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This content was originally posted by: .Lena.

<div align="center"><font size="4" color="#FF0033" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I'm removing it because I'm planning to submit it for a scholarship contest. It's going to be hard but I'm going to submit it to see if I can get money for college. 😊
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Best of luck dear. Both of them is awesome

This content was originally posted by: misssmily

All the best Lena ! 😳
But am disapointed i never came across them... Would have loved to read them !

Anyway hope u'll b successfull !  😊

An idea just came into my mind, i didn't read them therefore i dnt know how gud they are...BUT if u want me to read them to give u detailed analyses and critics to improve them before submitting i'll b more than happy to help !  😳

Let me know if u want to, i'll pm u my email address... it's just a suggestion rest is up to u !

Love ya ! 🤗

OH MY FREAKING FREAKING GOSH!!
THAT WOULD BE AWESOME. 😃😃
I need as much edits as possible, but crtiques for most part, even if it is not nice. 😆

Wow Lena you're submitting the OS' for a scholarship contest 😳
That's amazing, I am sure you'll win, your writing is mesmerising
All the best 🤗

This content was originally posted by: .Lena.

OH MY FREAKING FREAKING GOSH!!
THAT WOULD BE AWESOME. 😃😃
I need as much edits as possible, but crtiques for most part, even if it is not nice. 😆

Ok then i've pmed you my email adr , send me ur work !
And give  2 or 3 days...hope that will b ok... coz am a bit bsy nowadays !
But will b happy to help u !

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Edited by .Lena. - 10 years ago

What. An. Update!

So Geet finally knows Maan & MSK are the same person. But as ever he's holding back because he's forbidden to fall in love with her. Geet is so heartbroken, poor soul :(

I sense bad vibes about Yash...

Yay Maan's POV is next! I love reading his POV 😳

The very best of luck for your scholarship contest which I'm positive you'll win anyway 🤗



- edit, first to comment, yay! 😆Edited by walkintomylifex - 12 years ago

[QUOTE=.Lena.]

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RECAP: Geet misses Maan desperately even though she seems happy with Yash. As her desperation overwhelms her, Geet fakes her suicide to irk Maan and reveal his hidden identity.

.CHAPTER. .SIXTEEN.

The inevitable questions arise

When the flames consume me

I question your shaded piety

I question your fraught tenacity

HEY LENA...

SAD UPDATE FROM GEET'S POV. ITS GUD SHE HAS GOT TO KNOW THAT HER MAAN AND MSK ARE THE SAME. THIS WAS VERY IMPORTANT. OH MY GOD THE CONSTANT REJECTION IS NOT GOING TO HELP MAAN IN PROTECTING HER.

NOW SHE HAS SO MANY QUESTIONS IN HER MIND...HOPE MAAN OPENS UP IN FRONT OF HER. WAITING FOR MAAN'S POV.

SHE IS HEARTBROKEN...HOPE MAAN REALISES THAT AND INDIRECTLY HELPS HER OUT OF THIS DEJECTION.

I DONT KNOW..I DONT LIKE YASH...BAD VIBES...

ALL THE BEST...TARNISHED INNOCENCE WAS SUPERB...THREEWAY WAS EXCELLENT. I HAD READ IT IN ONE GO...HOPE U GAIN SUCCESS.

LUV... JAANS/JANAKI

I feel so bad for Geet, but what is Maan protecting geet from? Its really getting intressting. Yay Maan's prove next update finally we will get to know a bit more

Can I get a link to your other work? Please PM me

awesome update
lovedit