VirMan SS- tere ishq mein..(part 3 updt/ PG 09) - Page 3

Nice story,

sorry guys ..i know i've been late in updating..but next time i'll try to update soon

~*~Part 2~*~

Manvi is heart broken...no...no1 hurt her like she did to herself today..

She never thought she would do something like this to her chep..

But she did...for him..for his better life..

How she wished this day was erased from her life...from his life..

Manvi looking at sky: jab mere liye pyaar bana hi nahi toh..aapne kyun kisiko mujse pyaar karne diya..kyun bhagwaanji..uski kya galati thi...main usey dard main nahi dekh sakti..na ab ,na kabhi...and runs from there

There virat was clueless..why did she abandoned their love

when he very well know she too loved him...

He was left with many unanswered questions in his mind..

Just then he gets a call...

At wadhera house

Preparations was on swing for virens birthday party..

Jeevi is busy with preparations..

Maanvi walks in ...her eyes r swollen

Jeevi:arrey mannu itni dair kahan reh gayi thi..kehke toh gayi abhi aayi aur itni dair lag gayi tujhe..aur virat bhi abhi tak nahi aaya...viren aajayenge..

Maanvi back to her cheery self or dat was just a pretention for her sis

Mannu:arrey dii main bhi kuch surprise tayyar karne gayi thi..aakhir wo mere jiju hai...

Jeevi:haan haan pata hai..par ab meri madad to kar de..

Virat walks in...

Jeevi:virat bhi aagaya...virat tumne pata karliya hai na viren ki flight time par hai..

Virat : jii bhabhi...

Jeevi:mannu tu jaldi jaldi kar na...

Mannu:haan di (her voice almost cracking)...dii main toh bhool hi gayi...wo vanshika aunty ne mujhe kuch kaam diya tha..main pehle wo pura kar aati hoon...she left dat place

Was she avoiding him..yes she was..running away from him..from herself

Virat tried to distract himself... but much to his annoyance it was an unsuccessful attempt

Every word of her echoing in his ears..

Every word of her was like some1 was stabbing his heart with rusted daggers

It was a failed attempt for maanvi too..

She ran to the terrace..

Mannu:I cant..i cant stop myself  from loving him...,I cant give him pain..i cant see pain in those lively eyes..which only expects love in return..bhagwaanji..plzz uska dard kam kardijiye please

Jeevi comes to the terrace searching maanvi..

Jeevi:arrey mannu tu yahan hai...main tujhe saare ghar main dhoondh rahi thi..wo..

Just then jeevi realize maanvi moisten eyes

Jeevi:mannu kya huwa?? Tu ro rahi thi??

Maanvi turns avoiding eye contact with jeevi..

Mannu:dii main nahi ro rahi ..aap bhi na kuch bhi haan..

Jeevi:mannu tu mujhse kuch chupa toh nahi  rahi hai na..tu jabse chandigarh aayi hai tab se kuch alag behave kar rahi hai..

Manvi trying  to hold back her pain nd tears.

Mannu:aisa kabhi huwa hai di ..main aapse kuch chupaon..aur badle huwe toh aap ho..aap toh wadhera ho gaye ho..niyam kanoon..

Jeevi:mannu..

Mannu:di aap yahan kya kar rahe ho..aapne sab recheck kar liya ahi na..

Manvi :chalo dii bahut kaam baki hai..aur aap lag gaye gappe lagane main..

Jeevi thinks something is wrong she hav to talk to mannu..but for now she didn't say anything..

They both walk to the hall..

Where virat is busy on the call he looks worried

Manvi stood there staring at virat

After ending the call he turns to meet her eyes

They stood their looking at each other for good few minutes

His eyes were full of pain as well as complain ,manvi she just couldn't understand the reason behind his complaining eyes..

Jeevi looks at this two broken hearts and is confirmed something is definitely wrong..swamini was coming towards hall..jeevi didnnt wanted these cute people in her life to run into some other problem so she distracted them

Jeevi:virat..

Manvi virat broke their eyelock with jeevik calling him

Jeevi:wo..viren aatey hi honge tum plz airport chaler jao unhe receive karne..aur mannu tu ready hoja guests aatey hi honge..yahan par main dekh loongi..

Virat and manvi nods at jeevi's words and leaves that place

Party

:viren reached home and got a beautiful surpise from his wife and his family

Party was just like any another of wadhera do's

Calm and sophisticated in swamini's words

Just then jeevika get a call from beeji

Beeji first wishes viren and bless him

Beeji sounded little serious with her tone

Beeji:jeevika bte hume aap se kuch zaroori baat karni hai..

Jeevi:kya hua beeji sab thik hai na..

Beeji:haan beta sab thik hai..wo baat darasal manvi ke hai..

Jeevi:mannu?? Beeji mannu ne yahan koi gadbad nahi ki hai aap pareshan math hoiye..

Beeji:haan beta hum jante hai par shayad manvi ne tumhe unka ek faisla nahi bataya hoga..

Jeevi:faisla kaisa faisla beeji..jabse aayi hai wo kuch alag behave kar arhi ahi..jab bhi main kuch poochon toh wo mujhe taal rahi hai..

Beeji:haan beta wo manvi ne..

Jeevi:manvi ne kya beeji??

Beeji:manvi ne shaadi karne ka faisla liya ahi..

Jeevi:shaadi ka faisla achanak..

Beeji:wo dr.manan se shaadi karna chahti hai..

Jeevi shocked!!

Just then vanshika calls jeevika..

Jeevi:beeji ..main aapse baad main baat karti hoon

Jeevi goes with vanshika

Jeevika is blank about wat she heard just now..she keeps a fake smile..

After dat she was about to go and talk to manvi about this right then

When heard viren talking o virat..

Viren:toh baat kiya tune apni "maahi" yane ki humari saali saheba manvi se..propose kiya ussey..

After hearing this jeevika was shell shocked!!!

Prev:  Part 1

Next:PART 3

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Edited by sweetshab - 12 years ago

first me ... first me... Edited by me.san - 12 years ago

Nice! do PM me wen u cont! 😊

Hey this is the first time I read your work and I must say this is amazing!!! Fabulous! Pls continue soon and add me in your PM list :)) thanks!! :))

AWESOME!!!! plzz PM me when u nex update!!!

update soon! and plz pm me when u update :)

Awesome SS, I loved it. Read both part 1 & 2 together and wonder how I missed it earlier. Please continue and PM me when you update. 😊

This was kind of sad but very good, keep it p and please PM me

ya me too was wondering how i missed it...i mean y is she not accepting virat???(i know u hav answers but i was just curious)