OMG it was sooo good!!! loved it. plz rite more :D also i've always imagined him having to shut her up with a kiss...so puurrfect!!! u a gr8 writerEdited by moonstruck - 12 years ago
This was so good! I loved how Viren and Jeevika were in on everything, and were accomplices in this confession. And I found the Shrek analogy absolutely hilarious!
You're such a good writer - your writing has action, emotion and humour; in short, your writing has everything! π
...i am lost for words...you are sooo AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it! the way u wrote was just brilliant! everything just flowed so well, n i could just imagine it all so clearly! i was already in love with virman and now i love them even more!!! thank you so much for this n please write more! continue with this please, i really wanna noe what will happen next π you are fab!love u!
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