VirMan OS: Confessions of Chep and Bandariya - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG it was sooo good!!! loved it. plz rite more :D also i've always imagined him having to shut her up with a kiss...so puurrfect!!! u a gr8 writerEdited by moonstruck - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was so good! I loved how Viren and Jeevika were in on everything, and were accomplices in this confession. And I found the Shrek analogy absolutely hilarious!
 
You're such a good writer - your writing has action, emotion and humour; in short, your writing has everything! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
You guys are amazing πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—
I've recieved few PMs, and few you have asked me on this thread to continue it...shall I? I mean, it was meant to be a OS...πŸ˜†
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes plz plz continue it πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
SO CUTE <3 loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Confession.. πŸ‘.. Plz PM me if your continuing with this one..πŸ˜ƒ
gr8 update.. πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!!!!πŸ˜† ths ws sooo freaking awesum!!!!!
luvd it mahn!!! do write more OS's!!! 
nd yeah, u write damn well, no doubt abt thatπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
...i am lost for words...you are sooo AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it! the way u wrote was just brilliant! everything just flowed so well, n i could just imagine it all so clearly! i was already in love with virman and now i love them even more!!! thank you so much for this n please write more! continue with this please, i really wanna noe what will happen next πŸ˜Š you are fab!love u!
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME!!!!
Oh i loved dis OS so much..had al d elements, fun, humor, passion, romance...everything..perfect..plz do write more..n mre often..n soon..
LOL..too many demands..πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing , I loved it. Virat and Manvi scenes like this in real, would make all our hearts stop.