2 din nahi ayi n u started off with a new1.. Wink LOL
but its lovely......hopefully saarthi mein bhi kuch aisa hi ho jata.. but seems suraj has forgiven kaka saheb...
but there's still hope.. waha nahi to yaha sahi jaldi suraj-manasvi ki shaadi ho jayegi... Smile Wink
Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Episode 2

(suraj-manasvi-bhoomi come down....the entire Goenka parivaar is present...)

BD: suraj...bhoomi aur hum sab ke liye...yeh jo tumne kya hai...uske liye..hum tumhara shukariada karte hai...
suraj: bade dadaji...aise koi baat nahin hai...maine jo bhi kuch kiya tha...aapne parivaar ke liye hai...
shaku: aur maine tumhe baar baar thapar marte rahe...aur tum chup rahe kar...baardash karte rahe...
suraj: ma...aap...
mansen: lekhen suraj.....tumhara parivaar hum hai....main..gunvanti..yuv...aksh...vishakha...khushal...tho phir yeh siddarth aur uska parivaar ki kya karte jaa rahe hoo..?
yuv: exactly dad....aur yeh arjun....dukh ki alava aur kuch nahin deeta hai...
suraj: baas yuv...enough.....lekhen sach ko ignore nahin kar sakta main...aur sach hai yeh...ki Shakuntala Goenka mere ma hai...
mamaji: haan..bhanje lekhen kaise ma hai..jo jaanam dekar...anaatasharam main chor kar chale jaye....?
suraj: kuch....halat aise hai..lekhen...aapne jo kuch bhi mere saath kya..uska kya?
mansen: suraj...kitni baar kaho ki yuv ni uss check ka misuse kya hai...tho phir mere kya galti hai?
suraj: GALTI HAI AAPKE.....AAPNE YUV KO STOP KYUN NAHIN KYA...?
bhoomi: surajji...plz....choti se baat hai...
suraj(in a calm tone): nahin..bhoomi....kakasaheb nai mere trust ka galat advantage liya hai...
yuv: lekhen....suraj hum dono dost hai...dosti ke liye hume maaf karo...
(LK comes)
LK: suraj..aaj faisla karna parega...ya phir arjun ko chono....ya phir yuvraj ko...
suraj: lekhen tumne mere dosti ka najaiz faieda uthaya hai...
yuv: mera yeh irada tho nahin tha....aise koi intentions nahin thi mere....
LK: mahabharat...mein karan aur duryodhan dost thi..aur iss mahabharat mein..karan kaunsa faisla karega..?
suraj: phir bhi....iss puri Goenka parivaar ko dhoka karne jaa rahe thi....
mansen: dekho suraj..isse maaf kar do....(suraj remains quiet...the rest get tensed about what he will say)
suraj: nahin!!!! main aap logo maaf nahin kar sakta....
yuv: acha.....uss arjun ke liye na...that bloody arjun...
suraj(getting angry and slaps yuv hard): HEY......MERE BHAI KI KILAAF EK SHABD BHI KAHA THO MUJHSE BURA AUR KOI NAHIN HOGA!!!
aksh: suraj..aaj uss arjun aur usski parivaar ke liye..aaj tum humara saath chorne jaa rahe hoo....?
suraj: agli baar...mere bhai ya phir mere parivaar ki baari mein aisa kuch kaha...tho phir tumhe nahin choroga...
(arjun is shocked at suraj's reaction....)
(suraj..and everybody leaves...arjun is in his room, thinking when suraj slapped yuv..bhoomi comes in)
bhoomi: kya hua...arjun?
arjun(crying a little): bhavri...aaj jo bhi kuch hua...
bhoomi: aisa kya hua?
arjun: jis tarha suraj ni mere liye...
bhoomi: tho...?
arjun: maine usski saath itna nafrat karta tha...aur uski jaante hui bhi...itna care karta hai voh mere liye...
bhoomi: shukar hai...tumhe aapne glati ka ehsaas hua...
arjun: mujhe...mujhe maafi maangne chahe...
bhoomi: maafe nahin....tumhe bhai ki tarha usse accep karna chahe
arjun: aaj pehle baar mujhe aisa lag raha hai..ki mera ek aur bada bhai ka saath hai...jaante ho kiska..?
bhoomi: kiska..?
arjun: suraj ka...
bhoomi(smiles): kya...matlaab?
arjun: haan bhavri...main suraj ko aapne bhai accept karne main ready hoo...(smiles)
bhoomi(happy): sach....acha...tho jao..unse baat karo..
arjun: haan..(leaves)
(bhoomi rushes 2 LK's idol)
bhoomi: bhagwan...aaj aapne mere sun li...aaj arjun aur surajji...bhai ko accept karege...
LK: arre bhoomi...yeh tho hona hi tha...
bhoomi: thank u....very much...so much....
(arjun walks into suraj's room...suraj is working on his laptop)
arjun: suraj?
suraj(gets up): arre arjun...aao...
arjun(walking in): suraj...aaj jo bhi kuch hua...uski ke liye....thanx..
suraj: thanx ke koi zaroorat nahin hai...
arjun: nahin...galti mere hai...baar baar main tumhare saath nafrat karta tha....aur...tum baardash karte rahe..
suraj: arjun.....yeh sab choro...forget it...
arjun(stars crying): mujhe maaf kar do....mujhse buhut bada gunnah hua hai...(folds his hands)...mujhe maaf kar do....
suraj(holds his hands): arre...kya ek bhai ko aapne bade bhai se maafi maangtha hai kya?
arjun: suraj...i'm-i'm...sorry...
suraj(tears coming out): it's ok...bhoomi theek kehte thi...buhut ziddi hu tum...
arjun: aaj se...tum mer eliye...koi ordinary suraj-kiran nhaon ho..aaj se...mere liye...ho ek bhai...aaj se main aapko...bhaiyya kahoga...
suraj: ek conditon phar...?
arjun: kya?
suraj: pehle yeh rona baand karo...wipe those tears of yurs...
arjun(smiles): plz.....stay wid us....i need u....plz...
suraj: mere choti bhai ni kaha tho..phir....ok..i'llstay...(both brothers hug each other...)
arjun: i'm lucky 2 have a brother like u...
suraj: koi shaq...mujhse aur better bhai mil sakta hai...
(shaku passes by....and sees both brothers hugging each other)
shaku; arjun...suraj...
arjun: jee mamma..?
shaku: kya hua..?
suraj: ma...arjun aur main...ek doosri ko bhai ki tarha accept kar liye hai..
shaku: sach...aaj main buhut khush hoo...(siddarth comes in)
siddarth: beta...aaj tumne humare liye...support kiya...uske ke liye...thanx karne aaya tha..
suraj: papa....aapko ujhe thanx karne ke liye..koi zaroorat nahin hai..
siddarth: aaj se...tum suraj-kiran nahin...suraj goenka hoo...suraj siddarth goenka....
suraj: thanx papa....(hugs him)

Precap: Mansen and Khushal are furious that Arjun~Suraj are brothers now, meanwhile Suraj decides to stop working with Mansen.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 11:54am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww gr888888888 shirley........u just rocks. Clap
tunna Goldie
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Posted: 12 March 2006 at 5:09am | IP Logged
amazing shirley............ Clap
ur getting more rocking day by day... Wink
its lovely...u don need to ask how it is..
arjun-suraj scene is fab..n i wish suraj did leav mansen's family in saarthi too..
its great... with no shaqs Wink Tongue Smile
Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 March 2006 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Episode 3

(the next day....arjun-suraj come down together)

baisa: aao...nashta karo..
arjun(sitting down): erm..bhavri....nashta ready hai...?
bhoomi: haan....(gives him his breakfast...and sits besides him)
suraj: erm...ma...vo plate deena....
shaku: theek hai..(passes him the plate)
(mamaji is about 2 sit next 2 arjun...but arjun interrupts)
arjun: erm...mamaji...yeh kisi aur ki seat hai..
mamaji: kiski hai?
arjun: bhaiyya...aap ahan mere saath nashta karo...
(suraj sits next 2 arjun....and both have breakfast together...mansen and his family r jealous)
arjun: erm..bhaiyya aaj aap kaam phar jaa rahe hai..?
suraj(remembers that he works wid mansen):nahin...iss baat ko mujhe aap sabse baat karne thi...
siddarth: aise kaise baat hai..beta?
suraj: main abh kakasaheb ki saath kaam nahin kar sakta..
(everyone is shocked)
mansen(shocked): kyun nahin...?
suraj: kyunki....log jo jhuth bolti hai...unki saath kaam karna mere fithrat mein nahin hai...
siddarth: beta...tum chaho...tum arjun ki saath kaam karna...
bhoomi: haan...jhetji..(mansen is shocked 2 hear this)..papa theek keh rahe hai...aap arjun ki saath kaam kare...
arjun: haan bhaiyya...aap mere saath kaam karege..tho buhut mazaa aayega...do bhai...kaam kar rahe hai...
mamaji: yeh jhetji kya hai...?
bhom: arre mamaji...jhet voh hota hai...jo pati ka bada bhai ho...
yuv: matlaab?
bhoomi: matlaab...aapko nahin pata....?
aksh: kya nahin pata?
manasvi: ki..arjun aur suraj ek doosri ko bhai ki tarha accept kar liya hai...
(mansen and everyone r surprised..)
baisa: sach...?
BD: yeh tho...badi khushi ki baat hai...
khushi: khushi tho hoge iss ghar mein...after all...mera anaam jo khushi hai...
manasvi: koi shaq...beta?
khushi: mummy...mere school jaane ka time hogaya hai...
suraj: beta...main aapko drop kar deta doo...
khushi: ok..uncle...
LK: abh..jab arjun aur karan bhai hai...phir durodhan aur shakuni ka kaunsa naya khayl hai..?
(mansen and khushal upstairs)
mansen(angry): samjh nahin aa raha hai...ki arjun aur suraj ki beech mein jo nafrat thi..voh kaise meeth gaye...?
mamaji: jeeja....aap bhi...gussi mein hote hai...jeeja agar voh dono bhai hogaye hai...tho kya hua...phir bhi unko baarbad karna assan hoga...
mansen: voh kaise..?
mamaji: jeeja...bas sirf waqt ki saath dekh thi raho...

(arjun-suraj at work)

suraj: acha...arjun...pata hai...mr. sharma...nai bhoomi ki designs ko buhut ache lage hai...tho tumhe yeh contract theek lagta hai ya nahin?
arjun: bhaiyya..aapko acha feel ho...tho mujhe bhi aisa lagta hai....aapki haar decisions ko main accept kartha hoo...
suraj: voh tho sab theek hai...lekhen...
arjun: hmm....theek hai...half an hour mein ek meeting hoge...lekhen usse pehle...(phone rings)
arjun: ek minute...
suraj: haan sure...
arjun: hello...
bhoomi: haan arjun...kaise ho?
arjun: theek ho..aur tum?
bhoomi: aur jhetji...?
arjun: tumhare jhetji theek hai...phone kyun kiya?
bhoomi: tumhare awax suna chahti thi?
arjun: oh....mere awaz...aise kaunse special quality hai mere awaz mein..
bhoomi: hehehehehehe....arjun...
arjun: yeh hehehehehehe kya hai...acha jaldi karo...mera ek meeting bhi hai...
bhoomaaj ghar jaldi aana...ok?
arjun: kyun?
bhoomi: kyunki...Mrs. Bhoomika Arjun Goenka ni kaha hai..iss liye...
arjun: ooh...tough...i like it....ok..bye...
bhoomi: arre...bye kaise...pehle kuch kaho...
arjun: ka kaho...?
bhoomi: erm....the 3 magic words...
arjun: acha...ok...I....Love....You....bhavri...
bhoomi: awwww....i love u too...
arjun: bas ek baar kaho na...arjun ki saath...
bhoomi: i love u too arjun...
suraj(taps arjun on the shoulder): chale...?
arjun: haan..ok...bhavri...gotta go..bye....(puts the phone down)
suraj: acha...arjun...agar romance khatam hogaya hai..tho phir chale?
arjun: haan chalo..lekhen ek baat pocho bhaiyya?
suraj: haan pocho...
arjun: aap kabhi bhi shaadi nahin karna chahti...
suraj(remembers manasvi): erm....meeting ka waqt hogaya hai..chale?
arjun: kya apni kabhi bhi kisisi pyar kiya hai...? kya aapka dil kisi ki liye tarpata nahin hai..?
suraj: nahin...aisa koi insaan...nahin hai...
arjun: lekhen bhaiyya...main aapko aise akele nahin dekh sakta....mere paas bhavri hai...lekhen aapke paas koi nahin hai...
suraj: hai na...dekho..papa hai..mama hai...aur shruti preeti hai....
arjun: main ek jeevan saathi ki baat kar raha hoo...
suraj: erm..arjun....voh lamha mere zondagi abhi thak nahin aaya...jo mere sapno mein aate hai....usko abhi thak dekha nahin hai....ya phir...pyar ki dastan shoro nahin hui hai....abh chalo na....dhir ho rahe hai...(leaves)
arjun: lekhen...aap kisisi mohabbat karte hai...aur ek din aap unsi milege....(leaves)

Precap: Yuvraj decides to avenge Suraj, as he insulted him. Mamaji controls Yuv by telling him to make use of Suraj's weakness.

Howz dat, ppl?

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